Poems About Astrology Seeking Honest Critique
#astrology
ZINZIN
FARTING
FARTING
Poem Published
5th Apr 2023 2:18pm
5th Apr 2023 2:18pm
From Mouth To Ear
-Poetry is the most healthy human Art, so do not affect it with Erotic Cancer..
-There are parts of speech, as there are parts of body,
put your body parts in their right place.
-If you do not face your fears, your foes, you will never be healthy,
besides, you will be haunted by morbid illusions..
-Try be good and perfect, others' mistakes spare you the attempts you will endure
.-Do not put yoursel in the mouth of the gun, and don't be the target,
nor be the shooter, either, you'd better...
-There are parts of speech, as there are parts of body,
put your body parts in their right place.
-If you do not face your fears, your foes, you will never be healthy,
besides, you will be haunted by morbid illusions..
-Try be good and perfect, others' mistakes spare you the attempts you will endure
.-Do not put yoursel in the mouth of the gun, and don't be the target,
nor be the shooter, either, you'd better...
#astrology
#faith
#fate
#redemption
#karma
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Ahavati
Poem Published
1st Apr 2023 6:56pm
1st Apr 2023 6:56pm
[ NaPoWriMo - 2023 Collection ] Cosmologically Speaking
In The Beginning
There was a Universal Shroud of Turin
a Matrix of crumbed vertebrate
stained with light and debris:
webbed particles
multicellular life
a mycelium
of unsolved mystery
plaguing humankind with a gravity
they were determined to defy
13.8 billion years of expansion
trillions of galaxies and stars
beyond their comprehension
ungrounded contentment
and magnified desire
Bridges of technological design
are manufactured—
fueled by resources
meant to sustain Life ...
There was a Universal Shroud of Turin
a Matrix of crumbed vertebrate
stained with light and debris:
webbed particles
multicellular life
a mycelium
of unsolved mystery
plaguing humankind with a gravity
they were determined to defy
13.8 billion years of expansion
trillions of galaxies and stars
beyond their comprehension
ungrounded contentment
and magnified desire
Bridges of technological design
are manufactured—
fueled by resources
meant to sustain Life ...
#astrology
#spiritual
#astronomy
#magic
#NaPoWriMo2023
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ZINZIN
FARTING
FARTING
Poem Published
24th Mar 2023 3:58pm
24th Mar 2023 3:58pm
Silence Of The Wise Mountain
I have a haunting love for the mountain
Relief comes beside a trickling fountain
Under a shady tree, and piny perfume
Earth is Heaven, and the muse comes rhyming
The sens is reborn, and poetry pouring
The time is still, the spirit's ascending
There's life beyond the earthly gloom
Wing your flight come where the winds' blowing
On mountain's top you get a falcon sight
Clear is the vision, and thoughts are bright
Cast your view, give it to a bird's eye
Lark in the blue heaven, have a poetic flight
...
Relief comes beside a trickling fountain
Under a shady tree, and piny perfume
Earth is Heaven, and the muse comes rhyming
The sens is reborn, and poetry pouring
The time is still, the spirit's ascending
There's life beyond the earthly gloom
Wing your flight come where the winds' blowing
On mountain's top you get a falcon sight
Clear is the vision, and thoughts are bright
Cast your view, give it to a bird's eye
Lark in the blue heaven, have a poetic flight
...
#religion
#astrology
#spiritual
#philosophical
#morality
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ZINZIN
FARTING
FARTING
Poem Published
9th Mar 2023 11:15am
9th Mar 2023 11:15am
Poetical Musings On The Cosmic Void
Those blue spires within blue clouds
Where winged angels roam the heavens
And between the gaping void of the cliffs
The winds blow an eolean anthem
And the cosmic whole lays his hand
Rocky tips challengeing the firmamant
Sending their muted call to space, beyond..
