Poems About Acceptance Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about acceptance seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:03pm
Yesterday 2:03pm
I Know This Is Your First Day
Look,
I know
this is your
first day on the
job. But could you please
do me a favor and
rub my back gently? Feels good
so far. Wait a minute. I feel
something going inside my...! Please take
it out! It... it... also feels so damn good!
I know
this is your
first day on the
job. But could you please
do me a favor and
rub my back gently? Feels good
so far. Wait a minute. I feel
something going inside my...! Please take
it out! It... it... also feels so damn good!
#acceptance
#dialogue
#fiction
#regret
#sex
51 reads
2 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:28am
Yesterday 1:28am
What Were You Expecting
Not everything is always sunshine and roses
Or blue skies with pretty eyes that shine
There are days when the haze feels colder
As if some kind of angst is biding our time.
It’s unrealistic to expect everything to be perfect
When the unexpected may be lurking nearby
Some of us with older bones know it to be true
When we’ll have to look at fate right in the eye
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70 Total
Or blue skies with pretty eyes that shine
There are days when the haze feels colder
As if some kind of angst is biding our time.
It’s unrealistic to expect everything to be perfect
When the unexpected may be lurking nearby
Some of us with older bones know it to be true
When we’ll have to look at fate right in the eye
56 Unique Words
70 Total
#acceptance
#death
#fate
30 reads
2 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
13th Apr 2025 00:04am
13th Apr 2025 00:04am
The Ribbons and Her Darkness
Tranquility arrives around sunset
As a journey of some seventeen thousand days winds down
Reflection at this point is so poignant
That messages written in those stars above become clearer
Must be the nostalgia of it all
Time becomes precious and valued with each passing minute
Verses feel more empowered
When poets instinctively begin to compose their magnum opus
58 Unique Words
59 Total
As a journey of some seventeen thousand days winds down
Reflection at this point is so poignant
That messages written in those stars above become clearer
Must be the nostalgia of it all
Time becomes precious and valued with each passing minute
Verses feel more empowered
When poets instinctively begin to compose their magnum opus
58 Unique Words
59 Total
#acceptance
#death
#peace
#universe
#WritingPoetry
47 reads
2 Comments
Stephanos_PS_M
Poem Published
10th Apr 2025 7:51am
10th Apr 2025 7:51am
Life Ain't Black nor White
Between the yes and no,
there stretches a field
where answers grow
like wildflowers, untamed,
their colors bleeding
into the wind.
The heart knows no absolutes,
only the weight of almost,
the whisper of what if,
the ache of not quite.
Truth is not a line,
but a tide
pulling, retreating,
never the same shore twice.
We are all shades of maybe,
flickering in the gray,
where love and loss
taste the same
on trembling lips.
So do not ask for...
there stretches a field
where answers grow
like wildflowers, untamed,
their colors bleeding
into the wind.
The heart knows no absolutes,
only the weight of almost,
the whisper of what if,
the ache of not quite.
Truth is not a line,
but a tide
pulling, retreating,
never the same shore twice.
We are all shades of maybe,
flickering in the gray,
where love and loss
taste the same
on trembling lips.
So do not ask for...
#acceptance
#LifeChangingMoment
#motivational #TimeHeals
#motivational #TimeHeals
47 reads
0 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
6th Apr 2025 00:27am
6th Apr 2025 00:27am
THE PATH AHEAD I CHOOSE TO TAKE (Sat., 4-5-2025, 12:00pm, Palm Springs, California)
this moment too
in timeless time
beyond
all it isn t
as with all things
in life
and this world
indeed nonetheless
still very simply
is
as it is
left on my own
for months and years
at a time
in my life s
journey
with no one else
present
to share it
all with
indeed at times
has left me feeling
so very alone
in this world
increasingly
growing more blind
indeed i know
i should still
feel grateful
for...
in timeless time
beyond
all it isn t
as with all things
in life
and this world
indeed nonetheless
still very simply
is
as it is
left on my own
for months and years
at a time
in my life s
journey
with no one else
present
to share it
all with
indeed at times
has left me feeling
so very alone
in this world
increasingly
growing more blind
indeed i know
i should still
feel grateful
for...
#acceptance
#healing
#LifeGoals
#MovingOn
#PersonalGrowth
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0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 1:48pm
5th Apr 2025 1:48pm
Native Harmony
Here I am as I am a entity of strength and perseverance, still surviving just trying to take it one day at a time ⌚ For the elders say that we are the chosen ones who were chosen, because of our strength and courage and perseverance. TO lead as an example for the wolf pack through the process of our journeys and travels and walks. THROUGH the forest of life and in the world. 🌎 For sure we can be many things in different ways and forms of existence. For sure we have a real sense of survival instinct, for wanting nothing more and nothing less than what we need to survive. 🐺
#acceptance
#identity
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
59 reads
2 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 11:20pm
19th Mar 2025 11:20pm
And yet
You fucked me over like
nothing mattered
while I stood like
a Valkyrie over
your body
ready to
dick kick
anyone
who wanted to hurt you.
