Poems About Astrology Seeking Honest Critique
#astrology
PAR
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 12:18pm
6th Jan 2025 12:18pm
New year's last lest list lost lust
Next year I definetly
will try to acomplish
some dear dreams:
Buy more bubble wrap
and
Count each star in the night sky
and
Learn to converse with cats.
Learn how to juggle
and
chase butterflies in the park
and
wear mismatched socks daily.
Talk in pirate slang
and
master the art of yodeling
and
adopt an imaginary friend.
Speak only in haikus.
will try to acomplish
some dear dreams:
Buy more bubble wrap
and
Count each star in the night sky
and
Learn to converse with cats.
Learn how to juggle
and
chase butterflies in the park
and
wear mismatched socks daily.
Talk in pirate slang
and
master the art of yodeling
and
adopt an imaginary friend.
Speak only in haikus.
#astrology
#funny
#mirror
#NewYear
#SelfDiscovery
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8 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 6:03am
9th Nov 2024 6:03am
The Prophecy
In the dull fading light, where shadows cling to the land like whispers, a King will rise to claim, bound in chains of fate, cursed to sit a throne of brittle peace, brief as soft breath, lost as the dark night is to the new morning.
The ship of gods, adrift in shallow waters,
steers blind toward its deathly ruin, unmoored by the weight of its own splintered hull.
See, the land trembles beneath that iron pulse of war machines bound, the towns and cities tangled in a thorn of rage, while new and old burn. O sunlit city, how often will you break?
How...
The ship of gods, adrift in shallow waters,
steers blind toward its deathly ruin, unmoored by the weight of its own splintered hull.
See, the land trembles beneath that iron pulse of war machines bound, the towns and cities tangled in a thorn of rage, while new and old burn. O sunlit city, how often will you break?
How...
#apocalypse
#astrology
#mythology #philosophical
#mythology #philosophical
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BaldyBrown
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 3:22am
4th Nov 2024 3:22am
KOYAANISQATSI
There is a digital religion turning quantum-size gears
that’s chewed up the chicken bones and all our fears
An ancient’s purview of our new narcisstic hero
So fear not for he can see you in all your totality
Clever devil, the smartest one in Cornell’s hall
He says sister sky was once inside a little ball
Then BANG! Sincerely, give or take a few billion years
Put him in the cross-hairs of his own perspicacity
See for yourself through his own clever protocol
God is in the machine, and no god but he
Those among us who...
that’s chewed up the chicken bones and all our fears
An ancient’s purview of our new narcisstic hero
So fear not for he can see you in all your totality
Clever devil, the smartest one in Cornell’s hall
He says sister sky was once inside a little ball
Then BANG! Sincerely, give or take a few billion years
Put him in the cross-hairs of his own perspicacity
See for yourself through his own clever protocol
God is in the machine, and no god but he
Those among us who...
#astrology
#mythology
#pagan
#sky
#tradition
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
15th Oct 2024 3:28pm
15th Oct 2024 3:28pm
YOUR AURA IS TELLING YOU
What does your AURA tell you about the deepness of the vibes, that surrounds the very existence of your mind thoughts and insight, into the deepness of your life 🤔 For you can't deny the truth of the affect, that it has a stronger hold on you, in a state of calmness and common sense of evolution. Yet you find thyself sometimes here in your mind, and heart and spiritual soul releaseing that feeling of the negativity. AS you dive into the ream of no space or time. For sure it's here in this moment of tranquility and peace, and calming thoughts that you have learned to separate, the...
#astrology
#faith
#philosophical
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
161 reads
8 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
23rd Sep 2024 5:40am
23rd Sep 2024 5:40am
Laments of Celestial Spheres
In the sanctum where the solar flame
Illuminates the ancient name
We gather 'neath the sigils bright
To mourn the death of celestial light
The spheres align in sacred dance
Yet now, they falter in their trance
O luminous orbs, once bold and grand
Now shadowed relics in a hollowed land
From Arcturus’ gaze to the Pleiades’ grace
We trace the paths of time and space
But whispers rise from the astral sea
As dying stars call out to me
The sun's golden rays, once pure and whole
Are clouded now, consumed by coal ...
Illuminates the ancient name
We gather 'neath the sigils bright
To mourn the death of celestial light
The spheres align in sacred dance
Yet now, they falter in their trance
O luminous orbs, once bold and grand
Now shadowed relics in a hollowed land
From Arcturus’ gaze to the Pleiades’ grace
We trace the paths of time and space
But whispers rise from the astral sea
As dying stars call out to me
The sun's golden rays, once pure and whole
Are clouded now, consumed by coal ...
#astrology
#astronomy
#magic
#sun
#universe
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Duice
Poem Published
29th Aug 2024 2:56am
29th Aug 2024 2:56am
Aries
Spin the astrology wheel
see where the compass points
I’m not the star of one thing
more of a mixed bag of several joints
Django unchained born Aries off the cuffs
I missed the cusp by four days
Known as passionate and emotional
I’ll knock you down in 4 ways
Or albeit Ram in 4 waves
calculative known to rock a few ships
A battle plan in mastered hands
is how fore horns stay equip ...
see where the compass points
I’m not the star of one thing
more of a mixed bag of several joints
Django unchained born Aries off the cuffs
I missed the cusp by four days
Known as passionate and emotional
I’ll knock you down in 4 ways
Or albeit Ram in 4 waves
calculative known to rock a few ships
A battle plan in mastered hands
is how fore horns stay equip ...
#astrology
#astronomy
#happiness
#respect
#uplifting
231 reads
2 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 5:22pm
18th Aug 2024 5:22pm
Scorpius
What is to give light must endure burning.
