Poems About Admiration Seeking Friendly Advice
#admiration
Poems about admiration seeking friendly advice. Friendly advice and comments have been requested for these poems.
Greenland
Greenland
The Vikings often fished for cod along the coast
We know as Greenland since they had noticed
Where the ice had thawed, green grass grew
Olav, the hairy, thought it would be a good idea
To bring cattle and women to herd cows
to the island and on the longboat where the Vikings
That had turned to fishing instead of pillaging
The coast of France thought this was a grand idea; furthermore, it was tiresome sitting in a boat without toilet facilities and not having a wench to lighten the onerous life.
Bringing cattle to Greenland was...
The Vikings often fished for cod along the coast
We know as Greenland since they had noticed
Where the ice had thawed, green grass grew
Olav, the hairy, thought it would be a good idea
To bring cattle and women to herd cows
to the island and on the longboat where the Vikings
That had turned to fishing instead of pillaging
The coast of France thought this was a grand idea; furthermore, it was tiresome sitting in a boat without toilet facilities and not having a wench to lighten the onerous life.
Bringing cattle to Greenland was...
#admiration
#emotions
#kindness #love
#kindness #love
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Naaj and Ahhhh...
He is my prancing butt naked
In a flowered apron
Hovering around his simmering stove
Spreading to be his treasure trove
Awaiting those plump
Baked goodies
My Asiatic dragon printed cape
My coping mechanism, my escape hatch
My pantie snatcher
I'm stuck with his sticky
Since he slipped me his poetic mickey
I've become deeply infused
With his rhyme scheme
How he injects, infects
With subliminal inflections
Maybe I've become a living...
In a flowered apron
Hovering around his simmering stove
Spreading to be his treasure trove
Awaiting those plump
Baked goodies
My Asiatic dragon printed cape
My coping mechanism, my escape hatch
My pantie snatcher
I'm stuck with his sticky
Since he slipped me his poetic mickey
I've become deeply infused
With his rhyme scheme
How he injects, infects
With subliminal inflections
Maybe I've become a living...
#admiration
#crush
#LifeAsAWriter
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Priestess of Poetry
Priestess of Poetry
Sharp focus of her camera eyes
Sends solar flares into my schism
Where fire and water collide
Like the birth of the planets
She is the dark eyes of the world
That gaze upon my soul
With the heat of a thousand suns
When she breathes my heart murmurs
In the solitude of rebirth
When her comet streaks into my gilded maleness
From the outer reaches of my plasmic void
As silence is the song
When my orbit swings low
To her sweet chariot of fire
Sharp focus of her camera eyes
Sends solar flares into my schism
Where fire and water collide
Like the birth of the planets
She is the dark eyes of the world
That gaze upon my soul
With the heat of a thousand suns
When she breathes my heart murmurs
In the solitude of rebirth
When her comet streaks into my gilded maleness
From the outer reaches of my plasmic void
As silence is the song
When my orbit swings low
To her sweet chariot of fire
#admiration
#beauty
#women #WritingPoetry
#women #WritingPoetry
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GLAD WE'RE SNOWED IN
MOTHER
nature had blessed us
in wonderful and magical
ways. As the snow paints
the land scape with virgin
white color; the dancing
technicolor flames in the fireplace;
the soft music, low candle lights
our hearts are experiencing a solace
that creates poems that flow
slowly from our souls into the
ears of each other.
AS
we gently kiss and hold each other
closer than our skin, we are in a
new realm of connected love that
creates a new passion that spins
our world into a new and magic world.
OH,
I'm...
nature had blessed us
in wonderful and magical
ways. As the snow paints
the land scape with virgin
white color; the dancing
technicolor flames in the fireplace;
the soft music, low candle lights
our hearts are experiencing a solace
that creates poems that flow
slowly from our souls into the
ears of each other.
AS
we gently kiss and hold each other
closer than our skin, we are in a
new realm of connected love that
creates a new passion that spins
our world into a new and magic world.
OH,
I'm...
#admiration
#gratitude
#happiness
#inspirational
#love
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Hold the Light
I see it in your eyes, that quiet storm,
The way the shadows twist, the way they form.
You wear the weight like I’ve worn mine,
A burden carved in every line.
And though I’m lost, I can’t look away—
I want to pull you from the gray.
Even in this hollow place,
You’re the only thing that feels like grace.
You mean more than you’ll ever know,
In a world so cold, you’re the only glow.
Though I’m drowning, I’ll find a way
To keep you safe from the dark decay.
I don’t care if it pulls me through—
I’ll hold the light, if it...
The way the shadows twist, the way they form.
You wear the weight like I’ve worn mine,
A burden carved in every line.
And though I’m lost, I can’t look away—
I want to pull you from the gray.
Even in this hollow place,
You’re the only thing that feels like grace.
You mean more than you’ll ever know,
In a world so cold, you’re the only glow.
Though I’m drowning, I’ll find a way
To keep you safe from the dark decay.
I don’t care if it pulls me through—
I’ll hold the light, if it...
#admiration
#bittersweet
#FallingInLove
#love
#temptation
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MY ROSE
AMAZING!
My beautiful rose
has become a star,
the brightest in heaven.
HER
light is so brilliant
the sun wears sunglasses.
