Poems About Emotions Seeking Honest Critique
#emotions
Pete_25
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 11:25am
25th Sep 2024 11:25am
Vision
Come and take my hand
See my inner vision
I'll help you understand
A whole new definition
We will paint the sky
Atmospheric deep
Forever soaring high
No climb will be too steep
See my inner vision
I'll help you understand
A whole new definition
We will paint the sky
Atmospheric deep
Forever soaring high
No climb will be too steep
#emotions
#hope
#inspirational #love
#inspirational #love
198 reads
14 Comments
drone
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 9:19am
25th Sep 2024 9:19am
Take Me Home
Take me home
Stepping stones
To the place
I wonna be
Quantum vibrations
Riding the ripples
To the zone
Of a world
I do not see
Stepping stones
Take me Home
Stepping stones
To the place
I wonna be
Quantum vibrations
Riding the ripples
To the zone
Of a world
I do not see
Stepping stones
Take me Home
#courage
#emotions
#strength
109 reads
0 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
24th Sep 2024 6:07pm
24th Sep 2024 6:07pm
Where Poesy Resides.
Where Poesy Resides.
Oh! how the view is seizing !!
When the sun is rising
And the Earth is praising
The Beauty of the lord
When Summer is blazing
And the heat is dazing
Cheerful cicadas sizzling
Arpeggios tunes on the cord
Flat meadows where lazing
Herds and cattles grazing
Shepherds never stressing
Keeping zen eyes on the herds
And then comes Autumn
Acid and sour like lemon
Bearing a languid boredom
A dirge sung post mortem
Time for a waltzing...
Oh! how the view is seizing !!
When the sun is rising
And the Earth is praising
The Beauty of the lord
When Summer is blazing
And the heat is dazing
Cheerful cicadas sizzling
Arpeggios tunes on the cord
Flat meadows where lazing
Herds and cattles grazing
Shepherds never stressing
Keeping zen eyes on the herds
And then comes Autumn
Acid and sour like lemon
Bearing a languid boredom
A dirge sung post mortem
Time for a waltzing...
#admiration
#emotions
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
90 reads
6 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
24th Sep 2024 4:05am
24th Sep 2024 4:05am
Quiet Noise
The quiet is so noisy
The silence kills me
Noisy in the silence
My demon runs free
Can’t hear a pin drop
Cascading rhythm in my head
Hear a bird sing his symphony
Cars ramble by destroy the silence
Noise is in my brain I stumble to get up
Silence when I need noise the most
Can’t hear anything
So I look to make a racket
Silence only comes to one in a casket
The silence kills me
Noisy in the silence
My demon runs free
Can’t hear a pin drop
Cascading rhythm in my head
Hear a bird sing his symphony
Cars ramble by destroy the silence
Noise is in my brain I stumble to get up
Silence when I need noise the most
Can’t hear anything
So I look to make a racket
Silence only comes to one in a casket
#emotions
#inspirational
#kindness #redemption
#kindness #redemption
134 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
23rd Sep 2024 5:15pm
23rd Sep 2024 5:15pm
Yellows
In a world
where sight is but a dream,
there lived souls who saw
through bright hearts.
They felt the warmth
of the sun's embrace
and painted life with
a gentle grace.
Yellow, a shade they could not see,
but in their minds it danced so freely.
A color of joy, of hope and light,
it whispered secrets in the night.
Through their fingertips they traced the dawn,
with each touch a new day was born.
The scent of flowers, the taste of spring,
in the essence of yellow, their spirits sang. ...
where sight is but a dream,
there lived souls who saw
through bright hearts.
They felt the warmth
of the sun's embrace
and painted life with
a gentle grace.
Yellow, a shade they could not see,
but in their minds it danced so freely.
A color of joy, of hope and light,
it whispered secrets in the night.
Through their fingertips they traced the dawn,
with each touch a new day was born.
The scent of flowers, the taste of spring,
in the essence of yellow, their spirits sang. ...
#admiration
#emotions
#redemption
#respect
#strength
133 reads
6 Comments
drone
Poem Published
23rd Sep 2024 8:09am
23rd Sep 2024 8:09am
Undescribable
I can
Feel it
I no longer
Have to picture it
The tingling vibrations
The strange accasions
The indescribable
Patterns and lights
Behind my eyes
Before I sleep
Sometimes
The silent whispering
In my mind
Welcome
To the field
That's trying
To get to know
Who i Am
Feel it
I no longer
Have to picture it
The tingling vibrations
The strange accasions
The indescribable
Patterns and lights
Behind my eyes
Before I sleep
Sometimes
The silent whispering
In my mind
Welcome
To the field
That's trying
To get to know
Who i Am
#courage
#emotions
#inspirational #respect
#inspirational #respect
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0 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2024 6:27pm
22nd Sep 2024 6:27pm
My Birthday
Merry living fully with grace and dignity
Years of age might be quite hidden in me
Bid to recognise the weight of Life and people on me
Impatient to unfold all that is not known to me
Refusing the law of Nature deprives the soul of harmony
Time can chain the body while the soul can be free
How dare I defy what is divine and so sacred to me
Dear is the one in the mirror only with my heart I can see
“Age I Abhor”, that’s Shakespeare! Not me
Yearning over youth blinds the sight to all the wonders age can see.
