Poems About Boredom Seeking Honest Critique
#boredom
Poems about boredom seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 4:50am
18th Dec 2024 4:50am
Homeostasis
Everything is so.
Elegant.
Everything is so.
Neat.
Harmonious.
Elegant.
Everything is so.
Neat.
Harmonious.
#boredom
#emptiness
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 3:45pm
14th Dec 2024 3:45pm
Ben vindo
God's children
Ben vindo
To a beautiful day
Let's not waste that day
By sleep in
If we sleep in we will
Not sleep at night
So we must enjoy this day
That our father gave to us
Here on earth
yes we are having the Summer
Here on earth
that our father create for us
With his holy hands
Also We took a look in the sky
And there was no sign of rain
We don't like the rain at all
Because when it is raining
There is lighting and thunder
The noise of lightning and thunder
Wake
us up when we are...
Ben vindo
To a beautiful day
Let's not waste that day
By sleep in
If we sleep in we will
Not sleep at night
So we must enjoy this day
That our father gave to us
Here on earth
yes we are having the Summer
Here on earth
that our father create for us
With his holy hands
Also We took a look in the sky
And there was no sign of rain
We don't like the rain at all
Because when it is raining
There is lighting and thunder
The noise of lightning and thunder
Wake
us up when we are...
#boredom
#dark
#regret
#rejection
#sadness
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Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 2:56am
13th Dec 2024 2:56am
Transdniestrian Sentiment.
All there is.
Is the silence.
The high pitched squeal.
Of the death of my hearing.
And.
I can hear the emptiness punctuated with electrical whines.
Anticipating something to just.
Fill the air.
With an angsty.
Revolt.
Against the.
Calm.
Is the silence.
The high pitched squeal.
Of the death of my hearing.
And.
I can hear the emptiness punctuated with electrical whines.
Anticipating something to just.
Fill the air.
With an angsty.
Revolt.
Against the.
Calm.
#bittersweet
#boredom
#emptiness
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Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 2:53am
13th Dec 2024 2:53am
Unfinished half thought out idea.
All the things I havent said.
I'd like to say.
Sometime far away.
Maybe, before I'm dead.
I've lost the motivation.
I've forgotten the plot.
To my multi syllabic salvation.
With an obfuscated forget me not.
I've written out my frustration.
Onto the rap sheet.
Of when I fell asleep.
Can't write with this lack of attention.
I think I'm trying to resolve.
The contradiction in my mind.
Writing something to absolve.
Me, of this truth I just can't find.
I have so many things to say.
Just,...
I'd like to say.
Sometime far away.
Maybe, before I'm dead.
I've lost the motivation.
I've forgotten the plot.
To my multi syllabic salvation.
With an obfuscated forget me not.
I've written out my frustration.
Onto the rap sheet.
Of when I fell asleep.
Can't write with this lack of attention.
I think I'm trying to resolve.
The contradiction in my mind.
Writing something to absolve.
Me, of this truth I just can't find.
I have so many things to say.
Just,...
#boredom
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 10:22pm
3rd Dec 2024 10:22pm
Arrivederci winter
Now it is finally the time
To say
Arrivederci winter
It was indeed a long Winter
I was already getting sick
Of the winter
That never seem to ended
Now finally my Father brought the spring today
And I am very happy about that
Also my Father brought back
Home the birds that I was missing
For a long time now
At night time I live the windows
Open so it can cool my house
Because I have no air conditioning
In my house
And I been living in my house
For a long time now
Also I love the area I live in
The...
To say
Arrivederci winter
It was indeed a long Winter
I was already getting sick
Of the winter
That never seem to ended
Now finally my Father brought the spring today
And I am very happy about that
Also my Father brought back
Home the birds that I was missing
For a long time now
At night time I live the windows
Open so it can cool my house
Because I have no air conditioning
In my house
And I been living in my house
For a long time now
Also I love the area I live in
The...
#anger
#anxiety
#apathy
#bittersweet
#boredom
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 8:13pm
26th Nov 2024 8:13pm
Always in a daze
Always in a daze
I live the same routine over & over again
Wear that empty gaze
The one that keeps me
Sane!