And down on earth, wanders a sylvan spirit
Aetween the aging trees, a murmure is heard
The forest whispers a spotless, timeless tune
Of ghouls and of the past lore of true world
A cavern full of golden...
Where winged angels roam the heavens
And between the gaping void of the cliffs
The winds blow an eolean anthem
And the cosmic whole lays his hand
Rocky tips challengeing the firmamant
Sending their muted call to space, beyond..
And down on earth, wanders a sylvan spirit
Aetween the aging trees, a murmure is heard
The forest whispers a spotless, timeless tune
Of ghouls and of the past lore of true world
A cavern full of golden...
#religion
#astrology
#faith
#mythology
#philosophical
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ZINZIN
FARTING
FARTING
Poem Published
27th Jan 2023 11:20am
27th Jan 2023 11:20am
Silence Of The Grandeur
In the calm space mountains rise
Gigantic, lying breathless and wise
The mute witness of events dead past
Silence and awe, a herculean size
Agape, i admire this majestic might
Senses overwhelmd, awaful insight
Solid evidence of the one Might
Beyon my muse, hard to poetize
Standing below, the time is slow
Or still, a deadless creation to hallow
Awe inspired ,when beauty is raw
Joy in the heart, tears in the eyes.
Long in time, fathomless deep
Ageless mind, a patient's...
Gigantic, lying breathless and wise
The mute witness of events dead past
Silence and awe, a herculean size
Agape, i admire this majestic might
Senses overwhelmd, awaful insight
Solid evidence of the one Might
Beyon my muse, hard to poetize
Standing below, the time is slow
Or still, a deadless creation to hallow
Awe inspired ,when beauty is raw
Joy in the heart, tears in the eyes.
Long in time, fathomless deep
Ageless mind, a patient's...
#astrology
#faith
#fate
#spiritual
#karma
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BlueBeastGirl
Beasty
Beasty
Poem Published
19th Jan 2023 6:39pm
19th Jan 2023 6:39pm
quiet mistakes in the stars
Made the mistake... who am I kidding?
I've made millions when it comes to you
You gave the information so willingly
Birth time and place was all I needed
To align those star lines as it were
Showed my friends our zodiac charts
One said we're the definition of twin flames
It was chilling for someone to say it out loud
The quiet knowledge I've known for years
So I put the charts away in that box
The one in my mind with your name on it
As it's always and maybe always will be with us...
We just don't say the quiet part out...
I've made millions when it comes to you
You gave the information so willingly
Birth time and place was all I needed
To align those star lines as it were
Showed my friends our zodiac charts
One said we're the definition of twin flames
It was chilling for someone to say it out loud
The quiet knowledge I've known for years
So I put the charts away in that box
The one in my mind with your name on it
As it's always and maybe always will be with us...
We just don't say the quiet part out...
#love
#astrology
#spiritual
#witches
#bittersweet
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4 Comments
Fishmander
Poem Published
26th Dec 2022 11:38pm
26th Dec 2022 11:38pm
A Libra's Musings
Taurus, Aries, Libra, Cancer
Mars, Venus, earth, fire
Vexing cardinal disaster
Moon, air and water
Drifting on this starry night
Fellow Venus beyond reprieve
Taurus awake fixed on a mountain
Cannot escape from sadness within
Turning the page, sips from a fountain
Silly mistakes carving skin again
Seeking to keep up in pace
Air so hot she's clipping my wings
Aries in movement you're so precious
Don't forget to admire the trees
Telling the truth, so kind yet vicious
Learn to seduce your...
Mars, Venus, earth, fire
Vexing cardinal disaster
Moon, air and water
Drifting on this starry night
Fellow Venus beyond reprieve
Taurus awake fixed on a mountain
Cannot escape from sadness within
Turning the page, sips from a fountain
Silly mistakes carving skin again
Seeking to keep up in pace
Air so hot she's clipping my wings
Aries in movement you're so precious
Don't forget to admire the trees
Telling the truth, so kind yet vicious
Learn to seduce your...
