Poems About Emotions Seeking Honest Critique
#emotions
drone
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 1:36pm
13th Oct 2024 1:36pm
Dementia
Ain't no beauty
When your
Gone
I flat line every
Day
Ain't no beauty when you're Gone
My life just carrys on
And it always Fades
To Gray
I pray every
Day
That you'll come back To Stay
I flat line every day
My life just turns to gray
Ain't no beauty
When your
Gone
When your
Gone
I flat line every
Day
Ain't no beauty when you're Gone
My life just carrys on
And it always Fades
To Gray
I pray every
Day
That you'll come back To Stay
I flat line every day
My life just turns to gray
Ain't no beauty
When your
Gone
#bittersweet
#emotions
#love #sadness
#love #sadness
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 4:26am
13th Oct 2024 4:26am
Attributes of Mars Incarnate
Valor
The first of virtues, bright as flame
A spirit born to carve a name
Through battles fierce and trials dire
Valor stands, a golden fire
It knows no fear, it bends no knee
For in its heart, the soul is free
A crown of light upon the brow
The warrior’s pledge, the sacred vow
Fury
A tempest wild, the god’s own breath
The storm that shakes the walls of death
Fury rages, swift and true
Its fire is blood, its lightnings flew
Yet in its heart, the truth concealed
That through destruction, strength is healed
A...
The first of virtues, bright as flame
A spirit born to carve a name
Through battles fierce and trials dire
Valor stands, a golden fire
It knows no fear, it bends no knee
For in its heart, the soul is free
A crown of light upon the brow
The warrior’s pledge, the sacred vow
Fury
A tempest wild, the god’s own breath
The storm that shakes the walls of death
Fury rages, swift and true
Its fire is blood, its lightnings flew
Yet in its heart, the truth concealed
That through destruction, strength is healed
A...
#emotions
#military
#rhyming
#tradition
#war
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InDreamz
Poem Published
12th Oct 2024 9:22pm
12th Oct 2024 9:22pm
Stress Busters
Whenever he is
under stress
she offers him a pair
of her soft ,squishy assets
which he loves to press
and gets de-stressed
Sometimes it's her butts
sometimes her breasts
Well, it always depends on his
level of stress ;)
under stress
she offers him a pair
of her soft ,squishy assets
which he loves to press
and gets de-stressed
Sometimes it's her butts
sometimes her breasts
Well, it always depends on his
level of stress ;)
#emotions
#erotic
#minimalist #funny
#minimalist #funny
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oldmanG
Poem Published
12th Oct 2024 4:58am
12th Oct 2024 4:58am
Laugh Think Cry
Laugh think and cry every day
You don’t get to decide where it ends
But your life spirit is incandescent
No one can tell you you have 30 seconds
You laugh and curse at him in Italian
As you work the crowd with your words and wit
You don’t get to decide where it ends
But your life spirit is incandescent
No one can tell you you have 30 seconds
You laugh and curse at him in Italian
As you work the crowd with your words and wit
#courage
#emotions
#gratitude
#happiness
#motivational
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MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 10:31pm
11th Oct 2024 10:31pm
The Rose
Do you remember the day I got a rose from you?
I was so young, how could I value the very you?
I thought the knight I had in mind was not you.
You didn't unveil for me what you deeply knew.
You gave me that rose and no words came from you.
I shivered inside and shy tears blurred my view.
Your rose bloomed and I smelled the very essence of you.
I now embrace your beauty, my knight, that's you.
A blessing from God in my life having you.
I was so young, how could I value the very you?
I thought the knight I had in mind was not you.
You didn't unveil for me what you deeply knew.
You gave me that rose and no words came from you.
I shivered inside and shy tears blurred my view.
Your rose bloomed and I smelled the very essence of you.
I now embrace your beauty, my knight, that's you.
A blessing from God in my life having you.
#admiration
#emotions
#happiness
#kindness
#love
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oldmanG
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 8:05pm
11th Oct 2024 8:05pm
Ripples
Ripples on a pond
Mind doesn’t respond to nature in you
Center mind body your vertebral
Silence Stills the evil in my spirit
Hear the ring of peaceful
Tapping in a bowl that resembles me
Clear your mind don’t think about you
Cerebral in your core
Ripples run around they don’t define you
Find a corner to put all this disorder
Into view what does it mean to me
It leans into my being my desires
They ripple on the pond
It leans into my desires
...
Mind doesn’t respond to nature in you
Center mind body your vertebral
Silence Stills the evil in my spirit
Hear the ring of peaceful
Tapping in a bowl that resembles me
Clear your mind don’t think about you
Cerebral in your core
Ripples run around they don’t define you
Find a corner to put all this disorder
Into view what does it mean to me
It leans into my being my desires
They ripple on the pond
It leans into my desires
...
