Poems About Writing Poetry Seeking Friendly Advice
#WritingPoetry
Poems about writing poetry seeking friendly advice. Friendly advice and comments have been requested for these poems.
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:17pm
Yesterday 2:17pm
RiP
On sea crests where shadows weave
the sky frown down sullen grey
here she stand in silence grieve
her sobs stifled with sorrow lay
tears as rain like whispers lost
tales told of love within the brine
her hair wild and wind tossed
yet mocking the sunlit waves did shine
she swims and beckons from the tide
she drowns beauty lost in gloom
her essence in waves and breeze
in this sea she reaches for home
the ocean's sorrow swell
hold her tight in its embrace
her haunting song and spell...
the sky frown down sullen grey
here she stand in silence grieve
her sobs stifled with sorrow lay
tears as rain like whispers lost
tales told of love within the brine
her hair wild and wind tossed
yet mocking the sunlit waves did shine
she swims and beckons from the tide
she drowns beauty lost in gloom
her essence in waves and breeze
in this sea she reaches for home
the ocean's sorrow swell
hold her tight in its embrace
her haunting song and spell...
#suicide
#WritingPoetry
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0 Comments
missjem56
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 2:47pm
2nd Apr 2025 2:47pm
The Naked Poet!
For those artists
That have sketched, etched, charcoaled
And painted me, whilst i'm modelling
The only difference is
That i'll be reading prose, as i pose, i suppose
For those spillers of fabulous words, and music
And any creative performer that have heard my words
The only difference
Is that i'll be posing, whilst i'm prosing, i'm supposing
But there is an element of doubt
Whether i want my everything to hang out
My concern, is not about being discreet
It is my genuine requirement for heat!
by Jemia
That have sketched, etched, charcoaled
And painted me, whilst i'm modelling
The only difference is
That i'll be reading prose, as i pose, i suppose
For those spillers of fabulous words, and music
And any creative performer that have heard my words
The only difference
Is that i'll be posing, whilst i'm prosing, i'm supposing
But there is an element of doubt
Whether i want my everything to hang out
My concern, is not about being discreet
It is my genuine requirement for heat!
by Jemia
#art
#freedom
#LifeAsAWriter #WritingPoetry
#LifeAsAWriter #WritingPoetry
37 reads
1 Comment
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 5:17pm
1st Apr 2025 5:17pm
Journey to the Stars
We’re launching a journey to the stars:
a flight of imagination,
a pilgrimage of poetic memoirs,
a hullabaloo of creation.
No jet fuel, ego, or money required
to conquer the world’s gravity;
only thoughtful hearts and minds inspired
will gain us escape velocity.
We don’t carry weapons or millionaires
on this rocket from Underground –
just stories and words, rhythms and prayers,
until each of us is crowned.
We’re led by a loving, Eerie spark
on a path that’s uniquely ours:
to become the lights drowning out...
a flight of imagination,
a pilgrimage of poetic memoirs,
a hullabaloo of creation.
No jet fuel, ego, or money required
to conquer the world’s gravity;
only thoughtful hearts and minds inspired
will gain us escape velocity.
We don’t carry weapons or millionaires
on this rocket from Underground –
just stories and words, rhythms and prayers,
until each of us is crowned.
We’re led by a loving, Eerie spark
on a path that’s uniquely ours:
to become the lights drowning out...
#love
#support
#WritingPoetry
54 reads
7 Comments
Ms-Krissy
Poem Published
30th Mar 2025 2:23pm
30th Mar 2025 2:23pm
To the writers of Deep Underground Poetry
Often quietly lurking in the shadows
As thoughts flowed through our pens
Years spent sharing our our stories, and journeys
I'm proud to have called each of you my friend
I'm sad to hear of the sites ending in May
I'll sure miss all of you!
May we find a new landing place
I'm happy to have called the underground my home
And sad that it's time we all move along
I wish you all the greatest farewell
Never stop writing your master pieces
There are still stories you have to show and tell!
- your friend krissy! 🩷
...
As thoughts flowed through our pens
Years spent sharing our our stories, and journeys
I'm proud to have called each of you my friend
I'm sad to hear of the sites ending in May
I'll sure miss all of you!
May we find a new landing place
I'm happy to have called the underground my home
And sad that it's time we all move along
I wish you all the greatest farewell
Never stop writing your master pieces
There are still stories you have to show and tell!
- your friend krissy! 🩷
...
#friendship
#WritingPoetry
46 reads
0 Comments
DallasNichols
Poem Published
30th Mar 2025 2:15pm
30th Mar 2025 2:15pm
The Ass
#erotic
#lust
#sex
#women
#WritingPoetry
175 reads
0 Comments
Metropolis
Poem Published
25th Mar 2025 00:58am
25th Mar 2025 00:58am
The Chain (DUP)
my lines (contribution) didn't make the cut so...
#WritingPoetry
56 reads
4 Comments
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2025 4:42am
23rd Mar 2025 4:42am
A Farewell to DUville Residents
within my glowing screen words take flight
the portal opens a gathering of souls
congregation of people in silent nights
weaving their worlds in soft twilight
Cryptic lines as riddles to find
philosophies that bent the mind
erotica written seductive whispers
tender and raw in inviting
verses
we wrote of love with tender grace
wove words that pined of days gone by
memories regrets passion and wishes
yet another wrote with logic firm
embrace practical truth someone's way
beautiful thoughts as gifts in...
the portal opens a gathering of souls
congregation of people in silent nights
weaving their worlds in soft twilight
Cryptic lines as riddles to find
philosophies that bent the mind
erotica written seductive whispers
tender and raw in inviting
verses
we wrote of love with tender grace
wove words that pined of days gone by
memories regrets passion and wishes
yet another wrote with logic firm
embrace practical truth someone's way
beautiful thoughts as gifts in...
