Poems About Denial Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about denial seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 11:28pm
3rd Jan 2025 11:28pm
À tout suite
tout suite
The rain stop today finally
I see the beautiful rainbow
That come out in the sky
After the rain
The sun came out
And it is now cooler
I am feeling cold
I need to wear my spring jacket
It should be fine
Finally it turned to be
A wonderful day
The rain cooled the earth
I hope it will stay that way
For couple days
I can't cope with the heat
The heat kills me
Because I sweat like a
Pig
That is true
I am not making up a history
Just to say something
I am not like that
I am...
The rain stop today finally
I see the beautiful rainbow
That come out in the sky
After the rain
The sun came out
And it is now cooler
I am feeling cold
I need to wear my spring jacket
It should be fine
Finally it turned to be
A wonderful day
The rain cooled the earth
I hope it will stay that way
For couple days
I can't cope with the heat
The heat kills me
Because I sweat like a
Pig
That is true
I am not making up a history
Just to say something
I am not like that
I am...
#dark
#denial
#disappointment
#hate
#loneliness
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 10:45am
2nd Jan 2025 10:45am
I will not make promises
I will not make promises
For you that I can't keep
I will not be jealous of you
Because you have more
Then me
I don't need the things you have
You worked hard to get
The things you have
Also, you collect some stones
From the sea
I know that you are a sea lover
Also, you spend most of you days
At the sea
I will also treat you
With respect
I am not telling you lies
My dearest friend
I will not disturb you
When you are sleeping
Because you need your sleep
Also, I am an honest person
That you...
For you that I can't keep
I will not be jealous of you
Because you have more
Then me
I don't need the things you have
You worked hard to get
The things you have
Also, you collect some stones
From the sea
I know that you are a sea lover
Also, you spend most of you days
At the sea
I will also treat you
With respect
I am not telling you lies
My dearest friend
I will not disturb you
When you are sleeping
Because you need your sleep
Also, I am an honest person
That you...
#anxiety
#denial
#despair
#disappointment
#jealousy
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Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
30th Dec 2024 11:58pm
30th Dec 2024 11:58pm
Koan 8
Love was.
Something.
I used to.
Long.
For.
Now.
It's just.
A sentimental.
Performative.
Poorly done.
Art.
Piece.
Something.
I used to.
Long.
For.
Now.
It's just.
A sentimental.
Performative.
Poorly done.
Art.
Piece.
#denial
#grief
#regret #rejection
#regret #rejection
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
29th Dec 2024 6:51pm
29th Dec 2024 6:51pm
Pretty eyes
She has
Pretty eyes
The color of the sea
Her eyes are green
Also her eyes shines in the sun
She is lucky to have green eyes
It was given to her by my father
AIso she has blond her
She is a gorgeous woman
That was made by my God
Also I am very happy for her
At night she is always sleeping like a log
Pretty eyes
The color of the sea
Her eyes are green
Also her eyes shines in the sun
She is lucky to have green eyes
It was given to her by my father
AIso she has blond her
She is a gorgeous woman
That was made by my God
Also I am very happy for her
At night she is always sleeping like a log
#dark
#denial
#despair
#grief
#shame
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Pinkdreams
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 1:34am
27th Dec 2024 1:34am
Cruel World
We were thrown together
Working a temp job we were both overqualified for.
He, a recent college grad soon to begin a master's
And me, who had gotten my bachelor's
somewhere around the time his parents were in kindergarten.
We talked about everything
Movies
Music
Politics
What the future of the world might hold
What America would be like in fifty years
Even ten.
It turned depressing from there.
Cruel World, young guy said, shaking his head
How long have you known that? I ask
...
Working a temp job we were both overqualified for.
He, a recent college grad soon to begin a master's
And me, who had gotten my bachelor's
somewhere around the time his parents were in kindergarten.
We talked about everything
Movies
Music
Politics
What the future of the world might hold
What America would be like in fifty years
Even ten.
It turned depressing from there.
Cruel World, young guy said, shaking his head
How long have you known that? I ask
...
#denial
#fear
#TruthOfLife
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10 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 00:46am
25th Dec 2024 00:46am
Fia 12 days of X-Mas
1st day you joined a gym
2nd day you learned to swim
3rd day you shaved down there
4th day you cared about hair
5th day you turned down snacks
6th day no kisses came back
7th day a mark on your neck
8th day a ticket to Quebec
9th day not sure what to do
10th day then came YOU
11th day a smile on my face
12th day here honey, I packed your suitcase!
1st day of Christmas, what could it be
Mom, what did you make to eat
2nd paper cuts
3rd can you get it
4th alarm fire
5th food...
2nd day you learned to swim
3rd day you shaved down there
4th day you cared about hair
5th day you turned down snacks
6th day no kisses came back
7th day a mark on your neck
8th day a ticket to Quebec
9th day not sure what to do
10th day then came YOU
11th day a smile on my face
12th day here honey, I packed your suitcase!
1st day of Christmas, what could it be
Mom, what did you make to eat
2nd paper cuts
3rd can you get it
4th alarm fire
5th food...
#confusion
#denial
#emotions #frustration
#emotions #frustration
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13 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 9:23pm
24th Dec 2024 9:23pm
Help You Destroy Me
Driven, driven
The crucifixion on toast
Ignore the wise-men
Accept drugs
Woke up just to
Blow these brains out
Blood and crying into my mouth
Fresh meat for the new ritual
Rip out the wires and start again
Dead beat locust mother
In catharsis
It's not the individual
It's the analysis
Face down in the plate
Of self denial
Thanks and feeds the pain
In my eyes
Here, where the money is scarce
As the sun with a gun
Freedom in your face
Enjoy your condemned hell here
You're just as bad as the...