The radiant glow travels
to the core of the soul
and is so luminous in darkness
of doubt that the magic of love's
power ignites forever in the soul.
OH
my beautiful rose keep shining
refilling my heart with new love
only YOU can bestow.
R-O-S-E you are:
R-adiant
O-ne of a kind
S-ent from heaven
E-xuberant in spirit
My beautiful rose
has become a star,
the brightest in heaven.
HER
light is so brilliant
the sun wears sunglasses.
The radiant glow travels
to the core of the soul
and is so luminous in darkness
of doubt that the magic of love's
power ignites forever in the soul.
OH
my beautiful rose keep shining
refilling my heart with new love
only YOU can bestow.
R-O-S-E you are:
R-adiant
O-ne of a kind
S-ent from heaven
E-xuberant in spirit
#admiration
#happiness
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
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the last bus
That is a day for us losers. No, this is not about the climate
it does well, a dollop of sun there and a splash of rain there, not asking for anyone’s permission
With losers, I mean us who have managed to get old
but living wildly and not going for longevity
That makes us miserable because we have nothing
to look back on and say, sure, I did that
It is not that we didn’t try to make a mark, but
Booze and women got in the way, conquest
a whore in every port
Some of us tried to make a mark by scribbling
Our thoughts on a sheet of paper...
it does well, a dollop of sun there and a splash of rain there, not asking for anyone’s permission
With losers, I mean us who have managed to get old
but living wildly and not going for longevity
That makes us miserable because we have nothing
to look back on and say, sure, I did that
It is not that we didn’t try to make a mark, but
Booze and women got in the way, conquest
a whore in every port
Some of us tried to make a mark by scribbling
Our thoughts on a sheet of paper...
#admiration
#courage
#emotions
#kindness
#love
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the Gotham man
the Gotham man
He is so wealthy, perhaps the richest man
In the world, he enjoyed his lucre and sired
A dozen of male and female children
He has reached middle age, and his youth has
Gone the body, no longer as elastic as before
He has realized, as many men before him
that
Life has a time limit
Great wealth is also power speaks; we listen when
A rich man voices his opinion he has thrown
himself into body politics, perhaps confusing
Opinions as truth
The problem is he has yet to learn the language
Of diplomacy and is...
He is so wealthy, perhaps the richest man
In the world, he enjoyed his lucre and sired
A dozen of male and female children
He has reached middle age, and his youth has
Gone the body, no longer as elastic as before
He has realized, as many men before him
that
Life has a time limit
Great wealth is also power speaks; we listen when
A rich man voices his opinion he has thrown
himself into body politics, perhaps confusing
Opinions as truth
The problem is he has yet to learn the language
Of diplomacy and is...
#admiration
#courage
#emotions #forgiveness
#emotions #forgiveness
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a great day
A great Day
This morning, although Monday has a jubilant
Feel, the wind is light, the winter sun warms
The balcony, as seen sitting inside looking out
This a day to remember running on a domestic
A farm landscape with a pair of dogs upsetting
The sheep see cows clumsily running without
The reason other than it is a beautiful day
It is a day to remember that childhood was not
All misery and poverty
Yes, a day when the old man gets up from his
Chair and dance a tango with his youth
This morning, although Monday has a jubilant
Feel, the wind is light, the winter sun warms
The balcony, as seen sitting inside looking out
This a day to remember running on a domestic
A farm landscape with a pair of dogs upsetting
The sheep see cows clumsily running without
The reason other than it is a beautiful day
It is a day to remember that childhood was not
All misery and poverty
Yes, a day when the old man gets up from his
Chair and dance a tango with his youth
#admiration
#gratitude
#kindness #love
#kindness #love
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Amusement Of Mind
There is no rush, my love
we've defied time and space
more than a few times
sometimes lost
and then found
in a sweet rhyme
And oh, how we've inspired
the amusements of mind
pushing in,
pulling out
pleasures spilled
on the rewind
I've been a problem to myself
always a creature of doubt
instead of enjoying
what is offered
to provide a smile
not a pout
I don't take it lightly,
but I know I must chill
and plunge myself
in the stamina
and push myself...
we've defied time and space
more than a few times
sometimes lost
and then found
in a sweet rhyme
And oh, how we've inspired
the amusements of mind
pushing in,
pulling out
pleasures spilled
on the rewind
I've been a problem to myself
always a creature of doubt
instead of enjoying
what is offered
to provide a smile
not a pout
I don't take it lightly,
but I know I must chill
and plunge myself
in the stamina
and push myself...
#admiration
#crush
#memories
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a January Sunday
A January Sunday
It is forenoon with showers of rain
Houses try to huddle together for warmth
The trees on the avenue are still wrapped
In light that comes on when darkness falls
At five in the afternoon
Indoor heavy jumpers are worn too early to
Switch on the electric heating
We watch TV, drink coffee, wait for lunch
It is forenoon with showers of rain
Houses try to huddle together for warmth
The trees on the avenue are still wrapped
In light that comes on when darkness falls
At five in the afternoon
Indoor heavy jumpers are worn too early to
Switch on the electric heating
We watch TV, drink coffee, wait for lunch
#admiration
#courage
#kindness #love
#kindness #love
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The Euphoria
#admiration
#emotions
#love
#lust
#sensual
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DU Poetry : Poems About Admiration Seeking Friendly Advice