Poems About Acceptance Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about acceptance seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
I'm Home
Mariska looked around
the house with palm
trees surrounding it
and said "I'm home."
the house with palm
trees surrounding it
and said "I'm home."
#acceptance
#fiction
#home
#LifeChangingMoment
#MovingOn
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One Session With An Artist
She walked towards the artist.
She dropped the robe and sat naked.
The artist paints her portrait.
She dropped the robe and sat naked.
The artist paints her portrait.
#acceptance
#art
#fiction
#sex
#success
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What She Wanted To Know
Patricia looked at the mirror.
She's sexy enough for Jesse's pool party.
What she wanted to know.
She's sexy enough for Jesse's pool party.
What she wanted to know.
#acceptance
#beauty
#fiction
#friendship
#home
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I will not text you back
I’m giving up on you and me
For my own sanity
Afraid we’ve only caused each other pain
Relentless to let our love die in vain
For my own sanity
Afraid we’ve only caused each other pain
Relentless to let our love die in vain
#acceptance
#healing
#LifeStruggles
#love
#MovingOn
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Opportunism
It's all unfolding.
So catastrophically well.
That sometimes.
These warcrimes.
Seem justified.
But, that's just the rotting over.
Of my moral life.
Getting beyond good and evil.
Some Zen enlightenment.
And,
The acceptance.
Of life how it is.
What's possible.
And,
How you can.
Get it.
Gets muddied up in the graveyard.
Of ideology.
As my opportunistic spirit.
Keeps telling me.
Less is better.
If none can't be.
Achieved.
So catastrophically well.
That sometimes.
These warcrimes.
Seem justified.
But, that's just the rotting over.
Of my moral life.
Getting beyond good and evil.
Some Zen enlightenment.
And,
The acceptance.
Of life how it is.
What's possible.
And,
How you can.
Get it.
Gets muddied up in the graveyard.
Of ideology.
As my opportunistic spirit.
Keeps telling me.
Less is better.
If none can't be.
Achieved.
#acceptance
#bittersweet
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Beautiful
Beautiful
I know how you feel and see who you are.
You say to get real and that I don't understand,
But I do.
I see you
You're excited, in love, bored and afraid.
When push comes to shove, you think you may fade.
You love to be loved but feel unworthy;
Like life is playing a joke;
Too good to leave,
But too good to believe.
Once you step over the line.
You will get swept into another time.
Afraid to overstep who you can become.
I know how you feel
...
I know how you feel and see who you are.
You say to get real and that I don't understand,
But I do.
I see you
You're excited, in love, bored and afraid.
When push comes to shove, you think you may fade.
You love to be loved but feel unworthy;
Like life is playing a joke;
Too good to leave,
But too good to believe.
Once you step over the line.
You will get swept into another time.
Afraid to overstep who you can become.
I know how you feel
...
#acceptance
#courage
#motivational
#respect
#SelfWorth
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I hate lasagne
the old chap in the pub said nothing
when, after ordering fish and chips he got served with
a plate of lasagne,
which he ate
when, after ordering fish and chips he got served with
a plate of lasagne,
which he ate
#acceptance
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plain to see
stone dropped
in water
ripples echo out
than fade
life,
time,
our stones,
water.
in water
ripples echo out
than fade
life,
time,
our stones,
water.
#acceptance
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What I didn't see on TV
If this woman is bald
and that man does braids
stop shitting and join the dance.
The rhythm pulses, bodies move
eyes meet, smiles meet.
In the center of the track the energy grows
arms rise, feet glide,
the sound envelops, the soul is freed.
Every step is a story told
each turn is a moment lived.
Dance unites, transforms and transcends
and in the end we are all one.
Lights flicker, shadows lengthen,
fragmented moments in time,
the harmony of a silent symphony.
Feet that stumble, hearts...
and that man does braids
stop shitting and join the dance.
The rhythm pulses, bodies move
eyes meet, smiles meet.
In the center of the track the energy grows
arms rise, feet glide,
the sound envelops, the soul is freed.
Every step is a story told
each turn is a moment lived.
Dance unites, transforms and transcends
and in the end we are all one.
Lights flicker, shadows lengthen,
fragmented moments in time,
the harmony of a silent symphony.
Feet that stumble, hearts...
#acceptance
#dance
#emotions
#healing
#relationships
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New Lies ...
The clock strikes twelve, and we raise a glass,
Draped in old habits, cloaked in feeble cheer,
To toast a future built on shaky pasts.
A "new broom sweeps clean" oh, what a farce,
For here we march, the same yet somehow changed,
With fireworks masking all our broken fears.
The air explodes with light, yet silent fears
Lurk close, like shadows in an empty glass.
What truly shifts? What parts of us have changed?
The same old vows, proclaimed with fervent cheer,
Are swept aside as time unveils the farce:
A gleaming path that...
Draped in old habits, cloaked in feeble cheer,
To toast a future built on shaky pasts.
A "new broom sweeps clean" oh, what a farce,
For here we march, the same yet somehow changed,
With fireworks masking all our broken fears.
The air explodes with light, yet silent fears
Lurk close, like shadows in an empty glass.
What truly shifts? What parts of us have changed?
The same old vows, proclaimed with fervent cheer,
Are swept aside as time unveils the farce:
A gleaming path that...
#acceptance
#confusion
#SelfReflection
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Clearly
You clearly don't hold me
In an opinion as high as I to you.
You clearly don't care about me
As much as I do.
Then why is it so hard to accept
And push through?
All you know
Is the surface.
No one pretends
And everything is perfect.
I'm starting to realize
What you did was not okay.
It cut it deep, it can't be fixed
No matter what you say.
I still care immensely
And I know you don't
I hold you so high,
The sky broke.
And everything came crashing down
Throughout the...
In an opinion as high as I to you.
You clearly don't care about me
As much as I do.
Then why is it so hard to accept
And push through?
All you know
Is the surface.
No one pretends
And everything is perfect.
I'm starting to realize
What you did was not okay.
It cut it deep, it can't be fixed
No matter what you say.
I still care immensely
And I know you don't
I hold you so high,
The sky broke.
And everything came crashing down
Throughout the...
#acceptance
#anger
#hurt
#love
#MovingOn
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Don't Walk Back
Don't walk back
Walk forward
If you have to look back
Remember the mountains
Forget the sickly swamp
To spend your nights
Sifting through ash
Searching for answers
Questions of the past
With no end
Until daylight breaks us
From the questioning night
Wake and
Walk forward
Walk forward
If you have to look back
Remember the mountains
Forget the sickly swamp
To spend your nights
Sifting through ash
Searching for answers
Questions of the past
With no end
Until daylight breaks us
From the questioning night
Wake and
Walk forward
#acceptance
#MovingOn
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