Poems About Death Seeking Honest Critique
#death
Poems about death seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
GRAVE SITE
Have you ever had a dream that woke you up, in a cold sweat till you can feel it to your 🩻 bones. As though the deepness of the dream, was trying to tell you something in codes. 🤔 Yet you know that you are alive, with a strong heart beating and pounding in your chest. As you inhale and exhale, the flesh air breeze blowing through your lungs, to breathe life. FROM within your body and spiritual soul. 🙏 Yet you can't shake the deepness of the, truth of the inner images of your mind thoughts. For sure what does it all mean, 🤔 could it be a sign of things to come,...
#aging
#birth
#death
#fate
#LifeAsAWriter
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Rites of Ascension
In hidden vaults, where shadows seep
They sing the rites of crimson creed
The ancient tongues in murmurs creep
And call to bones that never bleed
Through sacred dark, where secrets lie
In consecrated rot and dust
They chant beneath a starless sky
To raise the flesh dissolved by rust
With sigils drawn in ashen trace
And holy oil upon the stone
They conjure forth a lost embrace
Of spirits bound by oath and bone
Anointed blood in chaliced hands
They lift to Him who waits unseen
To rouse the buried from...
They sing the rites of crimson creed
The ancient tongues in murmurs creep
And call to bones that never bleed
Through sacred dark, where secrets lie
In consecrated rot and dust
They chant beneath a starless sky
To raise the flesh dissolved by rust
With sigils drawn in ashen trace
And holy oil upon the stone
They conjure forth a lost embrace
Of spirits bound by oath and bone
Anointed blood in chaliced hands
They lift to Him who waits unseen
To rouse the buried from...
#death
#evil
#magic
#religion
#rhyming
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No one Here (The Reaper…sows)
No one here (The Reaper…sows)
No one here gets out alive
As hard as we try
We all pay the toll
Hopefully there is an other side
But we can’t escape time
Time doesn’t spare anybody
Even one as smart as me
Though I’m a dummy
I can’t escape from Grim
He reaps what he sows
He reaps what he sows
Reaper sits in
On our family gathering
Hope he picks me
And not someone I really love
He reaps what he knows
He reaps and sows
But he don’t feel pity
And he’ll...
No one here gets out alive
As hard as we try
We all pay the toll
Hopefully there is an other side
But we can’t escape time
Time doesn’t spare anybody
Even one as smart as me
Though I’m a dummy
I can’t escape from Grim
He reaps what he sows
He reaps what he sows
Reaper sits in
On our family gathering
Hope he picks me
And not someone I really love
He reaps what he knows
He reaps and sows
But he don’t feel pity
And he’ll...
#death
#family
#memories
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They're Coming For You
Living corpses gets out to enjoy the party tonight
the exploding space probe awakens their bodies to life
army of undead prowlers craving raw meat
be fast or be killed, you're their flavor of the week
Back to eat, eat and eat again
they feel just hunger
no love no mercy no pain
they move slow, wobble & rock
they're tireless creatures, they never seem to stop
Make 'em die
a shot in the head
only way to survive
in the night of the living dead
the exploding space probe awakens their bodies to life
army of undead prowlers craving raw meat
be fast or be killed, you're their flavor of the week
Back to eat, eat and eat again
they feel just hunger
no love no mercy no pain
they move slow, wobble & rock
they're tireless creatures, they never seem to stop
Make 'em die
a shot in the head
only way to survive
in the night of the living dead
#death
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
#zombies
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The vicious cumshot
#abuse
#death
#orgasm
#sex
#violence
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I Wish I Was Aborted
Grab a rope and grab a chair
feet are going in the air
May seem careless, may seem weak
not your approval i hope to seek
Left a notebook saying why i did it all over there
Who am i kidding no one ever seemed to care
Any impact i had will just fade away
Everybody says you can do anything as a young man
Even though i tried this was the one thing that i could plan
Enjoy the ramen i had stashed away
Consume the maggots, that's the price you have to pay
feet are going in the air
May seem careless, may seem weak
not your approval i hope to seek
Left a notebook saying why i did it all over there
Who am i kidding no one ever seemed to care
Any impact i had will just fade away
Everybody says you can do anything as a young man
Even though i tried this was the one thing that i could plan
Enjoy the ramen i had stashed away
Consume the maggots, that's the price you have to pay
#dark
#death
#rhyming
#satirical
#suicide
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Dreams, Streams & Waterfalls
This life has had it's way
This place has had its way with me
This loss that burns so cold
Won't back down it will never go away
These dying breaths are fading now
Seems like breathing has lost its charm
That flame i once felt inside
Seems the glow finally died
The memories i had of you
And the place where we ran through
Streams and waterfalls
The memories are fading now
Just like the strength that carried us through
Dreams and waterfalls
Is this what it will come to?
A drowning pool of hopeless...
