Poems About Acceptance Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about acceptance seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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Besma
Besma
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 8:47am
14th Dec 2024 8:47am
None Can Ever Survive On Its Own and Be
Shall I my very ego embrace
And only me see on Earth face!
*****
Could I my heart keep safe and sound
And all the fears of the mind unbound?
Would I cling to a balmy ivory tower
And just feed on the honey of one flower?
Could I detach my Self from any bond
And to dilemmas be able not to respond?
Would my soul blossom into creative art
As oblivious the mind and confined the heart?
*****
Shall I my very ego embrace
And only me see on Earth face!
*****
How would a flower a bee suffice
To spark the music of a bird of...
And only me see on Earth face!
*****
Could I my heart keep safe and sound
And all the fears of the mind unbound?
Would I cling to a balmy ivory tower
And just feed on the honey of one flower?
Could I detach my Self from any bond
And to dilemmas be able not to respond?
Would my soul blossom into creative art
As oblivious the mind and confined the heart?
*****
Shall I my very ego embrace
And only me see on Earth face!
*****
How would a flower a bee suffice
To spark the music of a bird of...
#acceptance
#learning
#PersonalGrowth
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
90 reads
5 Comments
Loki_Undercover
Wannabe-Poet
Wannabe-Poet
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 3:49am
12th Dec 2024 3:49am
This is the end
She doesn’t text,
She leaves me on read.
Back at it again,
I’m the reigning champion of words unsent.
She doesn’t text,
Left on read.
Silence lingers,
Where words are best left unsaid.
She leaves me on read.
Back at it again,
I’m the reigning champion of words unsent.
She doesn’t text,
Left on read.
Silence lingers,
Where words are best left unsaid.
#acceptance
#MovingOn
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Loki_Undercover
Wannabe-Poet
Wannabe-Poet
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 3:53pm
10th Dec 2024 3:53pm
Without you
Without you, I walk paths I’d never choose,
Speak words I’d never utter,
become someone I barely know.
I am nothing—or maybe just numb—without you.
But I do not need you.
I have to let go.
Let go of you, of us, of the endless what ifs.
Because if I don’t,
I will wither.
I will rot into a shadow of myself,
A hollow thing all will despise.
But I will be better.
I must be better.
I will be, without you…
Speak words I’d never utter,
become someone I barely know.
I am nothing—or maybe just numb—without you.
But I do not need you.
I have to let go.
Let go of you, of us, of the endless what ifs.
Because if I don’t,
I will wither.
I will rot into a shadow of myself,
A hollow thing all will despise.
But I will be better.
I must be better.
I will be, without you…
#acceptance
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0 Comments
Loki_Undercover
Wannabe-Poet
Wannabe-Poet
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 6:00pm
9th Dec 2024 6:00pm
Guilt
You said you waited for me,
As if I hadn’t waited too.
You said my silence was a wound,
But what else could I do?
You claimed you knew the way to heal,
Yet left me in this bind,
We made our vows beneath the stars,
But mine were the ties that blind.
***
I can't escape the thought of you,
Is it wrong to wonder, too,
How do I move on,
When you’re still holding on?
Forgive me, please,
I beg for your mercy,
The love I left unfinished, ...
As if I hadn’t waited too.
You said my silence was a wound,
But what else could I do?
You claimed you knew the way to heal,
Yet left me in this bind,
We made our vows beneath the stars,
But mine were the ties that blind.
***
I can't escape the thought of you,
Is it wrong to wonder, too,
How do I move on,
When you’re still holding on?
Forgive me, please,
I beg for your mercy,
The love I left unfinished, ...
#acceptance
#MovingOn
#religion
119 reads
4 Comments
Loki_Undercover
Wannabe-Poet
Wannabe-Poet
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 5:55pm
9th Dec 2024 5:55pm
Love from afar
Call me insane, I wear it well,
Insanely in love, it’s my secret spell.
Crazy to think I could be enough,
Yet here I am, in this whirlwind of love.
Demented dreams, I hold you tight,
Frantic thoughts consume my nights.
But you, my dear, deserve the sun,
It’s mad to think our fates are one.
You’re blind to the light you truly are,
Crazy to doubt you could go far.
Deranged, perhaps, but I still see,
A beauty in you that was always meant to be set free
Insanely in love, it’s my secret spell.
Crazy to think I could be enough,
Yet here I am, in this whirlwind of love.
Demented dreams, I hold you tight,
Frantic thoughts consume my nights.
But you, my dear, deserve the sun,
It’s mad to think our fates are one.
You’re blind to the light you truly are,
Crazy to doubt you could go far.
Deranged, perhaps, but I still see,
A beauty in you that was always meant to be set free
#acceptance
#FirstLove
#healing
165 reads
1 Comment
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 8:47pm
7th Dec 2024 8:47pm
Look At What He Brought Home With Him
Scott came downstairs and
saw that there was a mermaid
laying on the frat house floor.
Gil told the other
guys that she begged him to help
her escape from Poseidon.
After that, the guys
helped her get into a
bathtub that's filled with water.
They also asked her
to be quiet so that the
house mother does not catch her.
saw that there was a mermaid
laying on the frat house floor.
Gil told the other
guys that she begged him to help
her escape from Poseidon.
After that, the guys
helped her get into a
bathtub that's filled with water.
They also asked her
to be quiet so that the
house mother does not catch her.
