Poems About Emotions Seeking Honest Critique
#emotions
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 5:55pm
8th Oct 2024 5:55pm
About me
About me
I am somebody special
That was made
By my father
With his holy hands
A long time ago
And also along
Time ago
My father had
Placed me to live
Here on earth
I love living on earth
My beautiful life
Every single day
I care about
The way my friends
Love me
Also my friends
Are my family
I trust my friends
And I know that
There will be always around
For me
Even when I am sick
I just don’t like
Being sick
I try to take good care
Of my health
Every...
I am somebody special
That was made
By my father
With his holy hands
A long time ago
And also along
Time ago
My father had
Placed me to live
Here on earth
I love living on earth
My beautiful life
Every single day
I care about
The way my friends
Love me
Also my friends
Are my family
I trust my friends
And I know that
There will be always around
For me
Even when I am sick
I just don’t like
Being sick
I try to take good care
Of my health
Every...
#admiration
#emotions
#kindness
#love
#respect
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 1:43am
6th Oct 2024 1:43am
Please Let Me Be Your Virus
Ohh lovely I have decided that I wanted to be your virus
I'm already attached to you like your skin is attached to every muscle and sinew
I'm going to penetrate and get deep into the core of that grey matter of yours
Just let me pop the coating on that cell right there and let me infiltrate you dear
ohh I understand you wanna keep your gene’s intact
but we can't have that can we?
No we cannot have that.
Replication is the core of creation, and I want to replicate in you
Once it's done, we can...
I'm already attached to you like your skin is attached to every muscle and sinew
I'm going to penetrate and get deep into the core of that grey matter of yours
Just let me pop the coating on that cell right there and let me infiltrate you dear
ohh I understand you wanna keep your gene’s intact
but we can't have that can we?
No we cannot have that.
Replication is the core of creation, and I want to replicate in you
Once it's done, we can...
#emotions
#motivational
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15 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2024 3:14pm
2nd Oct 2024 3:14pm
Simplicity And Spiritual Tranquility
simplicity and spiritual tranquility
come join me up onto the pastures
and stop chewing on your disaster
free that burdened soul, escape
take a broad smile, leave that gape
****
hear the baa of the fleecy sheep
scent the smell of the morning dew
get closer, hear the crunch as they eat
you will get a feeling heavenly new
****
take your self out into the hills
you will surely regret your past
you rot inside, intoxicated by pills
a getaway resort to erase the rust
****
can't you...
come join me up onto the pastures
and stop chewing on your disaster
free that burdened soul, escape
take a broad smile, leave that gape
****
hear the baa of the fleecy sheep
scent the smell of the morning dew
get closer, hear the crunch as they eat
you will get a feeling heavenly new
****
take your self out into the hills
you will surely regret your past
you rot inside, intoxicated by pills
a getaway resort to erase the rust
****
can't you...
#emotions
#happiness
#inspirational
#kindness
#motivational
112 reads
4 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2024 9:30am
2nd Oct 2024 9:30am
Redefine
Deep inside, don't understand
Eyes shut wide, ears expand
Signals sail upon cloud nine
Hear the bangs, echoes mime
Area grey, what's that tune?
Hysteria sways, I'll be back soon
Touch the sky, life rewinds
Dreamland spies... redefine
Eyes shut wide, ears expand
Signals sail upon cloud nine
Hear the bangs, echoes mime
Area grey, what's that tune?
Hysteria sways, I'll be back soon
Touch the sky, life rewinds
Dreamland spies... redefine
#emotions
152 reads
12 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
30th Sep 2024 10:13pm
30th Sep 2024 10:13pm
Thank You
Thank you
How I keep saying
Deep gratitude showing
Generosity, kindness, beauty
The wonder and joy of giving..
What would I consider or measure
The value of what is received, the feeling of pleasure
Unable to weigh or count
What is given, a flowing fount..
Thank you
A word too much used and said
Nothing equal back could be paid
Just the sweet taste in hearts we pass to mankind
And a legacy for Humanity of being good and kind..
Thank you
How I keep believing
In words converted to...
How I keep saying
Deep gratitude showing
Generosity, kindness, beauty
The wonder and joy of giving..
What would I consider or measure
The value of what is received, the feeling of pleasure
Unable to weigh or count
What is given, a flowing fount..
Thank you
A word too much used and said
Nothing equal back could be paid
Just the sweet taste in hearts we pass to mankind
And a legacy for Humanity of being good and kind..
Thank you
How I keep believing
In words converted to...
#emotions
#gratitude
#kindness
#love
#respect
144 reads
8 Comments
Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
30th Sep 2024 7:13pm
30th Sep 2024 7:13pm
RAIN
INSIDE ROAR
RAIN
The first time I saw you running in the rain
I haven't seen you in a long time.
For the first time I felt everything twisting inside me.
And then suddenly, I offered my umbrella.
