Poems About Beauty Seeking Honest Critique
#beauty
oldmanG
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 12:32pm
8th Oct 2024 12:32pm
Heart So Tender
Heart so tender
Want somebody
Not any body will do
Someone who feels me
And can give some tenderness
Could you be the one
I’m not the judge of you
Warm like a friend on the block
With a toe ring that sings to me
On the sand digging in to you
Pop up umbrella made for two
Sunset on the bay
Romanticized in your eyes so
Nibble back of your neck
Now we’re talking love
Hold you close to my heart
Beating heaven in my chest
Your breath in my ear ...
Want somebody
Not any body will do
Someone who feels me
And can give some tenderness
Could you be the one
I’m not the judge of you
Warm like a friend on the block
With a toe ring that sings to me
On the sand digging in to you
Pop up umbrella made for two
Sunset on the bay
Romanticized in your eyes so
Nibble back of your neck
Now we’re talking love
Hold you close to my heart
Beating heaven in my chest
Your breath in my ear ...
#beauty
#happiness
#love #respect
#love #respect
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InDreamz
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 4:53pm
6th Oct 2024 4:53pm
Peace
When you are at peace
with yourself
You find beauty
in everything else
And that beauty
is a source of joy;
a joy, that emanates from others
But is...
Your very own
with yourself
You find beauty
in everything else
And that beauty
is a source of joy;
a joy, that emanates from others
But is...
Your very own
#beauty
#happiness
#hope #peace
#hope #peace
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oldmanG
Poem Published
4th Oct 2024 1:52pm
4th Oct 2024 1:52pm
Silent Dancer
Silent dancer
Dances for no one but me
Words not heard but she’s beautiful
I talk to her in a whisper
If she doesn’t see me she can’t hear me
But she’s a silent dancer
She dances on cold tile
But her toes make no sound to her
There is lights in her eyes
She mesmerized my soul
She is a silent dancer she dances
Only for me she prances
She is a silent dancer
But the dance she does makes the crowd roar
Back at home not a whisper
...
Dances for no one but me
Words not heard but she’s beautiful
I talk to her in a whisper
If she doesn’t see me she can’t hear me
But she’s a silent dancer
She dances on cold tile
But her toes make no sound to her
There is lights in her eyes
She mesmerized my soul
She is a silent dancer she dances
Only for me she prances
She is a silent dancer
But the dance she does makes the crowd roar
Back at home not a whisper
...
#admiration
#beauty
#honesty #romantic
#honesty #romantic
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Poet__2248
Poem Published
29th Sep 2024 12:54pm
29th Sep 2024 12:54pm
Forgetting me
I didnt want you to forget me, please don’t forget me.
I want to stay in your memory. I want to be there forever.
Let me burrow deeper and deeper. Into your thoughts, into your mind so that I am free to torment you, comfort you just as you do me in mine.
Let me conquer your dreams as well, let the face you see always be mine.
Keep me with you.
Please.
I want to stay in your memory. I want to be there forever.
Let me burrow deeper and deeper. Into your thoughts, into your mind so that I am free to torment you, comfort you just as you do me in mine.
Let me conquer your dreams as well, let the face you see always be mine.
Keep me with you.
Please.
#admiration
#beauty
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
#love
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oldmanG
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 5:21pm
28th Sep 2024 5:21pm
Fire Red Hair
Fire red hair
You can tell an elegant lady not
By the fine silky strands of fire
But by something as simple as her nails
Or her demeanor as she waits in line
Fine woman ages much better than wine
Especially if you can say she loves you hard
After all this time she can still love hard and
Deep in your soul you feel the truth
Nothing like a fine lady and a sip of red wine
Sippin her love like grapes off the vine
If this was Christie’s or Sotheby’s I’d lift my paddle and raise
The score…for my baby has no price ...
You can tell an elegant lady not
By the fine silky strands of fire
But by something as simple as her nails
Or her demeanor as she waits in line
Fine woman ages much better than wine
Especially if you can say she loves you hard
After all this time she can still love hard and
Deep in your soul you feel the truth
Nothing like a fine lady and a sip of red wine
Sippin her love like grapes off the vine
If this was Christie’s or Sotheby’s I’d lift my paddle and raise
The score…for my baby has no price ...
#beauty
#bittersweet
#love #regret
#love #regret
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oldmanG
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 9:16am
28th Sep 2024 9:16am
Caramel Kitten of My Dreams
Caramel kitten of my dreams
Persian rugs silk sheets
Preys on me like a tiger
Electric light in her eyes
I’m hypnotized by beauty
Purrs like a mustang
Wonder what’s under her hood
I prowl on the perimeter of her
Want to dip into her love
Toss and turn try to forget
Caramel kitten of my dreams
I am in your reach
Want to put kisses on your pillow
You know I’m here you want me too
I’ll be your tried and true
I’ll keep you coming back for more
And my love keeps giving...
Persian rugs silk sheets
Preys on me like a tiger
Electric light in her eyes
I’m hypnotized by beauty
Purrs like a mustang
Wonder what’s under her hood
I prowl on the perimeter of her
Want to dip into her love
Toss and turn try to forget
Caramel kitten of my dreams
I am in your reach
Want to put kisses on your pillow
You know I’m here you want me too
I’ll be your tried and true
I’ll keep you coming back for more
And my love keeps giving...
#beauty
#crush
#gratitude
#relationships
#romantic
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
20th Sep 2024 7:38pm
20th Sep 2024 7:38pm
My Snowflake Lover
This is something that was not planned
The moment you stood there and took my hand
I recall it well...
