Poems About Boredom Seeking Honest Critique
#boredom
Poems about boredom seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 10:31am
11th Nov 2024 10:31am
Thank you
Thank you
For loving us
Father
We are happy about that
Thank you
For being in our lives
Thank you
For keeping us alive
Here on earth
Every single day
Thank for answering our prayers
After we pray
Thank you
For bringing the birds back home
For loving us
Father
We are happy about that
Thank you
For being in our lives
Thank you
For keeping us alive
Here on earth
Every single day
Thank for answering our prayers
After we pray
Thank you
For bringing the birds back home
#bittersweet
#boredom
#frustration
#grief
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 6:34pm
10th Nov 2024 6:34pm
1990
I don't remember anything
About 1990
Because it is a long time ago
And I must say that 1990
Went away 20 years ago
From my life
And the world that we live
Every single day
Here on the planet earth
About 1990
Because it is a long time ago
And I must say that 1990
Went away 20 years ago
From my life
And the world that we live
Every single day
Here on the planet earth
#boredom
#confusion
#denial
#greed
#hate
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 10:50pm
9th Nov 2024 10:50pm
Sometimes...
Sometimes I contemplate the thoughts I shouldn’t, whispers from a dark corner of my psyche, curled in the spaces where sense disintegrates, fractured musings that neither lead nor liberate.
Sometimes I succumb to the urges I cannot name, drawn by the siren of chaos and craving, a rebellion against the tethered self,
seeking silence in the transient, the absurd.
Sometimes I speak the truths that make you recoil, words too sharp, too naked in their honesty, they splinter the calm with their jagged clarity, and I wonder if silence it might be the better lie.
...
Sometimes I succumb to the urges I cannot name, drawn by the siren of chaos and craving, a rebellion against the tethered self,
seeking silence in the transient, the absurd.
Sometimes I speak the truths that make you recoil, words too sharp, too naked in their honesty, they splinter the calm with their jagged clarity, and I wonder if silence it might be the better lie.
...
#boredom
#dark
#emptiness
#honesty
#wisdom
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 11:07pm
7th Nov 2024 11:07pm
Walks in the beach
Yes I love walks in the beach
First thing in the morning
When there is nobody
Else around
Early in the summer
It is very soothing
Hearing the sound of the water
First thing in the morning
When there is nobody
Else around
Early in the summer
It is very soothing
Hearing the sound of the water
#anger
#apathy
#bittersweet
#boredom
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 12:43pm
6th Nov 2024 12:43pm
How can I win your love back?
How can I win your love back?
Because I need all the love
I can get from you
Lots of people tell me I am a hopeless case
That alone makes me angry
I already confronted them
And I told them that I don't
Want to hear that
Never again
Because I need all the love
I can get from you
Lots of people tell me I am a hopeless case
That alone makes me angry
I already confronted them
And I told them that I don't
Want to hear that
Never again
#anxiety
#apathy
#bittersweet
#boredom
#disappointment
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cheesa
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 1:16pm
29th Oct 2024 1:16pm
It's a shame
Everything has become so brutally painful
The world is so mundane
It's a shame
My interest in life has diminished
My sky offers only rain
It's a shame
I wake already exhausted
I live my life in vain
It's a shame
The world is so mundane
It's a shame
My interest in life has diminished
My sky offers only rain
It's a shame
I wake already exhausted
I live my life in vain
It's a shame
#boredom
#despair
#loneliness
#sadness
#shame
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Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
28th Oct 2024 10:07pm
28th Oct 2024 10:07pm
Procrastination
I need to do my assignment—
my coursework is lagging behind
but today I just can't seem to start it;
I think I am losing my mind.
I don't want to do it so much
that I've ticked off the rest of my list,
and then I made three Christmas presents—
I simply couldn't resist!
I've washed up, and tidied, and folded,
and then put the laundry away.
Because I have done all the chores,
I've borrowed some from the next day.
Spending hours working on Duolingo
won't get all this college work done,
but I love doing French...
my coursework is lagging behind
but today I just can't seem to start it;
I think I am losing my mind.
I don't want to do it so much
that I've ticked off the rest of my list,
and then I made three Christmas presents—
I simply couldn't resist!
I've washed up, and tidied, and folded,
and then put the laundry away.