#love
#dark
#relationships
#astrology
#SelfReflection
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_feral
Poem Published
14th Aug 2022 9:10pm
14th Aug 2022 9:10pm
six word story
nobody
ever warns
you about
wind.
ever warns
you about
wind.
#astrology
#SixWordStory
#minimalist
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CanisInc-Untis
Poem Published
12th Aug 2022 11:45am
12th Aug 2022 11:45am
Eye of Night
dragon wing floating
on the expanse of night
its head swallowing
eye of mortuitous flight
belly embodiment
waxing the fullness of light
ejecting black fire
cometing celestial might
on the expanse of night
its head swallowing
eye of mortuitous flight
belly embodiment
waxing the fullness of light
ejecting black fire
cometing celestial might
#dark
#night
#astrology
#dragons
#astronomy
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MamiB
Bee_
Bee_
Poem Published
1st Aug 2022 8:49pm
1st Aug 2022 8:49pm
Gemini Woman
Two faces adapt to ever changing situations
It’s a shame how vast the reputation supersedes the reality of my undeniable loyalty.
I only change faces when the tune is off beat.
Promiscuous nature evolves into a personal freak
That’s another story for the man who is mine to keep.
In my defense, you only know the depth of which the light will reach
Therefore how could you see from Earth to Mercury
How can you speak on things outside of reach?
I personally believe that adaptation is a gift
that...
It’s a shame how vast the reputation supersedes the reality of my undeniable loyalty.
I only change faces when the tune is off beat.
Promiscuous nature evolves into a personal freak
That’s another story for the man who is mine to keep.
In my defense, you only know the depth of which the light will reach
Therefore how could you see from Earth to Mercury
How can you speak on things outside of reach?
I personally believe that adaptation is a gift
that...
#astrology
196 reads
7 Comments
nightbirdblue
enbyblue
enbyblue
Poem Published
20th Jul 2022 2:58am
20th Jul 2022 2:58am
Breathing Fire [My Birth Chart]
gemini sun:
a contemplative wind
susceptible to whimsy
aries moon:
a transformative pyre
never settling for confinement
sagittarius ascendant:
an inferno blazing new trails
seeking hope on the horizon
leo south node:
childlike in determination
mastering the flame of creation
aquarius north node:
an ethereal projection
humble yet timeless elemental
a contemplative wind
susceptible to whimsy
aries moon:
a transformative pyre
never settling for confinement
sagittarius ascendant:
an inferno blazing new trails
seeking hope on the horizon
leo south node:
childlike in determination
mastering the flame of creation
aquarius north node:
an ethereal projection
humble yet timeless elemental
#stars
#fire
#wind
#astrology
#spiritual
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da_poetic-edifier
Damon
Damon
Poem Published
31st May 2022 7:22pm
31st May 2022 7:22pm
Extraterrestrial
Sometimes I feel like I'm an alien
Wanting to phone home to a friend
To end my existence on planet Earth
Traveling to inhabit a new home turf
Earth is filled with rage, madness & chaos
I prefer to ascend to be amongst the stars
Bars that we're imprisoned in are hard to see
Always feeling like this ain't the place for me
I wanna see astrology from other vantage points
Closer views of the Moon to be able to anoint
To point & touch it as it's illumed in bright blue
If I were an extraterrestrial, this is what I'd...
Wanting to phone home to a friend
To end my existence on planet Earth
Traveling to inhabit a new home turf
Earth is filled with rage, madness & chaos
I prefer to ascend to be amongst the stars
Bars that we're imprisoned in are hard to see
Always feeling like this ain't the place for me
I wanna see astrology from other vantage points
Closer views of the Moon to be able to anoint
To point & touch it as it's illumed in bright blue
If I were an extraterrestrial, this is what I'd...
#earth
#astrology
#aliens #escape
#aliens #escape
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