Poems About Birth Seeking Honest Critique
#birth
Poems about birth seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 8:33pm
8th Oct 2024 8:33pm
Tomorrow is the day I began life after yesterday I have died
I have come 10 billion miles
I have landed on your miserable planet Earth
I'd rather go back to Uranus
So i can consummate square heads birth
Bitter Poontang bleeds on your dusty tongue
My 600lb wife cracked open the ocean floor
I've given you my foot long in your hands
Spread your cheeks and open up your backdoor
Oh mommy, mommy your cunt is bleeding
Plagued upon your curse
Dreaming of families inbreeding
I came in a limo, I drove away in a hearse
For those who don't know about reality, I am your reality
When...
I have landed on your miserable planet Earth
I'd rather go back to Uranus
So i can consummate square heads birth
Bitter Poontang bleeds on your dusty tongue
My 600lb wife cracked open the ocean floor
I've given you my foot long in your hands
Spread your cheeks and open up your backdoor
Oh mommy, mommy your cunt is bleeding
Plagued upon your curse
Dreaming of families inbreeding
I came in a limo, I drove away in a hearse
For those who don't know about reality, I am your reality
When...
#birth
#dark
#dreams
#LifeCycle
#sex
101 reads
4 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
4th Oct 2024 11:08pm
4th Oct 2024 11:08pm
October Poems 2024 >> the golden earth
A poem for each day of the month in which I was born
October 04
the golden earth
this island feasts upon the toils of men
in sweat-soaked denim slacks and khaki shirts,
who greet the dawn tide by the cattle pen,
arterial quests awaiting daylight flirts.
carbolic soap freshens the atmosphere,
black-coffee belches fouling it in turn,
with early swigs of intoxicant beer
hoarsing the palate with eye-blinking burn.
the golden earth plays havoc with their hands,
blisters and bruises humouring their touch;
for...
October 04
the golden earth
this island feasts upon the toils of men
in sweat-soaked denim slacks and khaki shirts,
who greet the dawn tide by the cattle pen,
arterial quests awaiting daylight flirts.
carbolic soap freshens the atmosphere,
black-coffee belches fouling it in turn,
with early swigs of intoxicant beer
hoarsing the palate with eye-blinking burn.
the golden earth plays havoc with their hands,
blisters and bruises humouring their touch;
for...
#birth
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeCycle
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0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
4th Oct 2024 9:56pm
4th Oct 2024 9:56pm
Within Me
I’m secure within me
But I’m scared at what I can’t see
When do you look into the future
Find some guidance from the past
This tree is gone old no longer gives life
Cut it down turn it into Biochar
Return this tree to the soil to give me
A new life out of one that died
So turn me into biochar when I no longer have a life
Give me back to the ground spread my nutrients all around
For I am secure within me my sins I wear on my sleeve
But I’m still scared at what I can’t see
But I’m scared at what I can’t see
When do you look into the future
Find some guidance from the past
This tree is gone old no longer gives life
Cut it down turn it into Biochar
Return this tree to the soil to give me
A new life out of one that died
So turn me into biochar when I no longer have a life
Give me back to the ground spread my nutrients all around
For I am secure within me my sins I wear on my sleeve
But I’m still scared at what I can’t see
#birth
#death
#fate #nature
#fate #nature
130 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
4th Oct 2024 1:42pm
4th Oct 2024 1:42pm
Gravestone Baby
I’m a gravestone baby
My parents named me
On a cold fresh day wind is dancing leaves about their feet
Deep in talk not noticing where they are
As the past surrounds them
In the silhouette there is a rise in the belly
Names go about how about Simon or Julius
Or Edna or Barbara Jean something in between
They walk past some sandstone with a name
Carved into the days that passed
I’m a gravestone baby
That’s the name my mama gave me
Has no connection to any of us
But...
My parents named me
On a cold fresh day wind is dancing leaves about their feet
Deep in talk not noticing where they are
As the past surrounds them
In the silhouette there is a rise in the belly
Names go about how about Simon or Julius
Or Edna or Barbara Jean something in between
They walk past some sandstone with a name
Carved into the days that passed
I’m a gravestone baby
That’s the name my mama gave me
Has no connection to any of us
But...
#birth
#death
#motherhood #pregnancy
#motherhood #pregnancy
92 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
24th Sep 2024 4:11am
24th Sep 2024 4:11am
Still
Still birth in my brain
I am born again
From cradle to grave
I’m the only one I can save
Born into a new world
On the other side of me
Swim through placenta
And I am free
Crawling on all fours
Can’t reach the door
Pick myself up
And I’m a little toddler
Growing into my new being
I can walk and talk and sing
Still trying to figure out
What this world’s all about
Starting to grow again
Now I’m a young adult
Trying to figure this world out ...
