Collaboration Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#collaboration
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 10:13pm
19th Jan 2025 10:13pm
A Throbbing Scent - with adagio
Pale lips of blue perishable breath
Silence without cliches, listening,
Stuck upon a memory that you are
Blossoming in death’s trite without
Critique in my slumber as I sleep
***
Stirred is the mind by a throbbing scent
Soul refilled straying off an end
A warm love unearthed now blooming
So soft the sound of a seed life sipping
Silence just retreated while smiling..
Silence without cliches, listening,
Stuck upon a memory that you are
Blossoming in death’s trite without
Critique in my slumber as I sleep
***
Stirred is the mind by a throbbing scent
Soul refilled straying off an end
A warm love unearthed now blooming
So soft the sound of a seed life sipping
Silence just retreated while smiling..
#collaboration
#rebirth
#spiritual
55 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 1:07am
19th Jan 2025 1:07am
Within the light of hope
There will come a time when you lose your sense of tolerance, and you have become blinded by the negativity that suddenly. Surrounds you that you feel that you have to sacrifice your own thoughts and insight into not believing. THAT you have to be able to separate thyself, in your own spiritual existence reaching far from the negativity. For your own subconsciousness, to be involved in creating, your own best image of yourself. Yet you are told that it's not possible to achieve, that what we see and believe. For sure we will never know what we can't achieve, if you don't believe that we can...
#collaboration
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
28 reads
0 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 9:49pm
18th Jan 2025 9:49pm
Legos In Translation (a collaboration with adagio)
Oceans of green through the window of eyes
And the blueprints of nature’s serenity
Through the hourglass of autumn’s compose
In fields of Elysian verdant wildflowers
And nature’s Pandora Jack-in-the-Box of
Folded memories and Legos in translation
*****
So lofty are mountains turned tender
When soothed by the warm hands of the sun
Against the harsh white winter a defender
Nature’s bounty would ever humankind stun
To every single season weather and surrender
Then bare your treasure into verses second to none..
And the blueprints of nature’s serenity
Through the hourglass of autumn’s compose
In fields of Elysian verdant wildflowers
And nature’s Pandora Jack-in-the-Box of
Folded memories and Legos in translation
*****
So lofty are mountains turned tender
When soothed by the warm hands of the sun
Against the harsh white winter a defender
Nature’s bounty would ever humankind stun
To every single season weather and surrender
Then bare your treasure into verses second to none..
#collaboration
#fall
#nature #winter
#nature #winter
54 reads
4 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 7:13am
1st Dec 2024 7:13am
Refrained
(Moon_bather/Fia Naturie collab)
I got this to say
You don’t know me anyway
I got this to say
What the fuck you trying to say
How many fingers you got
Not enough to make you stop
How many minds can bleed
Until you stop your fucking seed
Hello 911, She’s going to need help please
What is your emergency
The world, and what she believes
Excuse me?
I want to leave and go away
Are you being detained in any way
She has locked me in chain, making me stay
I’ll send...
I got this to say
You don’t know me anyway
I got this to say
What the fuck you trying to say
How many fingers you got
Not enough to make you stop
How many minds can bleed
Until you stop your fucking seed
Hello 911, She’s going to need help please
What is your emergency
The world, and what she believes
Excuse me?
I want to leave and go away
Are you being detained in any way
She has locked me in chain, making me stay
I’ll send...
#collaboration
#FreeVerse
#rhyming #StreamOfConsciousness
#rhyming #StreamOfConsciousness
97 reads
5 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 3:47pm
20th Nov 2024 3:47pm
unperceived in the ominous woods~with the talented Sage_6_paths_light
the darkness beckons
and I come forth willingly, into the unknown
sensing something forbodeing, I draw back to the shadows
the trees are silent it's eerie
forsake the angels
it's a spell their under
I've always been friend to the trees
today they loom large
the forest smells of copper pennies
an unmistakable tang
withdrawing further, a tree warns
a madman is afoot
with wild eyes and smile that chills
my blood runs cold, as I catch sight of him
Bloodlust in the air
Hard to breath my thoughts...
and I come forth willingly, into the unknown
sensing something forbodeing, I draw back to the shadows
the trees are silent it's eerie
forsake the angels
it's a spell their under
I've always been friend to the trees
today they loom large
the forest smells of copper pennies
an unmistakable tang
withdrawing further, a tree warns
a madman is afoot
with wild eyes and smile that chills
my blood runs cold, as I catch sight of him
Bloodlust in the air
Hard to breath my thoughts...
#collaboration
#dark
91 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 6:47pm
18th Nov 2024 6:47pm
Our Hearts Beat As One (Whispers of Love) (collab w/ Sappho)
To you, as you light up the sky
A perfect, lovely night for love
Our dreams intertwine and bind us Together, forever
My love,
I want to give myself to you
Completely lost in the magic and Beauty of the present moment
We lie in fog-covered fields
You & I harmonize like the stars
Your gentle lips whisper a song,
Lifelong
Your Ruby lips
Velvety and sweet like cherry wine
Need to be sealed with a kiss
That echoes in divine dimensions of
Future times
Eternally yours as the moon is ever so bright ...
A perfect, lovely night for love
Our dreams intertwine and bind us Together, forever
My love,
I want to give myself to you
Completely lost in the magic and Beauty of the present moment
We lie in fog-covered fields
You & I harmonize like the stars
Your gentle lips whisper a song,
Lifelong
Your Ruby lips
Velvety and sweet like cherry wine
Need to be sealed with a kiss
That echoes in divine dimensions of
Future times
Eternally yours as the moon is ever so bright ...