T'was the day the first snow fell
I was trembling inside, you see
I wasn't sure you were willing to be
With me on these cold winter nights
As I made love to you in the firelight
We both have a few years on us yet
Romance will never die with us, pet
You're so cute in the spring, such full of heart
Does your flavor then shift from sweet to tart?
You laugh and play as you allow me in
When it shows, you come out,...
The moment you stood there and took my hand
I recall it well...
T'was the day the first snow fell
I was trembling inside, you see
I wasn't sure you were willing to be
With me on these cold winter nights
As I made love to you in the firelight
We both have a few years on us yet
Romance will never die with us, pet
You're so cute in the spring, such full of heart
Does your flavor then shift from sweet to tart?
You laugh and play as you allow me in
When it shows, you come out,...
#beauty
#ILoveYou
#love
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26 Comments
Jammyjoe
Poem Published
19th Sep 2024 2:03pm
19th Sep 2024 2:03pm
Hazel eyes
Those mesmerizing eyes, every hue of every tree in the forest
From the early light till night fall is met
Even made richer by the eclips in which they set
Those exquisite hazel eyes
Made of colorful tides
Where a kelidascope of natural beauty collides
So clear and blue
Like the first drop of morning dew
A river that flows non-stop
Or a beautiful rain drop
Grey as the clouds in storm
And in the light they transform
Into a cascading fog
One you might see on a morning jog
Green like moss by a flowing stream ...
From the early light till night fall is met
Even made richer by the eclips in which they set
Those exquisite hazel eyes
Made of colorful tides
Where a kelidascope of natural beauty collides
So clear and blue
Like the first drop of morning dew
A river that flows non-stop
Or a beautiful rain drop
Grey as the clouds in storm
And in the light they transform
Into a cascading fog
One you might see on a morning jog
Green like moss by a flowing stream ...
#beauty
#emotional
#lover
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
18th Sep 2024 9:58pm
18th Sep 2024 9:58pm
She's No Longer An Ugly Duckling
It
was on
a Sunday
afternoon that
Holden spotted on
the beach and wearing a
red bikini the former
shy bookworm Eunice who looked like
she had gone through a transformation
while visiting an aunt in Malibu.
was on
a Sunday
afternoon that
Holden spotted on
the beach and wearing a
red bikini the former
shy bookworm Eunice who looked like
she had gone through a transformation
while visiting an aunt in Malibu.
#beach
#beauty
#fiction
#friendship
#summer
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FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
18th Sep 2024 8:45pm
18th Sep 2024 8:45pm
Top of the Line (IG Version)
What is a Top of the Line Tar Baby?
She's a:
Melanin Rich
Absolutely Gorgeous
Perfectly Brown
Vision of Eye-Catching Chocolate Loveliness
Triple fudge brownie colored skin got me trippin!
Girl is fine for no reason other than to torment me
Leaving me breathless while effortlessly exuding her own brand of cocoa sweetness
Easily looking like everything I'd ever imagined a pretty woman would be
In a room filled with beautiful women
It is she who captures my attention
Her beauty,
is...
She's a:
Melanin Rich
Absolutely Gorgeous
Perfectly Brown
Vision of Eye-Catching Chocolate Loveliness
Triple fudge brownie colored skin got me trippin!
Girl is fine for no reason other than to torment me
Leaving me breathless while effortlessly exuding her own brand of cocoa sweetness
Easily looking like everything I'd ever imagined a pretty woman would be
In a room filled with beautiful women
It is she who captures my attention
Her beauty,
is...
#beauty
#happiness
#honesty #love
#honesty #love
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4 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
16th Sep 2024 2:47pm
16th Sep 2024 2:47pm
Among Ancestors
In the quiet of rooms of ancestors, she lay naked face down,
a conduit between generations, breathing in the air
captured by walls her grandfather built
before her own mother's birth. Her legs dangled
silky smooth. They gleamed with a doll-like grace.
The boy standing next to the bed remembers the
knitting needles his grandmother once held.
Her body is an hourglass made of porcelain,
a figurine still in silent dance. Her back curves
gracefully, like a sand dune shaped by the wind,
tapering from her broad shoulders made strong...
a conduit between generations, breathing in the air
captured by walls her grandfather built
before her own mother's birth. Her legs dangled
silky smooth. They gleamed with a doll-like grace.
The boy standing next to the bed remembers the
knitting needles his grandmother once held.
Her body is an hourglass made of porcelain,
a figurine still in silent dance. Her back curves
gracefully, like a sand dune shaped by the wind,
tapering from her broad shoulders made strong...
#beauty
#family
#FirstLove #memories
#FirstLove #memories
218 reads
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FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 4:26pm
15th Sep 2024 4:26pm
Shelf Life
Pretty has a shelf life
Beauty never expires
Fashions change
Trends go away
Eyesight fades
Appreciation and adoration come from the soul;
and are felt even with one's eyes closed
Just like a faded rose pressed into a memory book,
all that looks good will one day lose its prettiness
Even the powerful fragrance that made one's head spin giddily
Will dissipate in time
But those incredible feelings
Inspired when these memories, which nourish and sustain your soul were formed,
Will always remain...
Beauty never expires
Fashions change
Trends go away
Eyesight fades
Appreciation and adoration come from the soul;
and are felt even with one's eyes closed
Just like a faded rose pressed into a memory book,
all that looks good will one day lose its prettiness
Even the powerful fragrance that made one's head spin giddily
Will dissipate in time
But those incredible feelings
Inspired when these memories, which nourish and sustain your soul were formed,
Will always remain...
#admiration
#beauty
#happiness
#love
#romantic
235 reads
3 Comments
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