Poems About Writing Poetry by Top Critiquers
#WritingPoetry
Poems about writing poetry by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 7:00am
30th Nov 2024 7:00am
In The Hereafter
Write a better world with lovely words
Don’t listen to negative songs of sorrow
Empty souls will fall on wicked swords
Hope stirs in a wind that holds tomorrow
Listen to the voice inside this old heart
Still taking comfort in this familiar beat
Believing that our lives could imitate art
There is no surrender we won’t retreat
As long as breath fills these aging lungs
Beneath the tears remains bright laughter
Hate’s never uttered by creative tongues
Bringing about real change in the hereafter
...
Don’t listen to negative songs of sorrow
Empty souls will fall on wicked swords
Hope stirs in a wind that holds tomorrow
Listen to the voice inside this old heart
Still taking comfort in this familiar beat
Believing that our lives could imitate art
There is no surrender we won’t retreat
As long as breath fills these aging lungs
Beneath the tears remains bright laughter
Hate’s never uttered by creative tongues
Bringing about real change in the hereafter
...
#WritingPoetry
137 reads
19 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 11:26pm
1st Jan 2025 11:26pm
Another stupid poem
I miss you
I wish you never left me
Sadness follows me
A new year, with the same old sorrows
Screw this!
I'm too old for this shit
My feelings and this poem were pathetic
I'm gonna blast some Deicide, cook some burgers and later on watch some Stallone, Schwarzenegger or Lundgren films
By tomorrow morning, she'll be a distant memory.
I wish you never left me
Sadness follows me
A new year, with the same old sorrows
Screw this!
I'm too old for this shit
My feelings and this poem were pathetic
I'm gonna blast some Deicide, cook some burgers and later on watch some Stallone, Schwarzenegger or Lundgren films
By tomorrow morning, she'll be a distant memory.
#love
#MovingOn
#WritingPoetry #fiction
#WritingPoetry #fiction
121 reads
16 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
22nd Jun 2024 10:09pm
22nd Jun 2024 10:09pm
Darkness vs Light
I do not believe there is only just light or just darkness in us
Please just sit still and listen without fuss
I believe in the duality, just wait and see
I will try my best to explain, in a moment or three
I will explain it in my own way
It will not be innocent in the way I convey
Darkness is cold, it has been said
I let the concept ruminate in my head
The light is warmth, it invites you in
Very deceptive, let me begin
Darkness is the sand that we walk upon
The light is the waves it rolls on
It pummels the sand...
Please just sit still and listen without fuss
I believe in the duality, just wait and see
I will try my best to explain, in a moment or three
I will explain it in my own way
It will not be innocent in the way I convey
Darkness is cold, it has been said
I let the concept ruminate in my head
The light is warmth, it invites you in
Very deceptive, let me begin
Darkness is the sand that we walk upon
The light is the waves it rolls on
It pummels the sand...
#rhyming
#WritingPoetry
95 reads
26 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 4:37pm
5th Dec 2024 4:37pm
poets
dismal day don't be my friend
in sadness gloom I find myself
wishing in grief for a brighter tomorrow
where in I could redeem my soul
sacred dawn allow me this priviledge
to cast my lot with the fates
bringing my life to fruition
intution tells me not to follow the path of least resistance
but to blaze my own trail
through the valled of the dead
awakening to new horizons
my sorrow understood in artistic expression
to be an indelible mark on the souls I touch
reaching unto the immortal
in keeping with...
in sadness gloom I find myself
wishing in grief for a brighter tomorrow
where in I could redeem my soul
sacred dawn allow me this priviledge
to cast my lot with the fates
bringing my life to fruition
intution tells me not to follow the path of least resistance
but to blaze my own trail
through the valled of the dead
awakening to new horizons
my sorrow understood in artistic expression
to be an indelible mark on the souls I touch
reaching unto the immortal
in keeping with...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#metaphor
#WritingPoetry
104 reads
12 Comments
Anne-Ri999
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 5:26pm
3rd Feb 2025 5:26pm
Pencilled journey
war is innate to humans
in grief struck times
we leave our battered fields
twenty three years ago
these white fumes
and blood shot eyes
I ignored every warning
while brooding looms are spinning
into reddening festering formations
my clenched grip illuminates
ink blotted figures escape
today
I nailed each carcass
watched it speak
shouting tarnished tales
cloaked blessed obsessed
plagued I stand amidst
humanity
...
in grief struck times
we leave our battered fields
twenty three years ago
these white fumes
and blood shot eyes
I ignored every warning
while brooding looms are spinning
into reddening festering formations
my clenched grip illuminates
ink blotted figures escape
today
I nailed each carcass
watched it speak
shouting tarnished tales
cloaked blessed obsessed
plagued I stand amidst
humanity
...