The crucifixion on toast
Ignore the wise-men
Accept drugs
Woke up just to
Blow these brains out
Blood and crying into my mouth
Fresh meat for the new ritual
Rip out the wires and start again
Dead beat locust mother
In catharsis
It's not the individual
It's the analysis
Face down in the plate
Of self denial
Thanks and feeds the pain
In my eyes
Here, where the money is scarce
As the sun with a gun
Freedom in your face
Enjoy your condemned hell here
You're just as bad as the...
#denial
#MentalHealth
#religion
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
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sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 5:48pm
23rd Dec 2024 5:48pm
A Magician's Masterpiece
I have to remind myself at times, what I think isn't what I know, and what I know isn't what it seems....
What I perceive isn't reality, but a figment of a dream. The best illusionist I have ever seen, will always have to be the magician inside of me.
A habitual liar that I may be, constantly denying what it is I see.
Instead of accepting facts and reality, I'd rather embrace a vague fantasy.
Day by day and thought by thought, I paint pictures by blending colors from what I've got.
What I perceive isn't reality, but a figment of a dream. The best illusionist I have ever seen, will always have to be the magician inside of me.
A habitual liar that I may be, constantly denying what it is I see.
Instead of accepting facts and reality, I'd rather embrace a vague fantasy.
Day by day and thought by thought, I paint pictures by blending colors from what I've got.
#denial
#dreams
#SelfDiscovery #SelfReflection
#SelfDiscovery #SelfReflection
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2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 1:15pm
23rd Dec 2024 1:15pm
Hard-Up People Suck!
I wanted to tell you something
I don't want to call or text on the phone
I-phones Suck!!
Writing is what I'm going to do
If I wait another day, I may not be able to do this
Well here it goes....
You are the 1st person I ever wanted to punch in the mouth
I guess you didn't want to hear that but that's the fucking truth
I think you're a stupid piece of shit
You buy me food and then you want to fuck me
I have to leave to go to work and you get all mad at me
Then say I'm not paying attention to you
You want me more then...
I don't want to call or text on the phone
I-phones Suck!!
Writing is what I'm going to do
If I wait another day, I may not be able to do this
Well here it goes....
You are the 1st person I ever wanted to punch in the mouth
I guess you didn't want to hear that but that's the fucking truth
I think you're a stupid piece of shit
You buy me food and then you want to fuck me
I have to leave to go to work and you get all mad at me
Then say I'm not paying attention to you
You want me more then...
#boredom
#denial
#emptiness #tolerance
#emptiness #tolerance
87 reads
14 Comments
Academic
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 7:10pm
22nd Dec 2024 7:10pm
White Grimsby the Dole Capital of England! But evidently to racists the truth hurts!
By Stanley Collymore
If you invest in idleness rather than
training; if you literally promote
dependency rather than the
work ethic don't be surprised then when you have large numbers of individuals who very wilfully become idle and clearly dependent
on the taxpayer. These odious scroungers: obviously undoubtedly, from infant school
to compulsory secondary one, and clearly
with no intention actually of ever learning anything! Obviously, enter their own adult
life specifically and undoubtedly, with the ...
If you invest in idleness rather than
training; if you literally promote
dependency rather than the
work ethic don't be surprised then when you have large numbers of individuals who very wilfully become idle and clearly dependent
on the taxpayer. These odious scroungers: obviously undoubtedly, from infant school
to compulsory secondary one, and clearly
with no intention actually of ever learning anything! Obviously, enter their own adult
life specifically and undoubtedly, with the ...
#anger
#denial
#disappointment
#emptiness
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 8:48pm
21st Dec 2024 8:48pm
Now that the long night is over
Now that the long night is over
We had a long sleep
Now my Father
Brought the morning for us
First thing in the morning
Now it is time to say good morning to each other
It is finally a beautiful day
Outside
We just got up now
We are ready to enjoy this beautiful sunny day
That our Father gave to us
We are lucky to have a beautiful morning
With lots of sun
We are glad that there is no sign of rain
Also we are getting lots of vitamin d
This morning
We had a long sleep
Now my Father
Brought the morning for us
First thing in the morning
Now it is time to say good morning to each other
It is finally a beautiful day
Outside
We just got up now
We are ready to enjoy this beautiful sunny day
That our Father gave to us
We are lucky to have a beautiful morning
With lots of sun
We are glad that there is no sign of rain
Also we are getting lots of vitamin d
This morning
#confusion
#denial
#greed
#heartbroken
#sadness
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 2:56pm
20th Dec 2024 2:56pm
Give the people in the world
Give the people in the world
A chance to embrace peace
Give the people in the world
A chance to make friends
Give the people in the world
A chance for a better education
So it can help them to get
A better paying job
Give the people in the world
A chance for them to love each other
Give a chance for the people in the world to pray
Give a chance for the people in the world to learn
To be happy
Give a chance for the people in the world to learn
To eat healthy
And to learn to take better care of their health
Give a...
A chance to embrace peace
Give the people in the world
A chance to make friends
Give the people in the world
A chance for a better education
So it can help them to get
A better paying job
Give the people in the world
A chance for them to love each other
Give a chance for the people in the world to pray
Give a chance for the people in the world to learn
To be happy
Give a chance for the people in the world to learn
To eat healthy
And to learn to take better care of their health
Give a...
#boredom
#confusion
#dark
#denial
#despair
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