Poems About Determination Seeking Honest Critique
#determination
Poems about determination seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PART OF LIFE
A MAN COULD NOT MAKE MISTAKES
IF HE DOES NOT WORK
BUT A MAN WHO WORKS HIS CRAFT
WILL ALWAYS MAKE MISTAKES
IT REMINDS US THAT WE ARE ALIVE
IF HE DOES NOT WORK
BUT A MAN WHO WORKS HIS CRAFT
WILL ALWAYS MAKE MISTAKES
IT REMINDS US THAT WE ARE ALIVE
#acceptance
#determination
#dreams
#happiness
#LifeChangingMoment
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Purr
Rub my belly
That'll make me purr
Turn me into jelly
Make my feline mind a blur
But don't kid yourself
You won't get anything more
I'm independent
You'll make me go to war
~Chorus ~
When the claws come out
You better run for your life
Don't try to cage me
Don't try to make me your wife
All I want is to be on my own
Meow
This crazy world
of which I've been thrown
Food in my belly
Yeah, that makes me purr
Something tasty
That'll do it for sure
Never try...
That'll make me purr
Turn me into jelly
Make my feline mind a blur
But don't kid yourself
You won't get anything more
I'm independent
You'll make me go to war
~Chorus ~
When the claws come out
You better run for your life
Don't try to cage me
Don't try to make me your wife
All I want is to be on my own
Meow
This crazy world
of which I've been thrown
Food in my belly
Yeah, that makes me purr
Something tasty
That'll do it for sure
Never try...
#cats
#determination
#strength
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Father Tyme Brings Young Lions
Once upon a Tyme
I was a Fearsome Monster
Once upon a Tyme
I was a Sho Nuff Beast
Once upon a Tyme
I could walk into a room full of Strong Men
And they would step aside for Me
Then Father Tyme came to visit me
Now
you can still see the Shadow of the monster
And,
sometimes, the Shades of the once mighty beast
But now,
when I step into a room full of Strong Men
It is I,
who stands aside for these Young Lions
I was a Fearsome Monster
Once upon a Tyme
I was a Sho Nuff Beast
Once upon a Tyme
I could walk into a room full of Strong Men
And they would step aside for Me
Then Father Tyme came to visit me
Now
you can still see the Shadow of the monster
And,
sometimes, the Shades of the once mighty beast
But now,
when I step into a room full of Strong Men
It is I,
who stands aside for these Young Lions
#bittersweet
#determination
#strength
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skyscraper
Skyscrapers are the ultimate symbol of human ambition,
rising above all obstacles.”—Anonymous
ambitions
drag me by the pulsing shoulder,
by rations
limited that make me bolder;
too soon i
find that failure is a raper
to ruin my
feet short of their high skyscraper.
the journey,
though an uphill climb forever,
shall earn me
all the fruit of my endeavour;
sharp bruises
shall my passions not diminish,
excuses
weary not what i must finish.
naysayers
vex my spirit with dissuasion, ...
rising above all obstacles.”—Anonymous
ambitions
drag me by the pulsing shoulder,
by rations
limited that make me bolder;
too soon i
find that failure is a raper
to ruin my
feet short of their high skyscraper.
the journey,
though an uphill climb forever,
shall earn me
all the fruit of my endeavour;
sharp bruises
shall my passions not diminish,
excuses
weary not what i must finish.
naysayers
vex my spirit with dissuasion, ...
#determination
#dreams
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
#success
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I PRAY FOR ANOTHER TOMORROW
Here I am a witness to what GOD can do for as I pray for another TOMORROW. 🙏 FOR AS I SIT HERE AND TRUST MY GOD, as I place my FAITH, 🙏 WITHIN ONLY YOU. FOR as much of what I've been going through, with cancers of different stages from prostate cancer, to kidney and bladder, and tumors of the brain, and lung cancer, you have always been, there along with MY WIFE AND FAMILY AND FRIENDS. For I STILL AM STANDING AND FIGHTING. For Tomorrow I go for my second test of my brain tumors, I place my FAITH in your hands as I continue to pray for a speedy recovery, to enjoy a prosperous...
#aging
#determination
#dreams
#PersonalGrowth
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Tired As Hell, But I Can Take It
My get up & go
Got up and went
And it's not coming back
Like an absentee father
Who went out for smokes
Leaving a single mother
To raise my inner child
My Outer Adult hurts like hell
A soul-pain that permeates my entire being
Man, I wish I wasn't so Goddamn tired
No amount of Energy Drinks can start my engine
Left idling as Time grinds the gears
And again I'm going nowhere
Forward momentum
Raging retrograde
Rocking back & forth
In the fetal position
As the World comes crashing in around you ...