But now I’m the one
who wants to hurt you.
So I’ll step
into an embrace
I use to think was sacred
long enough for
you to smell my
shampoo and the
Bath and Body Works
Japanese Cherry Blossom
body butter
on my...
nothing mattered
while I stood like
a Valkyrie over
your body
ready to
dick kick
anyone
who wanted to hurt you.
But now I’m the one
who wants to hurt you.
So I’ll step
into an embrace
I use to think was sacred
long enough for
you to smell my
shampoo and the
Bath and Body Works
Japanese Cherry Blossom
body butter
on my...
#acceptance
#obsession
225 reads
16 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 3:20am
19th Mar 2025 3:20am
Unapologetically
I have no filter
fresh outta apologies
I found my inner self
HE roared back
Genuinely told in caution
greet to introductions
no holds claps
or innuendo snap attack
Sarcasm love language #6
Deadpool sharp direct logic
(cut to end words)
slice harsh into explained speech
Sword tongue spoken
biblic Thank you Lord
I’m mirrored so unique its gospel
[Revelation 19:15] PREACH
Greatness dumb to synopsis
is the preferred stood way
to effectively instruct
my professed class of...
fresh outta apologies
I found my inner self
HE roared back
Genuinely told in caution
greet to introductions
no holds claps
or innuendo snap attack
Sarcasm love language #6
Deadpool sharp direct logic
(cut to end words)
slice harsh into explained speech
Sword tongue spoken
biblic Thank you Lord
I’m mirrored so unique its gospel
[Revelation 19:15] PREACH
Greatness dumb to synopsis
is the preferred stood way
to effectively instruct
my professed class of...
#acceptance
#honesty
#myself
#SelfReflection
#strength
110 reads
2 Comments
Mercurial
Poem Published
16th Mar 2025 7:12am
16th Mar 2025 7:12am
Confessions of a Dying Reality
This fear I hold onto so dear,
Blocks my eyes I can't see the road clear,
I feel it but I know it ain't mine,
Generations of conviction made it shine.
Struggling to create my own domain,
Travelling into the unknown,
Receiving codes hard to decipher,
I'm piercing my heart with a sharp knife.
These dreams make me question my identity,
I feel like a demon among men,
I feel like an angel in my own den,
I've realized i do not exist.
What i perceive is illusory,
With judgements that...
Blocks my eyes I can't see the road clear,
I feel it but I know it ain't mine,
Generations of conviction made it shine.
Struggling to create my own domain,
Travelling into the unknown,
Receiving codes hard to decipher,
I'm piercing my heart with a sharp knife.
These dreams make me question my identity,
I feel like a demon among men,
I feel like an angel in my own den,
I've realized i do not exist.
What i perceive is illusory,
With judgements that...
#acceptance
#confessional
#healing
#learning
#MovingOn
80 reads
0 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
12th Mar 2025 8:18pm
12th Mar 2025 8:18pm
I keep picking the scabs with the clock hands
My bloody heel prints
marked a path from the
broken clockface to the door
where I wandered
this last time
there was a part of me
that believed we'd meet again
and a smaller part
that wanted to
I limp away
to find a Walgreens
or a CVS
where I can buy
a bottle of peroxide
and a box of band aids
time only heals cuts
you don't re-open
marked a path from the
broken clockface to the door
where I wandered
this last time
there was a part of me
that believed we'd meet again
and a smaller part
that wanted to
I limp away
to find a Walgreens
or a CVS
where I can buy
a bottle of peroxide
and a box of band aids
time only heals cuts
you don't re-open
#acceptance
#breakup
#MovingOn
201 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 10:45pm
6th Mar 2025 10:45pm
I'm Home
Mariska looked around
the house with palm
trees surrounding it
and said "I'm home."
the house with palm
trees surrounding it
and said "I'm home."
#acceptance
#fiction
#home
#LifeChangingMoment
#MovingOn
88 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 1:09pm
5th Mar 2025 1:09pm
One Session With An Artist
She walked towards the artist.
She dropped the robe and sat naked.
The artist paints her portrait.
She dropped the robe and sat naked.
The artist paints her portrait.
#acceptance
#art
#fiction
#sex
#success
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