Poems About Boredom by Top Critiquers
#boredom
Poems about boredom by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Busted in the Morning
Good Morning,
You did one thing wrong, you woke up
If I haven't told you before
I'm sick & tired of this rut
As my stomach turns
Acid reflux burns
I know exactly what I must do
I know how you feel,
when you eat a meal
Go look in the mirror
Can't look at you,
you're busted every morning
My headache is now gone,
relieved we have no spawn
Use to be a naughty ass slut,
now all you want are glazed doughnuts
Doesn't matter how much you think
or the number of hairs in...
You did one thing wrong, you woke up
If I haven't told you before
I'm sick & tired of this rut
As my stomach turns
Acid reflux burns
I know exactly what I must do
I know how you feel,
when you eat a meal
Go look in the mirror
Can't look at you,
you're busted every morning
My headache is now gone,
relieved we have no spawn
Use to be a naughty ass slut,
now all you want are glazed doughnuts
Doesn't matter how much you think
or the number of hairs in...
#morning
#food
#rhyming
#aging
#boredom
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rot gut
are you angry?
because I didn't tell you everything
each little detail of my past & present
I don't feel obliged to disclose my life story
you wanted my reality
i've shared some
it's been ugly & nasty
some beautiful victories
mostly beaten into the ground
just to brush the dust off
& walk on
i'm a fighter
I don't know how to lie down & quit
I'll go 12 rounds
with the monsters...
because I didn't tell you everything
each little detail of my past & present
I don't feel obliged to disclose my life story
you wanted my reality
i've shared some
it's been ugly & nasty
some beautiful victories
mostly beaten into the ground
just to brush the dust off
& walk on
i'm a fighter
I don't know how to lie down & quit
I'll go 12 rounds
with the monsters...
#boredom
987 reads
26 Comments
Flakey Figures
I tore the fabric of my comfort
Into strips of bandages
That laced over my body
To repair the damages
I ripped the fabric of my mind
Distorted visions leaked out
Staining the only cleanliness
Held tight between my thighs
I danced around the fire
Engulfed in pulsing waves of heat
Until sanity flew away
Cackling back at me
I fell into the sky
Let the river carry me
Depositing my ashes
As rain upon the leaves
Into strips of bandages
That laced over my body
To repair the damages
I ripped the fabric of my mind
Distorted visions leaked out
Staining the only cleanliness
Held tight between my thighs
I danced around the fire
Engulfed in pulsing waves of heat
Until sanity flew away
Cackling back at me
I fell into the sky
Let the river carry me
Depositing my ashes
As rain upon the leaves
#secrets
#rebirth
#drugs
#boredom
#choices
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9 Comments
Not for Nothing but this Site is Pretty Boring Lately
Listen up fuck bags
Do I have to do everything?
I was so bored that I even wore pants today
Which is weird because I work remotely
Bunker on the corner of 4th and Long
Personal Foul for roughing the kicker
Do you get my drift ?
I didn't think so
Listen a lot of good poets left
But you remain and I remain
It's our job to keep rocking it
Write about Ring Dings, just write
I'm taking a Vaginal vacation
Two scoops of Trans Fat
Gluten holiday in Transylvania
Dark Stout, blow jobs and rodeo
She's sizzle...
Do I have to do everything?
I was so bored that I even wore pants today
Which is weird because I work remotely
Bunker on the corner of 4th and Long
Personal Foul for roughing the kicker
Do you get my drift ?
I didn't think so
Listen a lot of good poets left
But you remain and I remain
It's our job to keep rocking it
Write about Ring Dings, just write
I'm taking a Vaginal vacation
Two scoops of Trans Fat
Gluten holiday in Transylvania
Dark Stout, blow jobs and rodeo
She's sizzle...
#funny
#WritingPoetry
#PowerOfWords
#apathy
#boredom
349 reads
50 Comments
Recycled
Regurgitated drivel not so cleverly disguised in rearranged formats, different words-
same meaning.
Love, Loss, Loneliness, Repeat.
Establishment has its drawbacks. There is nothing new to lament, or rejoice. It’s all been done.
admiration, adoration, atonement. redemption.
I’m
bored.
same meaning.
Love, Loss, Loneliness, Repeat.
Establishment has its drawbacks. There is nothing new to lament, or rejoice. It’s all been done.
admiration, adoration, atonement. redemption.
I’m
bored.
#WritingPoetry
#apathy
#boredom
815 reads
38 Comments
YOU ARE BABBLING
You are babbling,
as I'm grappling
with your body
on top of me,
Occupying
all the timing.
that you'd swore would
spend in lonehood.
Why be lonely
in walls homely,
when I could bring
some livening?
My attraction
proved distraction,
thus hijacking
your relaxing. ...
as I'm grappling
with your body
on top of me,
Occupying
all the timing.
that you'd swore would
spend in lonehood.
Why be lonely
in walls homely,
when I could bring
some livening?
My attraction
proved distraction,
thus hijacking
your relaxing. ...