~ Victor Frankl
Poems like this are thought dangerous
born of blood, bone
and scorched-feathers
of smoldering ash
stirring the heat
striking the sweat
before spreading wings
to ascend
Dig up an underworld
of hidden truth
beneath the rock of its heart
because poems
like this are thought dangerous
their eyes turning
to the sun
surrendering
earthen words
weathered by war ...
~ Victor Frankl
Poems like this are thought dangerous
born of blood, bone
and scorched-feathers
of smoldering ash
stirring the heat
striking the sweat
before spreading wings
to ascend
Dig up an underworld
of hidden truth
beneath the rock of its heart
because poems
like this are thought dangerous
their eyes turning
to the sun
surrendering
earthen words
weathered by war ...
#astrology
#spiritual
549 reads
25 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 1:46pm
18th Aug 2024 1:46pm
Capricorn
1+6=7
7 is God.
16 is Hell.
I'm on fire.
Extinguishing the pyre.
With a name, 5,
Freedom of self.
Escape reality.
Take on, duality.
Achieve the manor,
Of wisdom and filth.
A snake in your garden.
Truths that harden,
A heart of energy.
A world that was built.
Always on fire.
Out of the ashes.
Higher and higher.
No cycle can break me.
I'm out of this world.
Life's a satire.
Too much work, and no hires.
Too much weight on my shoulders,
Just for a...
7 is God.
16 is Hell.
I'm on fire.
Extinguishing the pyre.
With a name, 5,
Freedom of self.
Escape reality.
Take on, duality.
Achieve the manor,
Of wisdom and filth.
A snake in your garden.
Truths that harden,
A heart of energy.
A world that was built.
Always on fire.
Out of the ashes.
Higher and higher.
No cycle can break me.
I'm out of this world.
Life's a satire.
Too much work, and no hires.
Too much weight on my shoulders,
Just for a...
#astrology
#escape
#freedom
#God
#religion
217 reads
15 Comments
slipalong
Poem Published
17th Aug 2024 8:03pm
17th Aug 2024 8:03pm
Dont tip my scales (libra)
I`m warning you: dont tip My scales
its taken years of fine detail
lifes see-saw with its ups & downs
the equilibrium so rarely found
For you behold a happy man
so bend and ear and I`ll expand
look to the heavens, its secret keep
our birthright, we are tied replete
Storm or tempest headed not
all those hotheads loose the plot!
while others carp. wail and moan
just placid notes do I condone
To sail on life with even keel
still forge ahead with caution steeled
for the stars have cast my DNA
I cannot...
its taken years of fine detail
lifes see-saw with its ups & downs
the equilibrium so rarely found
For you behold a happy man
so bend and ear and I`ll expand
look to the heavens, its secret keep
our birthright, we are tied replete
Storm or tempest headed not
all those hotheads loose the plot!
while others carp. wail and moan
just placid notes do I condone
To sail on life with even keel
still forge ahead with caution steeled
for the stars have cast my DNA
I cannot...
#astrology
155 reads
3 Comments
LilDragonFly
Poem Published
10th Aug 2024 8:51pm
10th Aug 2024 8:51pm
Scorpioed
I wear revenge like sequin
always wearing a grin
right before I strike
Always in love, never just like
I am in it for the long haul
everything... or nothing at all
For I only mate for life
with a short Juliette knife
here just in case...
Volcanic behind this face
lava almost overflowing
leaving most unknowing
Searching for one mate
who can consummate
this deep burning desire
A lover who can inspire
one seductive Pisces
unafraid of impending crises
always wearing a grin
right before I strike
Always in love, never just like
I am in it for the long haul
everything... or nothing at all
For I only mate for life
with a short Juliette knife
here just in case...
Volcanic behind this face
lava almost overflowing
leaving most unknowing
Searching for one mate
who can consummate
this deep burning desire
A lover who can inspire
one seductive Pisces
unafraid of impending crises
#astrology
#betrayal
#confessional
#SelfReflection
#WritingPoetry
22 reads
12 Comments
mrmelodyseven
Poem Published
9th Aug 2024 1:44am
9th Aug 2024 1:44am
Libra Always On The Level
Scales of Justice with this
burden you trust us
Not tipping this way or
that way
we all on balance we
always on the level
frontward or backwards spell
level
Great observations we seek
more then we speak
These scales of justice the only
sign not a human or animal
Libra scales of justice that
B who I am
burden you trust us
Not tipping this way or
that way
we all on balance we
always on the level
frontward or backwards spell
level
Great observations we seek
more then we speak
These scales of justice the only
sign not a human or animal
Libra scales of justice that
B who I am
#astrology
207 reads
2 Comments
javalini
Poem Published
7th Aug 2024 8:41pm
7th Aug 2024 8:41pm
WATER BEARER'S BLUES
i've got the jug, babe,
if you've got the time
and i've got some strings
if you've got a rhyme
and i've got a pen
to draw you a dream
of utopian peace
or just think up a scheme
and try this
and try that
and do everything
and be all at once,
pauper and king
and dreamer and doer
and maker of art,
a poetic hopeful,
a mender of hearts,
a loner, then lonely
dispenser of blues
then self contained
sparkler
in brightest of hues
who stands for the weakest
and mourns for their pain, ...
if you've got the time
and i've got some strings
if you've got a rhyme
and i've got a pen
to draw you a dream
of utopian peace
or just think up a scheme
and try this
and try that
and do everything
and be all at once,
pauper and king
and dreamer and doer
and maker of art,
a poetic hopeful,
a mender of hearts,
a loner, then lonely
dispenser of blues
then self contained
sparkler
in brightest of hues
who stands for the weakest
and mourns for their pain, ...
#astrology
182 reads
11 Comments
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