#emotions
#nature
#SelfReflection
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poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 1:27pm
11th Oct 2024 1:27pm
In Th Wake Of Summer
The sky is blue, blue indigo, largely swept with a cotton brush of cloud,
as the wind gently comes into the scene, has given the canvas a spiritual feel,
Heaven is present, past and future,
This very time is reminiscent of some old Autumn, with a sun like lemon,
that pours down, tasting of sour venom, and leaves a scar deep into the bone,
This is Autumn, " that Fall" to its deepest bottom, and fathoms the soul of that man,
that child now adult, in the clasp of his boyhood memories.
The time is quite about a mile from the...
as the wind gently comes into the scene, has given the canvas a spiritual feel,
Heaven is present, past and future,
This very time is reminiscent of some old Autumn, with a sun like lemon,
that pours down, tasting of sour venom, and leaves a scar deep into the bone,
This is Autumn, " that Fall" to its deepest bottom, and fathoms the soul of that man,
that child now adult, in the clasp of his boyhood memories.
The time is quite about a mile from the...
#emotions
#inspirational
#motivational
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 7:52pm
9th Oct 2024 7:52pm
The loser takes it all
The loser takes it all
I been playing crazy 8 with my friends
They had won every game
I played with them
I am not good in playing crazy 8
They are very good
I must say that I am the loser
And the loser takes it all
I play the game by its rules
I never cheat on playing the game
I been playing crazy 8 with my friends
They had won every game
I played with them
I am not good in playing crazy 8
They are very good
I must say that I am the loser
And the loser takes it all
I play the game by its rules
I never cheat on playing the game
#admiration
#emotions
#gratitude
#kindness
#redemption
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 11:52am
9th Oct 2024 11:52am
Toronto
Now that the day ended
The sun went down
And I saw the most beautiful
Sunset
And finally, the night arrived fast
At midnight
The light went out
And also, the traffic on the road
Had died down
And Toronto was quiet now
Also, there is no body walking
At midnight in the street
I hope all the people are sleeping
In their beds at midnight
Also, I know that the night is very long
Because God made the night that way
For us to sleep
Also, God made the four seasons for us
To live in it
Now we are at the end...
The sun went down
And I saw the most beautiful
Sunset
And finally, the night arrived fast
At midnight
The light went out
And also, the traffic on the road
Had died down
And Toronto was quiet now
Also, there is no body walking
At midnight in the street
I hope all the people are sleeping
In their beds at midnight
Also, I know that the night is very long
Because God made the night that way
For us to sleep
Also, God made the four seasons for us
To live in it
Now we are at the end...
#courage
#emotions
#kindness
#love
#TimeHeals
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 1:50am
9th Oct 2024 1:50am
2837 sonata
Now that he is growing up
He doesn’t stay home very much
Because he is out all the time
And he is afraid that he will miss out
In his life
I say that is understandable for him and me
Even though life is short
He doesn’t stay home very much
Because he is out all the time
And he is afraid that he will miss out
In his life
I say that is understandable for him and me
Even though life is short
#emotions
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#hope
#inspirational
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 5:55pm
8th Oct 2024 5:55pm
About me
About me
I am somebody special
That was made
By my father
With his holy hands
A long time ago
And also along
Time ago
My father had
Placed me to live
Here on earth
I love living on earth
My beautiful life
Every single day
I care about
The way my friends
Love me
Also my friends
Are my family
I trust my friends
And I know that
There will be always around
For me
Even when I am sick
I just don’t like
Being sick
I try to take good care
Of my health
Every...
I am somebody special
That was made
By my father
With his holy hands
A long time ago
And also along
Time ago
My father had
Placed me to live
Here on earth
I love living on earth
My beautiful life
Every single day
I care about
The way my friends
Love me
Also my friends
Are my family
I trust my friends
And I know that
There will be always around
For me
Even when I am sick
I just don’t like
Being sick
I try to take good care
Of my health
Every...
#admiration
#emotions
#kindness
#love
#respect
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 1:43am
6th Oct 2024 1:43am
Please Let Me Be Your Virus
Ohh lovely I have decided that I wanted to be your virus
I'm already attached to you like your skin is attached to every muscle and sinew
I'm going to penetrate and get deep into the core of that grey matter of yours
Just let me pop the coating on that cell right there and let me infiltrate you dear
ohh I understand you wanna keep your gene’s intact
but we can't have that can we?
No we cannot have that.
Replication is the core of creation, and I want to replicate in you
Once it's done, we can...
I'm already attached to you like your skin is attached to every muscle and sinew
I'm going to penetrate and get deep into the core of that grey matter of yours
Just let me pop the coating on that cell right there and let me infiltrate you dear
ohh I understand you wanna keep your gene’s intact
but we can't have that can we?
No we cannot have that.
Replication is the core of creation, and I want to replicate in you
Once it's done, we can...
#emotions
#motivational
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