#acceptance
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#mermaids
90 reads
2 Comments
Onyxceila
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 5:44am
29th Nov 2024 5:44am
The Oracles Song
To feel the light's nurturing embrace,
Is to have danced within darkness’s gaze.
For from the womb of suffering,
Is the place where strength is born.
the bosom of pain,
Where happiness drank,
remains the place
knowledge is stored.
through the act of deceit,
Truth is conceived.
the belly of hatred,
Where Love plants its seed.
in life’s internal furnace,
Balance is believed.
For to drink from an empty cup,
Does no one any good.
And to pour into a cup too full
Yields only...
Is to have danced within darkness’s gaze.
For from the womb of suffering,
Is the place where strength is born.
the bosom of pain,
Where happiness drank,
remains the place
knowledge is stored.
through the act of deceit,
Truth is conceived.
the belly of hatred,
Where Love plants its seed.
in life’s internal furnace,
Balance is believed.
For to drink from an empty cup,
Does no one any good.
And to pour into a cup too full
Yields only...
#acceptance
#gratitude
#inspirational #LifeGoals
#inspirational #LifeGoals
114 reads
1 Comment
poetic_gawdess
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 4:30am
29th Nov 2024 4:30am
Submission.
Well, it’s finally happened.
I’m officially Life’s bitch.
Its plan to dig its claws into me,
went without a hitch.
Its firm grasp only tightening,
and
won’t let me go,
like a blood binding contract.
it took ownership of my tattered soul.
Why not someone else?
I have literally nothing to offer.
I try to do good, keep my head down,
living a mundane life,
so why bother?
I’ve felt the heaviness on my soul
from such a tender age..
how foolish of me to think I’d leave this lifetime ...
I’m officially Life’s bitch.
Its plan to dig its claws into me,
went without a hitch.
Its firm grasp only tightening,
and
won’t let me go,
like a blood binding contract.
it took ownership of my tattered soul.
Why not someone else?
I have literally nothing to offer.
I try to do good, keep my head down,
living a mundane life,
so why bother?
I’ve felt the heaviness on my soul
from such a tender age..
how foolish of me to think I’d leave this lifetime ...
#acceptance
#honesty
#sadness
#TruthOfLife
#wisdom
178 reads
4 Comments
AprylNovember
a. r. m.
a. r. m.
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 5:34am
28th Nov 2024 5:34am
Decisions, Decisions
The hardest decision.
Is the one with no choice.
An arduous attrition.
Of effort with no point.
A.R.M.
Is the one with no choice.
An arduous attrition.
Of effort with no point.
A.R.M.
#acceptance
#LifeGoals
109 reads
3 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 00:44am
11th Nov 2024 00:44am
Puppy Kiss
Letting a puppy kiss your lips
Shows me that real not AI in a nightmare
Puppies kiss your lips but you’re not solved
Can’t figure myself what I’m all about
Dissolve in my soul of lies trying to realize
What is Real
Im a figure of your imagination looking for me
I can see but I don’t see noise in my eyes
entrapped me and it won’t end easily
All I want is a puppies lips to kiss
Because they feel my soul in a bowl
Always full of love between us
Why Can’t two legs live...
Shows me that real not AI in a nightmare
Puppies kiss your lips but you’re not solved
Can’t figure myself what I’m all about
Dissolve in my soul of lies trying to realize
What is Real
Im a figure of your imagination looking for me
I can see but I don’t see noise in my eyes
entrapped me and it won’t end easily
All I want is a puppies lips to kiss
Because they feel my soul in a bowl
Always full of love between us
Why Can’t two legs live...
#acceptance
#dogs
#happiness #love
#happiness #love
69 reads
0 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 11:41am
4th Nov 2024 11:41am
The Gifts You Have Given Me
Lost Viking,
I embrace your every word
For within each one i have found
The gifts of acceptance and connection
Your words have given me hope
When I needed it the most
Causing me to be glad I'm alive
What greater blessing could there be
Than that of knowing that not only
Do you get me but you are moved by my own words.
Thank you for making my heart smile so big.
I embrace your every word
For within each one i have found
The gifts of acceptance and connection
Your words have given me hope
When I needed it the most
Causing me to be glad I'm alive
What greater blessing could there be
Than that of knowing that not only
Do you get me but you are moved by my own words.
Thank you for making my heart smile so big.
#acceptance
#hope
#kindness #strength
#kindness #strength
151 reads
12 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 7:04pm
22nd Oct 2024 7:04pm
Aggressive Affectionate
Hey! Yo! Come here girl!
You get on my nerves
Yet you are my world
Hey! Yo! Come here boy!
I can't stand your Ass
Yet you are my joy
Yo! Heifer! Come hold my hand!
Things bout you is sicknin'
Yet you make me a better man
Yo! N___A!! What you done now?!?
But you pull us thru hard times
When I don't see how!
Damn It, My Lady!!
What you got goin on?!?
Don't quite understand you
But you've never steered me wrong
Look here, My Brutha!!
You best watch your tone!! ...
You get on my nerves
Yet you are my world
Hey! Yo! Come here boy!
I can't stand your Ass
Yet you are my joy
Yo! Heifer! Come hold my hand!
Things bout you is sicknin'
Yet you make me a better man
Yo! N___A!! What you done now?!?
But you pull us thru hard times
When I don't see how!
Damn It, My Lady!!
What you got goin on?!?
Don't quite understand you
But you've never steered me wrong
Look here, My Brutha!!
You best watch your tone!! ...
#acceptance
#love
#respect #wisdom
#respect #wisdom
132 reads
5 Comments
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