Years of age might be quite hidden in me
Bid to recognise the weight of Life and people on me
Impatient to unfold all that is not known to me
Refusing the law of Nature deprives the soul of harmony
Time can chain the body while the soul can be free
How dare I defy what is divine and so sacred to me
Dear is the one in the mirror only with my heart I can see
“Age I Abhor”, that’s Shakespeare! Not me
Yearning over youth blinds the sight to all the wonders age can see.
#courage
#emotions
#gratitude
#hope
#strength
122 reads
9 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2024 1:12pm
22nd Sep 2024 1:12pm
A Book Perfume
A book perfume
the childhood times, paper planes, origami boats,
the rains take away our papers, waterborne
kids in the rains, immune naturally against pains
too much communion to feel the least variation in tones
one voice for a team of neighbour mates, with common whims
long summer vacations, spent in swamps, in mountains
in deep forests, looking for rare birds species,
the hot summer nights, chasing bats in dirty ponds
and moonlit nights,...
the childhood times, paper planes, origami boats,
the rains take away our papers, waterborne
kids in the rains, immune naturally against pains
too much communion to feel the least variation in tones
one voice for a team of neighbour mates, with common whims
long summer vacations, spent in swamps, in mountains
in deep forests, looking for rare birds species,
the hot summer nights, chasing bats in dirty ponds
and moonlit nights,...
#emotions
#happiness
#kindness
#motivational
#respect
110 reads
4 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
21st Sep 2024 12:22pm
21st Sep 2024 12:22pm
Listen To The Falling Rain
Like a piano strokes on my roof
Oh, the rain sounds like a melody !
Under crimson-tiles water proof
Reviving the olden times simplicity
Awakened in the mid somber night
Listening to a showering Euphory
With each key, nodes come untight
Taken far away from mundane misery
Winter gently tapping on my roof
Telling the story of the hungry wolf
When in days of fairy tale and yore
Grandma used to spin a happy folklore
Under the warm flank of night i snug
Let the dripping points write their poesy
Let...
Oh, the rain sounds like a melody !
Under crimson-tiles water proof
Reviving the olden times simplicity
Awakened in the mid somber night
Listening to a showering Euphory
With each key, nodes come untight
Taken far away from mundane misery
Winter gently tapping on my roof
Telling the story of the hungry wolf
When in days of fairy tale and yore
Grandma used to spin a happy folklore
Under the warm flank of night i snug
Let the dripping points write their poesy
Let...
#emotions
#happiness
#inspirational
#kindness
#motivational
98 reads
6 Comments
krasaldo
Aldo Kraas
Aldo Kraas
Poem Published
20th Sep 2024 3:54pm
20th Sep 2024 3:54pm
I am coming back
I am coming back
To reality now
Because for a long time now
I was living in my dream world
I was feeling safe
In my dream world
I didn't want to leave my dream world
People told me that I was a crazy person
To live in my dream world
I had lots of peace in my dream world
That I needed badly
To reality now
Because for a long time now
I was living in my dream world
I was feeling safe
In my dream world
I didn't want to leave my dream world
People told me that I was a crazy person
To live in my dream world
I had lots of peace in my dream world
That I needed badly
#courage
#emotions
#forgiveness
#motivational
#redemption
80 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
20th Sep 2024 7:59am
20th Sep 2024 7:59am
Roar!
Breathe me in
Unlock that power
Here on in
My love will shower
I'll heal your pain
Fill your nights
Take your strain
This heart invites
Piece by piece
I'll restore
Let me hear
That mighty ROAR!
Unlock that power
Here on in
My love will shower
I'll heal your pain
Fill your nights
Take your strain
This heart invites
Piece by piece
I'll restore
Let me hear
That mighty ROAR!
#courage
#emotions
#hope
#inspirational
#love
205 reads
10 Comments
eljustignoreyou
John Daliva
John Daliva
Poem Published
20th Sep 2024 00:57am
20th Sep 2024 00:57am
Digital Embrace and Love Across Screens
In the last three years, with you by my side,
I never imagined we’d converse through screens so wide.
Morning, night, and after, holding you was my dream,
Now it remains a vision, a distant gleam.
This is the consequence of my weakness,
Of being faint-hearted, of choosing to flee.
Now I stare at you, a hundred times smaller,
On this little device, not what it used to be.
Yet seeing you still gives me butterflies,
My heart skips beats, like a bird that flies.
Though we’re apart, and dreams seem far,
Your presence on...
I never imagined we’d converse through screens so wide.
Morning, night, and after, holding you was my dream,
Now it remains a vision, a distant gleam.
This is the consequence of my weakness,
Of being faint-hearted, of choosing to flee.
Now I stare at you, a hundred times smaller,
On this little device, not what it used to be.
Yet seeing you still gives me butterflies,
My heart skips beats, like a bird that flies.
Though we’re apart, and dreams seem far,
Your presence on...
#admiration
#courage
#emotions
#strength
#TimeHeals
111 reads
1 Comment
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