The rain washed everything away and there you were
so defenseless
The rain dances on your face
I would drown in your eyes
Your hands say drink from my fingers.
I swallow from your palms.
Rec: You look like you stepped out of a river,
you let your hair drift with the current.
your hand is warm
i want to be...
RAIN
The first time I saw you running in the rain
I haven't seen you in a long time.
For the first time I felt everything twisting inside me.
And then suddenly, I offered my umbrella.
The rain washed everything away and there you were
so defenseless
The rain dances on your face
I would drown in your eyes
Your hands say drink from my fingers.
I swallow from your palms.
Rec: You look like you stepped out of a river,
you let your hair drift with the current.
your hand is warm
i want to be...
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
#respect
128 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
30th Sep 2024 10:17am
30th Sep 2024 10:17am
Dancing Dreams
Dancing dreams
Hypnotic trips
Laser beams
Mind eclipse
Brain imports
Tics revamp
Cells export
Thoughts decamp
Hypnotic trips
Laser beams
Mind eclipse
Brain imports
Tics revamp
Cells export
Thoughts decamp
#emotions
160 reads
8 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
29th Sep 2024 11:21am
29th Sep 2024 11:21am
Star
Constellations
Side by side
Illuminating
Far and wide
Souls emerge
Time displays
So immersed
Unafraid
Side by side
Illuminating
Far and wide
Souls emerge
Time displays
So immersed
Unafraid
#emotions
#love
201 reads
10 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
29th Sep 2024 4:52am
29th Sep 2024 4:52am
mr guitar man
Notes and chords have become my second language and,
more often than not, that vocabulary expresses what I feel
when language fails me.”—Larry Burkett
his strings have more to say
than his pursed lips ever did
i sit and watch him play,
for the talent that he hid:
superiorer in silence than in sound.
his fingers are his tongue,
and his strings the orator,
whose words are fiercely strung
like a guileless praedator, ...
more often than not, that vocabulary expresses what I feel
when language fails me.”—Larry Burkett
his strings have more to say
than his pursed lips ever did
i sit and watch him play,
for the talent that he hid:
superiorer in silence than in sound.
his fingers are his tongue,
and his strings the orator,
whose words are fiercely strung
like a guileless praedator, ...
#emotional
#emotions
#guitars
#music
#strength
85 reads
2 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 6:23pm
28th Sep 2024 6:23pm
The Call Of The Fair Wisdom
you make yourself too much sick
as, unintentionally you let leak
your narcissistic, egoistic trick
will surely have the worse on you
you show so much vulnerability
you expose a spiritual fragility
and you think it is a curability
what you spill is an alibi against you
you want to be the focal limelight
when you lay your sorrow and plight
and you expect them to give a light
to show you the way of your healing
you hide behind metaphoric writing
in dark word,...
as, unintentionally you let leak
your narcissistic, egoistic trick
will surely have the worse on you
you show so much vulnerability
you expose a spiritual fragility
and you think it is a curability
what you spill is an alibi against you
you want to be the focal limelight
when you lay your sorrow and plight
and you expect them to give a light
to show you the way of your healing
you hide behind metaphoric writing
in dark word,...
#courage
#emotions
#inspirational
#motivational
#respect
110 reads
1 Comment
eljustignoreyou
John Daliva
John Daliva
Poem Published
26th Sep 2024 2:44am
26th Sep 2024 2:44am
Last words and closed doors (Light Version)
I never imagined, on the day I knew,
How deeply I wanted you, how much I grew.
But you had moved on, found your way,
And I cherish the memories of our shared days.
Regret fades, replaced by light,
For the love we had, the moments bright.
Seeing you thrive, your joy so clear,
Fills my heart with warmth, my dear.
On the day I realized what I must do,
To open my heart, to be true.
Though our paths diverged, our spirits soar,
Our story lives on, forevermore.
Our “us,” what we built with care,
A love so...
How deeply I wanted you, how much I grew.
But you had moved on, found your way,
And I cherish the memories of our shared days.
Regret fades, replaced by light,
For the love we had, the moments bright.
Seeing you thrive, your joy so clear,
Fills my heart with warmth, my dear.
On the day I realized what I must do,
To open my heart, to be true.
Though our paths diverged, our spirits soar,
Our story lives on, forevermore.
Our “us,” what we built with care,
A love so...
#emotions
#gratitude
#happiness
#hope
#TimeHeals
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0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 11:25am
25th Sep 2024 11:25am
Vision
Come and take my hand
See my inner vision
I'll help you understand
A whole new definition
We will paint the sky
Atmospheric deep
Forever soaring high
No climb will be too steep
See my inner vision
I'll help you understand
A whole new definition
We will paint the sky
Atmospheric deep
Forever soaring high
No climb will be too steep
#emotions
#hope
#inspirational #love
#inspirational #love
197 reads
14 Comments
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