Don't crucify me
You'll see
Inside I'm fragile....I'm weak
So much more to lose
if I don't try
But I cannot change
I'll just burn the ambition inside
Stared into a void
Of emptiness and a bitter feeling
Too much time alone
Leads me into darkness, dreaming
This road will take me nowhere
Suffocates my will
Today though, I will try again to be something I am not
I live the same routine over & over again
Wear that empty gaze
The one that keeps me
Sane!
Don't crucify me
You'll see
Inside I'm fragile....I'm weak
So much more to lose
if I don't try
But I cannot change
I'll just burn the ambition inside
Stared into a void
Of emptiness and a bitter feeling
Too much time alone
Leads me into darkness, dreaming
This road will take me nowhere
Suffocates my will
Today though, I will try again to be something I am not
#boredom
#dark
#LifeGoals
#loneliness
#vulnerability
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Michaelpoet
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 1:24am
25th Nov 2024 1:24am
Neurotypical Day
Today, I count the minutes until my shift ends. No drug can compare to the addiction of hate for the 9 - 5.
Vanilla melodies drown out the noise at the vending machine that is always occupied.
I've learned to fool the masses into believing I can relate to any number of subjects that are foreign to me.
If I stare long enough they may believe I have no secret to keep. Maybe not.
Knock, knock. Who's there? Not my attention, Dennis.
Vanilla melodies drown out the noise at the vending machine that is always occupied.
I've learned to fool the masses into believing I can relate to any number of subjects that are foreign to me.
If I stare long enough they may believe I have no secret to keep. Maybe not.
Knock, knock. Who's there? Not my attention, Dennis.
#anxiety
#apathy
#boredom
#emptiness
#fear
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 2:23am
17th Nov 2024 2:23am
I hear you talking in your sleep
I hear you talking
In your sleep
It is quiet annoying
Because I am
Also trying to sleep
And its you
That keeps me waking me
Up
I don't appreciate that
I am being firm with you
In your sleep
It is quiet annoying
Because I am
Also trying to sleep
And its you
That keeps me waking me
Up
I don't appreciate that
I am being firm with you
#boredom
#confusion
#dark
#loneliness
#rejection
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sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 11:40am
14th Nov 2024 11:40am
1892
I lie here thinking, when you don't answer, what is a man to do.
It's not that I worry, it's just that I get bored, not having you to talk too.
I twiddle my thumbs, and try to past the time away, but patience is the hardest virtue.
They say, "Good things come to those who wait" attributed to Violet Fane in 1892.
And that's how bored I really am, attributing phrases to a woman just because I know I can.
Girl do you see what you got me going through.
Quoting dead people just to keep my mind off you.
I would say this is the break of insanity but my...
It's not that I worry, it's just that I get bored, not having you to talk too.
I twiddle my thumbs, and try to past the time away, but patience is the hardest virtue.
They say, "Good things come to those who wait" attributed to Violet Fane in 1892.
And that's how bored I really am, attributing phrases to a woman just because I know I can.
Girl do you see what you got me going through.
Quoting dead people just to keep my mind off you.
I would say this is the break of insanity but my...
#apathy
#boredom
#love
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
12th Nov 2024 1:06am
12th Nov 2024 1:06am
The Alcoholic
Drunk on swollen pride,
ego sips lies, one by one
glass half-full of self.
ego sips lies, one by one
glass half-full of self.
#boredom
#happiness
#inspirational
#redemption
#sadness
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 10:31am
11th Nov 2024 10:31am
Thank you
Thank you
For loving us
Father
We are happy about that
Thank you
For being in our lives
Thank you
For keeping us alive
Here on earth
Every single day
Thank for answering our prayers
After we pray
Thank you
For bringing the birds back home
For loving us
Father
We are happy about that
Thank you
For being in our lives
Thank you
For keeping us alive
Here on earth
Every single day
Thank for answering our prayers
After we pray
Thank you
For bringing the birds back home
#bittersweet
#boredom
#frustration
#grief
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 6:34pm
10th Nov 2024 6:34pm
1990
I don't remember anything
About 1990
Because it is a long time ago
And I must say that 1990
Went away 20 years ago
From my life
And the world that we live
Every single day
Here on the planet earth
About 1990
Because it is a long time ago
And I must say that 1990
Went away 20 years ago
From my life
And the world that we live
Every single day
Here on the planet earth
#boredom
#confusion
#denial
#greed
#hate
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