Poems About Dialogue by Top Critiquers
#dialogue
On the set...Take Two!!
#dialogue
#porn
#sex
#ShortStory
#uplifting
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Chasing Amy
It started out as an innocent flirtation
but when he and Amy's eyes met
and she smiled wide at him he knew
he had to have her for his own
To say that he was drawn to Amy
would clearly be an understatement
there was something about her that intrigued him but he couldn't say what
He went after her hard and fast
leaving her with no doubt he wanted her
but it didn't seem to matter much
he saw it was only driving them apart
It wasn't supposed be this way
Amy turned the chase into...
but when he and Amy's eyes met
and she smiled wide at him he knew
he had to have her for his own
To say that he was drawn to Amy
would clearly be an understatement
there was something about her that intrigued him but he couldn't say what
He went after her hard and fast
leaving her with no doubt he wanted her
but it didn't seem to matter much
he saw it was only driving them apart
It wasn't supposed be this way
Amy turned the chase into...
#love
#rejection
#boyfriend
#dialogue
#hurt
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OLD WRITING TRUTHS NEEDED TODAY
NOTES
As I was going through old files,
papers, and notes from college days
I came across a graduate course
folder with the following writing tips.
1. Don't try to guess what people want to hear
from you; first, figure out what you have to say.
2. Rejection is a sure sign you are a serious writer.
3. Original thoughts flow quickly; borrowed ones don't.
4. Writing can, and does, take place at any time or place.
5. Few critics are on the Bestseller List.
6. You can't write effectively out of ignorance.
7. The first quality of a...
As I was going through old files,
papers, and notes from college days
I came across a graduate course
folder with the following writing tips.
1. Don't try to guess what people want to hear
from you; first, figure out what you have to say.
2. Rejection is a sure sign you are a serious writer.
3. Original thoughts flow quickly; borrowed ones don't.
4. Writing can, and does, take place at any time or place.
5. Few critics are on the Bestseller List.
6. You can't write effectively out of ignorance.
7. The first quality of a...
#rhyming
#dialogue
#uplifting
#emotional
#metaphor
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demon teem
I feel my darkness peeking
its looking inward to see what I feel
twist the doubt and take over
insidious need growls
hold on
let's wait
the bleak breaks free and says
nah
I want to speak
crucial judgement...flawed
you need help
hecklers from the sideline applaud
jeers and tears I am afraid
I cry they sneer
my demon team
revolve the hurt
it builds this feeling
then turns into cold ache
my monsters urge I strike
I turn the weapon on myself
...
its looking inward to see what I feel
twist the doubt and take over
insidious need growls
hold on
let's wait
the bleak breaks free and says
nah
I want to speak
crucial judgement...flawed
you need help
hecklers from the sideline applaud
jeers and tears I am afraid
I cry they sneer
my demon team
revolve the hurt
it builds this feeling
then turns into cold ache
my monsters urge I strike
I turn the weapon on myself
...
#sadness
#love
#dialogue
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Women Ask Men to Scoot Over
Usually it's in bed
Reluctantly of course we move
Often we'd like to stay where we are
Men never use the word SCOOT
That's a female word all the way
I read this to her
She asks me what I'm trying to prove
I tell her I don't like the SCOOT word
How come she asks
I tell her that she's more fun close by
She's quiet for a moment
Then tells me to SCOOT
Reluctantly of course we move
Often we'd like to stay where we are
Men never use the word SCOOT
That's a female word all the way
I read this to her
She asks me what I'm trying to prove
I tell her I don't like the SCOOT word
How come she asks
I tell her that she's more fun close by
She's quiet for a moment
Then tells me to SCOOT
#women
#men
#dialogue
#sleep
#PowerOfWords
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CRITICAL MOMENTS
#sex
#rhyming
#dialogue
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my song
if there
were
some way
for me
to convince
you
to be
enticed
by
my song,
maybe adorn
myself
with words,
wrap myself
in lines
from poems,
would you
accept
all these
things,
would you
be interested?
were
some way
for me
to convince
you
to be
enticed
by
my song,
maybe adorn
myself
with words,
wrap myself
in lines
from poems,
would you
accept
all these
things,
would you
be interested?
