Poems About Dialogue Seeking Honest Critique

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Stoney223
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Today 10:23am

Only then we will have peace

As I sit 🪑 here behind these four walls 🧱 and stare out the window 🪟 of my sanctuary, just as the night skies slowly shift, before the break of a morning dawn, comes over the horizon, I wonder will today, will I have peace. 🤔 For sure now it's more of an statement, then a question ❓ concerning what changes have taken place within the world 🌎 For sure it's getting, to the point that now, it has become a guessing game, of what now 😞 For it's getting to be unbearable, with each day that goes by for sure it's literally has become a war zone...
 #despair   #dialogue   #philosophical   #sadness   #StreamOfConsciousness 
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Stoney223
Stoney223
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Yesterday 3:16pm

If I can't have you

Can someone make sense out of these four words ✍️ that's been spoken words, said more times then it needed to be said, something said when the relationship is about to end. IF I CAN'T HAVE YOU THEN KNOWONE ELSE WILL. 🤨 YOU BELONG TO ME. 😲 That definitely sounds weird but yet it sounds, more like a threat, for murder is something wicked, with evil forces more evil than anything ever SAID. For sure this is a story that has been heard so many times before, to someone in a supposed to be a relationship of love and affection and happiness. Yet sometimes surrounded by...
 #dialogue   #emotional   #FeelingTrapped   #philosophical   #StreamOfConsciousness 
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Stoney223
Stoney223
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Poem Published
27th Apr 2025 9:16pm

When will there be peace

This world has become so unreal that it's gotten to the point, that nothing is what it is suppose to be, nothing more and nothing less but an illusion of nothing, but lies and false promises. Even the people's have become less concern about, the future of our children's that are involved in killings creating nonsense, and drama and confusion and madness and chaos. 😠 Some people's are protesting for their own country, waving their country flags, and burning the Americans flags, yet you are here in America schools and colleges, 😠protesting here not in there own country. This...
 #dialogue   #grief   #LifeStruggles   #metaphor   #StreamOfConsciousness 
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Green_Arrow
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
27th Apr 2025 7:35pm

Just Got A Postcard From Stephanie

We just got a postcard
from Stephanie saying
that she does enjoy
living in the Encino
part of Los Angeles.
 #acceptance   #dialogue   #fiction   #FreeVerse   #friendship 
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Green_Arrow
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
27th Apr 2025 1:18pm

What She Said About The Jeans She Bought

She said those denim
slacks that she just purchased do
look sexy on her.
 #dialogue   #fiction   #haiku   #sensual   #vanity 
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Stoney223
Stoney223
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27th Apr 2025 6:38am

Who knew it existed  

Who knew that a place like this does exist, in a far away place that looks like, it was created by spiritual hands. Yet still in my mind and thoughts I wonder, what else awaits me as I continue to walk, and be inspired by the depth and deepness of my surroundings. For it's not like no other place that I've ever seen through my own eyes 👁️👁️ But yet it's here and now I feel the very deepness of the calmness come over my spiritual soul. Reaching into the very deepness of my, own soul and beliefs, that I realize here there's no walls 🧱 nor 🚪 doors,...
 #dialogue   #metaphor   #philosophical   #StreamOfConsciousness   #uplifting 
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Green_Arrow
Green_Arrow
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25th Apr 2025 1:44pm

Looks Like I'm Not The Only One Here On Vacation

Saw a sexy blonde
woman sunbathing nearby
a remote village.
 #beach   #dialogue   #fiction   #haiku   #sensual 
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AaHarvey
AaHarvey
Poem Published
24th Apr 2025 8:16pm

Converse

I can't hold a conversation that is not in metaphor.
I can see through your lies as I show you my all
And it's not a pretty sight seeing through your eyes.
It's a mixed up zen in a broken world.
It's a beautiful time to destroy it all
And I'm falling at your feet to ask you...

(C)2025 Aa Harvey. All Rights Reserved.
 #dialogue 
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Green_Arrow
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Apr 2025 7:51pm

He Told Me To Stay Out Of His Room. Now I Know Why.

I walk into my
brother's bedroom and found this
porn mag on that guy's bookshelf.
 #dialogue   #family   #fiction   #home   #sensual 
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Green_Arrow
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Apr 2025 11:00am

Could You Please Get It Down For Me?

Mommy, I can't
reach to grab
the chocolate
Easter bunny.
 #animals   #dialogue   #Easter   #fiction   #FreeVerse 
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Stoney223
Stoney223
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24th Apr 2025 1:30am

Just drifting with the winds

Here I am going through the process of cleaning, out my mind thoughts with my inner emotions, begins to calm me from within my own spiritual, subconsciousness of my new beginnings of my search of peace. For sure we will have to learn how can you, make it easier for you to be able to get away from the negativity 😔 For do you believe in your own dreams, that come with endless possibilities, can you imagine. WHAT it means to find a place that would be, just what you need and want. A beautiful place of calmness, by the grace of the sea, were you look out in the distance as far as you can...
 #dialogue   #metaphor   #philosophical   #StreamOfConsciousness   #uplifting 
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Green_Arrow
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2025 11:02am

Forget It! I'm Not Going To Do It!

No way is
this kitten
going into
that cold
water.
 #cats   #dialogue   #fiction   #FreeVerse   #water 
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