#WritingPoetry
104 reads
12 Comments
Her
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 2:26am
30th Jan 2025 2:26am
United in Pain
In each post
Each breath
Line, word, letter
The spaces between
We
Do
Not
Give
Up
Each breath
Line, word, letter
The spaces between
We
Do
Not
Give
Up
#courage
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#LifeAsAWriter
#PowerOfWords
#WritingPoetry
178 reads
25 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 3:33pm
8th Feb 2025 3:33pm
Hold My Beer
🍺
I didn't know how to gracefully release
an emotional undercurrent
in a manner that was clear
and concise
without becoming the monster I hate
Until the Poem said, Pssst. . .
Hold my beer.
I didn't know how to gracefully release
an emotional undercurrent
in a manner that was clear
and concise
without becoming the monster I hate
Until the Poem said, Pssst. . .
Hold my beer.
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeStruggles
#minimalist
#WritingPoetry
164 reads
14 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 9:03pm
14th Jan 2025 9:03pm
Where selfies go to die.
Pointless bloody selfies, treasures so grand,
A pic of your face or your bum on the sand.
No story, no meaning, no context to frame,
Yet here they exist, for illusory fame.
A pic of your face or your bum on the sand.
No story, no meaning, no context to frame,
Yet here they exist, for illusory fame.
#WritingPoetry
70 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 9:20pm
18th Jan 2025 9:20pm
Stretches across borderlines
How did we get here in this moment in time when the good shall verses the evil forces, that are hell bent willing to destroy this country, over power and corruption something that has no weight when it's about human life. BUT yet it will leave behind, trails of blood stains that stretches, for miles across our borderlines. But instead we are going through some rough times. 😭 THAT by the grace of God Almighty a blessing is on the horizon, that will bring the world. 🌎 Back from the belly of the war hogs setting the stages for world war 3 😠 But instead it comes as a...
#LifeAsAWriter
#philosophical
#PowerOfWords
#StreamOfConsciousness
#WritingPoetry
49 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 8:20am
5th Jan 2025 8:20am
Excel
Rhymes and spaces
Words some verse
Poets, places
Eyes observe
Pen and ink
Cast magic spells
Thoughts extract
Whilst YOU excel
Words some verse
Poets, places
Eyes observe
Pen and ink
Cast magic spells
Thoughts extract
Whilst YOU excel
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
84 reads
10 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
14th Aug 2024 7:17am
14th Aug 2024 7:17am
I TAKE YOU TO THE BRINK
I take you to the brink
reading spills of my ink.
that slowly warm your blood,
make you forget you're nudd.
Going through the playlist,
soon you will not resist
the offer of my arms,
letting me kiss your charms.
Then we will re-enact,
fiction will become fact,
when what I have described
within you is inscribed.
Then you will sure thank me
for satisfyingly
bringing my words to life
between husband and wife.
reading spills of my ink.
that slowly warm your blood,
make you forget you're nudd.
Going through the playlist,
soon you will not resist
the offer of my arms,
letting me kiss your charms.
Then we will re-enact,
fiction will become fact,
when what I have described
within you is inscribed.
Then you will sure thank me
for satisfyingly
bringing my words to life
between husband and wife.
#erotic
#rhyming
#WritingPoetry
307 reads
4 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 2:53pm
2nd Feb 2025 2:53pm
~misc. minimalist random scribbles:: summated from a past
1.
wafts the nightly run dunes
in a myriad ringing perfumy
runes~ lawsonia-in-blooms
2.
petrified mindfringes
drinks in the syringing rains-
levitational petrichors now
3.
hazy galloping fast, vastly
zebrine skies- tingle & tango
her moony third eye🌔
4.
#Monsoonal #TanglishMinimalist
#mridangam skies rumbly
whelm as #TalaiKaveri tears
5.
oh the giant cannibal
monsoonal glooms, how
you gobble up even
dimly living daylights! ...
wafts the nightly run dunes
in a myriad ringing perfumy
runes~ lawsonia-in-blooms
2.
petrified mindfringes
drinks in the syringing rains-
levitational petrichors now
3.
hazy galloping fast, vastly
zebrine skies- tingle & tango
her moony third eye🌔
4.
#Monsoonal #TanglishMinimalist
#mridangam skies rumbly
whelm as #TalaiKaveri tears
5.
oh the giant cannibal
monsoonal glooms, how
you gobble up even
dimly living daylights! ...
#love
#memories
#minimalist #WritingPoetry
#minimalist #WritingPoetry
107 reads
6 Comments
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