Got up and went
And it's not coming back
Like an absentee father
Who went out for smokes
Leaving a single mother
To raise my inner child
My Outer Adult hurts like hell
A soul-pain that permeates my entire being
Man, I wish I wasn't so Goddamn tired
No amount of Energy Drinks can start my engine
Left idling as Time grinds the gears
And again I'm going nowhere
Forward momentum
Raging retrograde
Rocking back & forth
In the fetal position
As the World comes crashing in around you ...
#determination
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Bees labor not in vain
Bees labor not in vain
For their task is plain.
Listen - how they hum
Around the myoporum.
Purple buds then show forth
Declaring their handiwork.
For their task is plain.
Listen - how they hum
Around the myoporum.
Purple buds then show forth
Declaring their handiwork.
#determination
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Answers to Questions
Today is a good day to give?
Today is a good day to relive?
Today is a good day to forgive?
Today is a good day to live!
Today is a good day to drive?
Today is a good day to survive?
Today is a good day to thrive?
Today is a good day to be alive!
Tonight is a good night for display?
Tonight is a good night to betray?
Tonight is a good night to delay?
Tonight is a good night to stay!
Tonight is a good night to spin?
Tonight is a good night to chagrin?
Tonight is a good night...
Today is a good day to relive?
Today is a good day to forgive?
Today is a good day to live!
Today is a good day to drive?
Today is a good day to survive?
Today is a good day to thrive?
Today is a good day to be alive!
Tonight is a good night for display?
Tonight is a good night to betray?
Tonight is a good night to delay?
Tonight is a good night to stay!
Tonight is a good night to spin?
Tonight is a good night to chagrin?
Tonight is a good night...
#courage
#determination
#hope #motivational
#hope #motivational
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rewrite
you are allowed to rewrite
your story
no matter how sad, desperate
or wounded that story is now
there is nothing stopping you
expect your own imagination,
lack of free will and self
determination
the pages are blank once
more
history is
history
stay the victim if you
wish
but life really doesn't
keep accounts of
such
live with ghost in your
head if you
must
but remember
the sun has survived
millions of
years
...
your story
no matter how sad, desperate
or wounded that story is now
there is nothing stopping you
expect your own imagination,
lack of free will and self
determination
the pages are blank once
more
history is
history
stay the victim if you
wish
but life really doesn't
keep accounts of
such
live with ghost in your
head if you
must
but remember
the sun has survived
millions of
years
...
#acceptance
#determination
#FeelingTrapped
#redemption
#risk
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The Beauty of Iron Maxim #7
The Beauty of Iron is this:
It treats everyone equally
It cares nothing for outfit or experience
It says loudly,
"Welcome to your workout.
You're 4 steps ahead of those folks still
'finding the time' to walk thru the door."
Iron reminds you that:
Getting here was the hard part,
and once here,
You're now equal to everyone else in this room.
It treats everyone equally
It cares nothing for outfit or experience
It says loudly,
"Welcome to your workout.
You're 4 steps ahead of those folks still
'finding the time' to walk thru the door."
Iron reminds you that:
Getting here was the hard part,
and once here,
You're now equal to everyone else in this room.
#determination
#PersonalGrowth
#strength
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Never Give Up
Never give up on your dream
No matter how hard it seems
When the moment is yours
You'll feel your heart soar
Things will fall into place
Your dream you'll embrace
So keep singing your song
Success will come along
No matter how hard it seems
When the moment is yours
You'll feel your heart soar
Things will fall into place
Your dream you'll embrace
So keep singing your song
Success will come along
#determination
#dreams
#inspirational
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On the resilience of it
I watch raindrops
kissing my window
hear softness
tapping on glass,
I wrap myself in
this small moment
as I douse myself
into my cool bed
immersing my
raging skin in
the safety of it,
my thoughts turn
into salt water, my
body passes on
to the next wave
I lean into silence,
knowing how loud
the world is slowly
turning on it's axis
I remind myself
how my mind is
a blank flag,
how my body
turns into a riot
never stopping ...
kissing my window
hear softness
tapping on glass,
I wrap myself in
this small moment
as I douse myself
into my cool bed
immersing my
raging skin in
the safety of it,
my thoughts turn
into salt water, my
body passes on
to the next wave
I lean into silence,
knowing how loud
the world is slowly
turning on it's axis
I remind myself
how my mind is
a blank flag,
how my body
turns into a riot
never stopping ...
#courage
#determination
#identity
#strength
#culture
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DU Poetry : Poems About Determination Seeking Honest Critique