#collaboration
#FallingInLove
#love #romantic
#love #romantic
177 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 8:28pm
10th Nov 2024 8:28pm
Menstrocity (collab with AfterSexDilemma)
Hunting for the menstrual juice, this unholy juice, it's calling you
virginal whores in the purest form,
blood flowing freely like never before,
your crimson curse is what I thirst,
invasion of your hymen, devirginizing
I don't discriminate, your age, race, cunt blood's the same
fixation on coagulation, infatuation with menstruation
compelled to the stench of vaginal blood,
compelled to the taste of vaginal blood
There is no truce, this holy noose.
Feeling pain forever, throwing up the deuce.
On a grind to catch my mind,
I'm...
virginal whores in the purest form,
blood flowing freely like never before,
your crimson curse is what I thirst,
invasion of your hymen, devirginizing
I don't discriminate, your age, race, cunt blood's the same
fixation on coagulation, infatuation with menstruation
compelled to the stench of vaginal blood,
compelled to the taste of vaginal blood
There is no truce, this holy noose.
Feeling pain forever, throwing up the deuce.
On a grind to catch my mind,
I'm...
#collaboration
#LifeStruggles
#MentalHealth #women
#MentalHealth #women
68 reads
7 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 10:49am
31st Oct 2024 10:49am
The Extraordinary Journey Through The Minds of Eight DUP Members
After not hearing from Miranda Wright for several days, her family reported the petite 28 year old woman missing. Thirteen days after filing the missing persons report, Miranda's father and brother went to her house on Halloween and noticed there was a foul odor coming from the living room. The police had gone through everything in her house as well, but found no signs of struggle. Miranda's brother noticed that the odor seemed to increase when he went toward the couch. Something told him that he should lift up the cushion. As he lifted up the cushions, he stood there in shock, seeing a...
#collaboration
#evil
#fiction
#horror
#ShortStory
123 reads
16 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Oct 2024 9:31am
28th Oct 2024 9:31am
Alone in the Dark (collaboration with Lilliputian)
darkness rules this way
the only light,
the light of friends who died
no fear, no pain,
on the quest for love
the soul crumbles in pieces
parts that can't combine
never born, never died
hate and domination destroyed
I, the wanderer of loneliness
forever seeking a glimmer
amidst the despair
an idle chase,
running after erased traces
of the other half,
lost with broken dreams,
fragments turn into ashes
and hope remains unfound
along with unanswered calls
I,...
the only light,
the light of friends who died
no fear, no pain,
on the quest for love
the soul crumbles in pieces
parts that can't combine
never born, never died
hate and domination destroyed
I, the wanderer of loneliness
forever seeking a glimmer
amidst the despair
an idle chase,
running after erased traces
of the other half,
lost with broken dreams,
fragments turn into ashes
and hope remains unfound
along with unanswered calls
I,...
#collaboration
#dark
#loneliness #sadness
#loneliness #sadness
119 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 3:39pm
22nd Oct 2024 3:39pm
Immortal Clothing with the talented Everavalon
In the night is where it echoes
Reverberating woe from this sable womb
I heed you in the shadows
as you fade your presence
over the contours of misalign
to shade the shine of lunacy
Your lips blade the quips of my enchantments
Beguiling my stance
To stable the whine that pierces
pricking these bones that stiffen the spine
To the rind— where it simmers
In the torrents of this curse
in the winds that pit my skin
I relent
Madness runs circles in this shallow box
Sadness seeps vile from this vicious rot
To...
Reverberating woe from this sable womb
I heed you in the shadows
as you fade your presence
over the contours of misalign
to shade the shine of lunacy
Your lips blade the quips of my enchantments
Beguiling my stance
To stable the whine that pierces
pricking these bones that stiffen the spine
To the rind— where it simmers
In the torrents of this curse
in the winds that pit my skin
I relent
Madness runs circles in this shallow box
Sadness seeps vile from this vicious rot
To...
#collaboration
#dark
97 reads
4 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
7th Oct 2024 12:43pm
7th Oct 2024 12:43pm
Borrowed IG Wisdoms
Don't count the days until you succeed. Make every day count on your way to succeeding.
------BeenLikeThis------
Purposeful
Oracle
Evoking
Transformation
Now that is a perfect description of a POET.
(Don't recall who posted it, but I loved the T-Shirts they wore)
------BeenLikeThis------
Purposeful
Oracle
Evoking
Transformation
Now that is a perfect description of a POET.
(Don't recall who posted it, but I loved the T-Shirts they wore)
#collaboration
#metaphor
#uplifting
85 reads
0 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
8th Sep 2024 1:25am
8th Sep 2024 1:25am
Deck of Cards (AfterSexDilemma collab)
AfterSexDilemma:
Falling to the ground, Big Bang,
That's the sound.
A big man balancing on a tricycle,
Dancing like a clown.
High in the Sefirot trying not to drop.
Opened my mouth couldn't get it to stop.
Pressure boiling in with hot steam,
Makes my ears pop.
The fish in the sky are going dry.
Start to flip flop.
High on my mind wasting time on the clock.
I'm in decline, getting behind, still in line,
Want fame from the tick tock.
The...
Falling to the ground, Big Bang,
That's the sound.
A big man balancing on a tricycle,
Dancing like a clown.
High in the Sefirot trying not to drop.
Opened my mouth couldn't get it to stop.
Pressure boiling in with hot steam,
Makes my ears pop.
The fish in the sky are going dry.
Start to flip flop.
High on my mind wasting time on the clock.
I'm in decline, getting behind, still in line,
Want fame from the tick tock.
The...
#collaboration
#escape
#satirical
#symbolism
#uplifting
211 reads
2 Comments
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