This place has had its way with me
This loss that burns so cold
Won't back down it will never go away
These dying breaths are fading now
Seems like breathing has lost its charm
That flame i once felt inside
Seems the glow finally died
The memories i had of you
And the place where we ran through
Streams and waterfalls
The memories are fading now
Just like the strength that carried us through
Dreams and waterfalls
Is this what it will come to?
A drowning pool of hopeless...
#death
#love
#memories
#regret
#relationships
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Da Bomb
Black hole in the bomb
Oppy in Los Alomos
New Mexico dessert
Fusion atomic bomb
Witch hunt McCarthy era
Japanese children with no skin
Such knowledge I can’t imagine
Einstein’s Teacher
Drop the bomb
Cities explode
Made the bomb to beat Hitler
So now he’s dead in a bunker
All this work I want to see
Here goes Hiroshima in a mushroom
Could have dropped it on Japan Bay
But I want to see destruction of humans
And buildings layed flat to the ground
Fireworks on...
Oppy in Los Alomos
New Mexico dessert
Fusion atomic bomb
Witch hunt McCarthy era
Japanese children with no skin
Such knowledge I can’t imagine
Einstein’s Teacher
Drop the bomb
Cities explode
Made the bomb to beat Hitler
So now he’s dead in a bunker
All this work I want to see
Here goes Hiroshima in a mushroom
Could have dropped it on Japan Bay
But I want to see destruction of humans
And buildings layed flat to the ground
Fireworks on...
#death
#suffering
#war
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Promiscuous Guns
Fragility takes the virginity of an unfired gun
Mental instability has eclipsed many of Suns
Rum-pu-pum-pum is the sound of the beating drumroll
An audible exclamation of the lives being stole
This cold world's becoming more frigid everyday
Artic temps continue to dip and never seem to sway
Press play and they'll convey the way to genocide
Games the same but they changed how it is supplied
Sides are being redlined by trails of tears and blood
Parted like the Red Sea during this modern era flood
HUD unable to aid the array...
Mental instability has eclipsed many of Suns
Rum-pu-pum-pum is the sound of the beating drumroll
An audible exclamation of the lives being stole
This cold world's becoming more frigid everyday
Artic temps continue to dip and never seem to sway
Press play and they'll convey the way to genocide
Games the same but they changed how it is supplied
Sides are being redlined by trails of tears and blood
Parted like the Red Sea during this modern era flood
HUD unable to aid the array...
#death
#GunControl
#MentalHealth
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The Dancer
Once upon a time on a planet that was mostly harmless and sometimes blue, there was a dancer. She had been a dancer since a tiny sprout with limbs that fluttered in the breeze of life and love. Her feet had learned the alphabet of steps before her mouth mastered the language of her people. She lived, oh how she lived, every moment of her life in the moment, celebrating her body and the poetry of movement that was her birthright and her voice.
Her dance was a prayer, an act of love, a rebellion against the stillness of death that loomed like a shadow over portions of the world. She...
Her dance was a prayer, an act of love, a rebellion against the stillness of death that loomed like a shadow over portions of the world. She...
#beauty
#dance
#death #war
#death #war
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Cannibal Ferox
Indulging in the flash, caustic symbolism
No barriers block my path, of hatred guided fury
To escape this mortal life, an underworld destiny
Obsessed seed to mutilate, this religious tyranny
Make them die...
SLOWLY!!
I am called Pariah, bathing in sin
Bring forth the righteous pigs, I shall have their skin
Living for dying, what more can you ask?
My hunger grows stronger, lusting to see
The children of heaven, begging for mercy
I shall make them die, slowly
Die, slowly, now you feel the pain! (The Pain)
...
No barriers block my path, of hatred guided fury
To escape this mortal life, an underworld destiny
Obsessed seed to mutilate, this religious tyranny
Make them die...
SLOWLY!!
I am called Pariah, bathing in sin
Bring forth the righteous pigs, I shall have their skin
Living for dying, what more can you ask?
My hunger grows stronger, lusting to see
The children of heaven, begging for mercy
I shall make them die, slowly
Die, slowly, now you feel the pain! (The Pain)
...
#dark
#death
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
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6 Comments
Dia de los muertos
The time is coming,
The loves gathering,
The veil becomes thin
The time is here
Dia de los muertos,
The day of days
I am waiting for you
my love to come back to me
even for just a day
Come back
Your picture is on the mantle
my ring is still on,
It never leaves
It will always be part of my destiny
candles are lit upon the table
I have prepared yours and our favorite food
The path is clear,
and am waiting on our wavelength for you
I am playing guitar
singing my songs for you
the babies are all...
The loves gathering,
The veil becomes thin
The time is here
Dia de los muertos,
The day of days
I am waiting for you
my love to come back to me
even for just a day
Come back
Your picture is on the mantle
my ring is still on,
It never leaves
It will always be part of my destiny
candles are lit upon the table
I have prepared yours and our favorite food
The path is clear,
and am waiting on our wavelength for you
I am playing guitar
singing my songs for you
the babies are all...
#death
#Halloween
#love
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