#dialogue
#emotional
#metaphor
#symbolism
#uplifting
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DO YOU REMEMBER
so we talked of our secret garden
where we would sit under the stars
exchanging kisses and making love
taking showers under waterfalls
we spoke of dancing together'
at twilight to whatever music
played to us by love's nature
drums of hearts melody of caressed skin
we wanted a union that only we understood
holding on to faith's threads
digging heels on time's sand
trying to keep our hearts entwined
we said we would be there
someday when our stars crossed
and our suns aligned
to create that perfect...
where we would sit under the stars
exchanging kisses and making love
taking showers under waterfalls
we spoke of dancing together'
at twilight to whatever music
played to us by love's nature
drums of hearts melody of caressed skin
we wanted a union that only we understood
holding on to faith's threads
digging heels on time's sand
trying to keep our hearts entwined
we said we would be there
someday when our stars crossed
and our suns aligned
to create that perfect...
#love
#memories
#dialogue
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Baby Talk
It's two in the morning and Boo decides she wants to call
We cohabitat when we cohabitat but she's not taking another fall
Besides it's so much better when distance is applied here and there
Hahaha, when pain is applied,yes her type of care
Hell I've seen Jacob's ladder through her eyes peering into mine
As angels journeyed back and forth between her heart and mind
She's searching through my darkness for all of my hidden pain
But my darkness relocates my pain again and again
Boo likes talking on any and everything, nothing in particular ...
We cohabitat when we cohabitat but she's not taking another fall
Besides it's so much better when distance is applied here and there
Hahaha, when pain is applied,yes her type of care
Hell I've seen Jacob's ladder through her eyes peering into mine
As angels journeyed back and forth between her heart and mind
She's searching through my darkness for all of my hidden pain
But my darkness relocates my pain again and again
Boo likes talking on any and everything, nothing in particular ...
#lover
#dialogue
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Communiqué
They say Love isn't Words
but what you do instead
For the most part, it's True
bout actions, I 'spose
Especially in human form
but it goes beyond that
I've learned it's a Frequency
a Vibrational Communiqué
Transmitting from a humble
Source of inner Love
To remind us ( just in case
we'd forgotten );
"You're not alone."
but what you do instead
For the most part, it's True
bout actions, I 'spose
Especially in human form
but it goes beyond that
I've learned it's a Frequency
a Vibrational Communiqué
Transmitting from a humble
Source of inner Love
To remind us ( just in case
we'd forgotten );
"You're not alone."
#love
#spiritual
#memories #dialogue
#memories #dialogue
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Quite Perplexing
Quite perplexing psychic hexing, cycling texting, might affect me.
Minds projecting, likened heckling, try upending, crisis-pending.
Lives pretending, typing trendy tripe and tempting, blind relenting.
Fighting, jesting, driving plenty vibrance, rending, might be empty.
Vices venting, vying lengthy lying, lest be violent, plenty.
Trial testing, tightly tensing, timing, tending spiral lensing.
Rightly stepping, bible ready, sighted ending, cite forgetting.
I've but friendly, fine refreshing, wise amending, Christ ascending.
Minds projecting, likened heckling, try upending, crisis-pending.
Lives pretending, typing trendy tripe and tempting, blind relenting.
Fighting, jesting, driving plenty vibrance, rending, might be empty.
Vices venting, vying lengthy lying, lest be violent, plenty.
Trial testing, tightly tensing, timing, tending spiral lensing.
Rightly stepping, bible ready, sighted ending, cite forgetting.
I've but friendly, fine refreshing, wise amending, Christ ascending.
#spiritual
#rhyming
#dialogue
#metaphor
#morality
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Amok Time
#dialogue
#WritingPoetry
#metaphor
#philosophical
#scifi
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DU Poetry : Poems About Dialogue by Top Critiquers