I am born again
From cradle to grave
I’m the only one I can save
Born into a new world
On the other side of me
Swim through placenta
And I am free
Crawling on all fours
Can’t reach the door
Pick myself up
And I’m a little toddler
Growing into my new being
I can walk and talk and sing
Still trying to figure out
What this world’s all about
Starting to grow again
Now I’m a young adult
Trying to figure this world out ...
#birth
#death
#fate #LifeCycle
#fate #LifeCycle
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0 Comments
LunaGreyhawk
Poem Published
12th Sep 2024 11:56am
12th Sep 2024 11:56am
Invitational
breathtaking sunrise
Nature’s glory on offer
a new beginning
Nature’s glory on offer
a new beginning
#birth
#inspirational
#LifeCycle
192 reads
18 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
28th Aug 2024 2:42pm
28th Aug 2024 2:42pm
Red Dress
Red dress
#birth
#death
#motherhood
422 reads
5 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
21st Aug 2024 00:12am
21st Aug 2024 00:12am
Delusional is this is your world now
Is this what you want and need in your life? 🤔 FOR example I wonder why you people's, who are still living on the plantation like slaves, with a steel ball in chains. 🤨 Yet still not willing to admit that you keep being gas lighted by those who you believe within😞 THE FEW DEMOCRATS AND some members of the White House, and the governors and the crooked judges with crooked lawyers and people's being paid to say whatever they want you to say 🙊THE POWERS THAT BE are still apart of the UNTRUTH as well as time slowly keeps repeating, that olde style of...
#birth
#death
#epic
#funeral
#StreamOfConsciousness
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0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Aug 2024 1:04am
20th Aug 2024 1:04am
Drugs & babies don't mix
After a late night of partying
This one girl brings another girl and a guy back to her apartment
The girl wants to be kinky & have sex in her baby's crib
The girl forgot to have a babysitter watch the child when she went out
Their all high on meth
The ignorance & stupidity of this entire ordeal was that the 6 month old baby was still in the crib
The next morning the baby was dead
Apparently the baby was smothered to death
They all served time
The mother though was sentenced to life in prison
She had no remorse
She told family...
This one girl brings another girl and a guy back to her apartment
The girl wants to be kinky & have sex in her baby's crib
The girl forgot to have a babysitter watch the child when she went out
Their all high on meth
The ignorance & stupidity of this entire ordeal was that the 6 month old baby was still in the crib
The next morning the baby was dead
Apparently the baby was smothered to death
They all served time
The mother though was sentenced to life in prison
She had no remorse
She told family...
#birth
#drugs
#ignorance
#risk
#sex
122 reads
4 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
15th Jun 2024 4:11pm
15th Jun 2024 4:11pm
Such is Life
Alina’s life journey began in the love of her parents who married in 2004. Alina was wonderfully formed in her mother’s womb before taking her first breath in 2006.
By 2009, Alina was giving her parents great joy as she developed the use of language. Her mother cried when she first called to her mamma. As she began to walk and dance, her mother was happy because she too was a dancer.
The year 2017 marked the transition of her body from girlhood to womanhood as she experienced the changes of puberty. Her shape and features seemed to change by the day. She placed...
By 2009, Alina was giving her parents great joy as she developed the use of language. Her mother cried when she first called to her mamma. As she began to walk and dance, her mother was happy because she too was a dancer.
The year 2017 marked the transition of her body from girlhood to womanhood as she experienced the changes of puberty. Her shape and features seemed to change by the day. She placed...
#birth
#death
199 reads
5 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
29th May 2024 1:26pm
29th May 2024 1:26pm
What Loves Will You Know?
#beauty
#birth
#love
187 reads
8 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
19th May 2024 4:56pm
19th May 2024 4:56pm
Breast Feeding
My milk flows softly now out of sight
Bringing you life in the mists of night.
Tiny fingers grasp and hold tight,
Your presence for me, a shining light.
Within these moments our worlds collide,
Lead me on my little guide.
Where men have touched me filled with lust
May spirits fill your heart with trust.
Bringing you life in the mists of night.
Tiny fingers grasp and hold tight,
Your presence for me, a shining light.
Within these moments our worlds collide,
Lead me on my little guide.
Where men have touched me filled with lust
May spirits fill your heart with trust.
#birth
#love
#memories
324 reads
9 Comments
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