Because I have done all the chores,
I've borrowed some from the next day.
Spending hours working on Duolingo
won't get all this college work done,
but I love doing French...
#apathy
#boredom
#funny
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
25th Oct 2024 1:08am
25th Oct 2024 1:08am
Living my life in your hands
Living my life in your hands
Because Father, you also own me
Also, I am one of your sons
I know that you have lots of other children
Besides me
Also, we are all siblings
And we have each other
We hope we are going to be here
Tomorrow
If our Father keep us alive
Also, we love our life
That our Father gave to us
Yes, my siblings love me
Are now teenager
Also, I can't believe how fast they are growing
Every year
Soon their teenager life will be over
And they will start living their youth life
Also, we pray...
Because Father, you also own me
Also, I am one of your sons
I know that you have lots of other children
Besides me
Also, we are all siblings
And we have each other
We hope we are going to be here
Tomorrow
If our Father keep us alive
Also, we love our life
That our Father gave to us
Yes, my siblings love me
Are now teenager
Also, I can't believe how fast they are growing
Every year
Soon their teenager life will be over
And they will start living their youth life
Also, we pray...
#boredom
#frustration
#greed
#grief
#heartbroken
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
25th Oct 2024 1:07am
25th Oct 2024 1:07am
o sole mio
o sole mio
I am the bird
That was made by my father
With his hands
Now during the morning
I am flying in the sky
Above the mountain
And the ocean
Lots of people are taking photos of me
So they can have as a souvenir
I am the bird
That was made by my father
With his hands
Now during the morning
I am flying in the sky
Above the mountain
And the ocean
Lots of people are taking photos of me
So they can have as a souvenir
#anger
#anxiety
#apathy
#bittersweet
#boredom
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Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2024 8:28pm
23rd Oct 2024 8:28pm
Transmutation
I'm dying on the inside.
Every single day.
And, I meander through the torpor.
Into listlessness.
And an apropo addendum.
I'm sorry
I guess.
Incapable of change.
Every single day.
And, I meander through the torpor.
Into listlessness.
And an apropo addendum.
I'm sorry
I guess.
Incapable of change.
#boredom
#disappointment
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Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2024 7:52pm
23rd Oct 2024 7:52pm
Doubt
I am lost in the ennui.
Of a failed life.
I am ascending.
In abstentia.
My mind is in flux.
Sublimated to the nihilistic hole.
That grows.
With every passing day.
I'm comforted.
By failure.
I wallow in my own.
Misery.
A torch song.
For the potential I was told.
I had.
Isolation has become.
My dear friend.
Old comrades from mental.
Revolutions.
But, I'm dead.
Dilapidated and destroyed.
Ruling the ruins of my broken thoughts.
Verbal garbage.
...
Of a failed life.
I am ascending.
In abstentia.
My mind is in flux.
Sublimated to the nihilistic hole.
That grows.
With every passing day.
I'm comforted.
By failure.
I wallow in my own.
Misery.
A torch song.
For the potential I was told.
I had.
Isolation has become.
My dear friend.
Old comrades from mental.
Revolutions.
But, I'm dead.
Dilapidated and destroyed.
Ruling the ruins of my broken thoughts.
Verbal garbage.
...
#boredom
#despair
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Oct 2024 8:33pm
15th Oct 2024 8:33pm
You want more but don't know what that is
They sit across from each other and wait for their food
About an hour prior they were having intense sex
The sweat was running off their bodies
He knows what she loves
She knows what he loves
It was a mutual need, nothing more
Now they sit & talk about nothing
They both know that they're looking for something
Each know the other isn't it
Yet they go on talking & fucking
Idly
Watching out, not to get too deep
Neither has the energy
They couldn't if they wanted to
Both know the other isn't concerned too...
About an hour prior they were having intense sex
The sweat was running off their bodies
He knows what she loves
She knows what he loves
It was a mutual need, nothing more
Now they sit & talk about nothing
They both know that they're looking for something
Each know the other isn't it
Yet they go on talking & fucking
Idly
Watching out, not to get too deep
Neither has the energy
They couldn't if they wanted to
Both know the other isn't concerned too...
#boredom
#emptiness
#loneliness #TruthOfLife
#loneliness #TruthOfLife
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