#sex
#rhyming
#boredom #orgasm
#boredom #orgasm
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11 Comments
falling leaf
i waited
there,
for you
by
your garden,
shadows
shifting time
overhead,
i leaned
back
against your
surrounding
fence,
i cannot
see you,
then,
your voice,
i turned
to
understand
what
you said,
but it was
only
the crying
of
a falling leaf.
there,
for you
by
your garden,
shadows
shifting time
overhead,
i leaned
back
against your
surrounding
fence,
i cannot
see you,
then,
your voice,
i turned
to
understand
what
you said,
but it was
only
the crying
of
a falling leaf.
#loneliness
#rejection
#frustration
#confusion
#boredom
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12 Comments
A Shot in the Dark
Poetry competitions are like testing your own conditions,
Are you good enough at the art when you take a shot in the dark?
It depends on the objective but it can also be subjective,
When your words resonate with the reader it may just hit the mark.
It’s like a sudden and swift race caught up in the thrill of the chase,
I’m trying to show I’m the best from the rest in this virtual joint,
Testing to see if the host will like my post but most likely not,
Unless I ass kiss with this bliss of a poem just to prove a point…
Wait,
Unless I kiss his ass...
Are you good enough at the art when you take a shot in the dark?
It depends on the objective but it can also be subjective,
When your words resonate with the reader it may just hit the mark.
It’s like a sudden and swift race caught up in the thrill of the chase,
I’m trying to show I’m the best from the rest in this virtual joint,
Testing to see if the host will like my post but most likely not,
Unless I ass kiss with this bliss of a poem just to prove a point…
Wait,
Unless I kiss his ass...
#rhyming
#boredom
542 reads
5 Comments
Random Words
Finally, i can now write poetry
I feel free, no shackles around me
The cares are less, and more is the sense
The stream of thoughts, at large roaming
Finally, my head is empty, i am Illiterate
Like a shepherd who never read a line from Poe..
Like a blank mind, with no regrets
Or a sad broken heart, with no sorrow
I am void, and devoid of any fly
That may disturb my tranquility
My mind is bent on vagrant thinking
Reveries of a pure sanity or even insanity
I am floating in...
I feel free, no shackles around me
The cares are less, and more is the sense
The stream of thoughts, at large roaming
Finally, my head is empty, i am Illiterate
Like a shepherd who never read a line from Poe..
Like a blank mind, with no regrets
Or a sad broken heart, with no sorrow
I am void, and devoid of any fly
That may disturb my tranquility
My mind is bent on vagrant thinking
Reveries of a pure sanity or even insanity
I am floating in...
#loneliness
#frustration
#emptiness
#apathy
#boredom
93 reads
8 Comments
Brain Play
I know everything about something --
I researched it for hours;
took a deep dive into it
with hyperfocus powers.
I learned a million details
on my little study break,
completely unrelated
to the test I have to take.
I read a bunch of articles
and watched some videos.
My knowledge of the topic
is extensive now, I s’pose.
This rabbit hole of internet
was candy for my brain,
with dopamine aplenty
soothing math-inflicted pain.
I’m sure it will be useful
so you shouldn’t be upset;
I...
I researched it for hours;
took a deep dive into it
with hyperfocus powers.
I learned a million details
on my little study break,
completely unrelated
to the test I have to take.
I read a bunch of articles
and watched some videos.
My knowledge of the topic
is extensive now, I s’pose.
This rabbit hole of internet
was candy for my brain,
with dopamine aplenty
soothing math-inflicted pain.
I’m sure it will be useful
so you shouldn’t be upset;
I...
#funny
#boredom
#college
#NaPoWriMo2022
#ADHD
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2 Comments
tired young girl drinking espresso in a cafe
San Francisco
1987
Cafe Babar
tired young girl
sipping an espresso
waiting for the sun
to stop sunning
waiting for the clouds
to stop clouding
waiting for the rain
to stop raining
waiting for the poets
to stop poeting
waiting for the tic-toc
of the clock to stop
ticking
waiting for her heart
beat to stop beating
waiting for the ache
of love to stop
aching
1987
Cafe Babar
tired young girl
sipping an espresso
waiting for the sun
to stop sunning
waiting for the clouds
to stop clouding
waiting for the rain
to stop raining
waiting for the poets
to stop poeting
waiting for the tic-toc
of the clock to stop
ticking
waiting for her heart
beat to stop beating
waiting for the ache
of love to stop
aching
#sadness
#loneliness
#boredom
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6 Comments
Reality
She’s out on the town
Let’s not mess around
A girl likes her drink
And knows her own mind
If a lil tipple takes your fancy
And a gal feels like dancing
Just go for it girl
Ain’t no time for romancing
Just feel your desires
Take the leap
Have it all
We spend so much time in this stupid façade
Acting like we’re together
When really we’ve never been further apart
Let’s not mess around
A girl likes her drink
And knows her own mind
If a lil tipple takes your fancy
And a gal feels like dancing
Just go for it girl
Ain’t no time for romancing
Just feel your desires
Take the leap
Have it all
We spend so much time in this stupid façade
Acting like we’re together
When really we’ve never been further apart
#confessional
#TruthOfLife
#confusion
#FeelingLost
#boredom
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DU Poetry : Poems About Boredom by Top Critiquers