#WritingPoetry
114 reads
8 Comments
Metropolis
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 5:15pm
22nd Mar 2025 5:15pm
Farewell DU: A Community's Last Stand.
Farewell DU: A Community's Last Stand.
To James_A_Knight
I tried to comment on your last posted poem ("Are We Lost? - My Last Poem on DUP - Goodbye, everybody. Huge thank you to everyone")—however, unlike others, the site kept giving me a message that the title was too long and would not accept my comment.
Your poem is an incredible example of the talent here on Deep Underground Poetry. The heartfelt message you left should be read by everyone.
With the news that the site is closing, it's really sad to observe so many broken hearts. The...
To James_A_Knight
I tried to comment on your last posted poem ("Are We Lost? - My Last Poem on DUP - Goodbye, everybody. Huge thank you to everyone")—however, unlike others, the site kept giving me a message that the title was too long and would not accept my comment.
Your poem is an incredible example of the talent here on Deep Underground Poetry. The heartfelt message you left should be read by everyone.
With the news that the site is closing, it's really sad to observe so many broken hearts. The...
#WritingPoetry
95 reads
4 Comments
paperstains
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 7:06am
22nd Mar 2025 7:06am
Reverie in Warner Theatre
Listening in the dark
just Jason and his guitar
reminding me of all the times
I've been betrayed
by my own rhymes
and constructed phrases
I'm okay with it
in a crooked smile, shiny eyes
kind of way
All the love songs (and poetry)
do mean different things today
and while that may hurt
in the moments you realize they do
there's some comfort in that truth
Every note, clear as a bell
fills the hushed theatre
and finds me in my seat
turning pages of memories
while I etch this one
on...
just Jason and his guitar
reminding me of all the times
I've been betrayed
by my own rhymes
and constructed phrases
I'm okay with it
in a crooked smile, shiny eyes
kind of way
All the love songs (and poetry)
do mean different things today
and while that may hurt
in the moments you realize they do
there's some comfort in that truth
Every note, clear as a bell
fills the hushed theatre
and finds me in my seat
turning pages of memories
while I etch this one
on...
#bittersweet
#love
#memories
#music
#WritingPoetry
101 reads
0 Comments
DevilsChild
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 6:48am
22nd Mar 2025 6:48am
Shut Up and Write (Posted 9/9/2022)
when I first arrived at DUP
was still bright eyed
wanted to explore my creative side
had a few people look my way
built me up as their play thing
when done they tried to push me aside
but I refused to die
fought back and became the bad guy
a new generation came
the ones before left or changed
I just been trying to find my place
amongst the mundane
do I hold resentment?
fuck yeah I still hold resentment
those same poets act like such victims
writing for attention
about...
was still bright eyed
wanted to explore my creative side
had a few people look my way
built me up as their play thing
when done they tried to push me aside
but I refused to die
fought back and became the bad guy
a new generation came
the ones before left or changed
I just been trying to find my place
amongst the mundane
do I hold resentment?
fuck yeah I still hold resentment
those same poets act like such victims
writing for attention
about...
#WritingPoetry
94 reads
1 Comment
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 7:10am
21st Mar 2025 7:10am
DUP, Starsrite and me
Dear everyone
Before I start I would first like to express my great heartfelt sorrow at knowing that Deepundergroundpoetry is closing down. DUP had been a second home to me and to many poets like myself. I have met many friends, read some amazing words, poems and stories that touched my heart and made me the person who I am right now. But most of all I’m very grateful to the owners of DUP and everyone who has worked relentlessly to bring together such a great community of poets and writers under their wings. I also know how difficult it is to make such a site work, and what...
Before I start I would first like to express my great heartfelt sorrow at knowing that Deepundergroundpoetry is closing down. DUP had been a second home to me and to many poets like myself. I have met many friends, read some amazing words, poems and stories that touched my heart and made me the person who I am right now. But most of all I’m very grateful to the owners of DUP and everyone who has worked relentlessly to bring together such a great community of poets and writers under their wings. I also know how difficult it is to make such a site work, and what...
#WritingPoetry
173 reads
15 Comments
Poetryman
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 1:44pm
19th Mar 2025 1:44pm
Deep Underground Poets
14 years sharing my verse
loving some of you in my poems
As friends and lovers
As collaborators washing one another in ink
Spilling blood in the fires of Hell
In the bliss Of ecstacy
Makes Parting ways a torturous death
My heart is breaking for those who will never know
For those I love so dearly, never to share rhymes and lines
If you want collaborate as bards or other arts
Write me at jjpoetryman@gmail.com
Hear my song at https://youtube.com/@jjjohnson4177
Paint the sky with words
As you have painted my heart
So that i...
loving some of you in my poems
As friends and lovers
As collaborators washing one another in ink
Spilling blood in the fires of Hell
In the bliss Of ecstacy
Makes Parting ways a torturous death
My heart is breaking for those who will never know
For those I love so dearly, never to share rhymes and lines
If you want collaborate as bards or other arts
Write me at jjpoetryman@gmail.com
Hear my song at https://youtube.com/@jjjohnson4177
Paint the sky with words
As you have painted my heart
So that i...
#friendship
#love
#sadness #WritingPoetry
#sadness #WritingPoetry
91 reads
4 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Writing Poetry Seeking Friendly Advice
