Poems About Thrill Seeking Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about thrill seeking seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Aug 2024 11:25am
29th Aug 2024 11:25am
Coulrophobia
Dress up as a clown
Clowns create hysteria
Bring fear to your friends
Clowns create hysteria
Bring fear to your friends
#anxiety
#fear
#satirical
#senryu
#ThrillSeeking
130 reads
8 Comments
KrumblyKrumb16
Poem Published
30th Jul 2024 9:58am
30th Jul 2024 9:58am
I lie awake
Oh, how I can't wait,
To grow up into the things,
That bring my nightmares.
To grow up into the things,
That bring my nightmares.
#fear
#senryu
#ThrillSeeking
117 reads
1 Comment
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
29th Jul 2024 3:46am
29th Jul 2024 3:46am
Deglittering
He was like an object that sparkled
I love things that sparkle.
They attract me,
even if their light
is not their own.
Even when he was the light itself,
he kept going dark on me.
all too often
when I was shining the hardest.
He did it with subtle cruelty
Without warning.
And after one too many times,
the scintillating, electrified glitter
that enlivened my tomorrows
scattered away
turned...
I love things that sparkle.
They attract me,
even if their light
is not their own.
Even when he was the light itself,
he kept going dark on me.
all too often
when I was shining the hardest.
He did it with subtle cruelty
Without warning.
And after one too many times,
the scintillating, electrified glitter
that enlivened my tomorrows
scattered away
turned...
#choices
#disappointment
#relationships #ThrillSeeking
#relationships #ThrillSeeking
211 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Jul 2024 11:28am
25th Jul 2024 11:28am
You Lose & You'll Come Back Again
The one arm bandit
Temptation lures you closer
Man versus machine
You know who will win
We humans come back for more
The house will prevail
Wallet getting thin
Lady luck please help me out
She's never around
I lost everything
Should I jump off this building
Nah, I'll be back again
Temptation lures you closer
Man versus machine
You know who will win
We humans come back for more
The house will prevail
Wallet getting thin
Lady luck please help me out
She's never around
I lost everything
Should I jump off this building
Nah, I'll be back again
#addiction
#haiku
#LifeStruggles
#temptation
#ThrillSeeking
161 reads
6 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
21st Jul 2024 3:52pm
21st Jul 2024 3:52pm
Falling for you is like a zip line over Niagara
It was fucking pouring
when I stepped up
to the Niagara Falls zipline,
200 feet in the air.
But there was no lighting
so the ride was open
with a short,
short line
and I felt
like flying
The kid in braces
locked my carabiners
to the doo-hickey that would
hopefully hold my wet ass
in the air for the
next 60 seconds
and he told me to lean back
into the harness
and starfish
Fuck? What? Say what?
...
when I stepped up
to the Niagara Falls zipline,
200 feet in the air.
But there was no lighting
so the ride was open
with a short,
short line
and I felt
like flying
The kid in braces
locked my carabiners
to the doo-hickey that would
hopefully hold my wet ass
in the air for the
next 60 seconds
and he told me to lean back
into the harness
and starfish
Fuck? What? Say what?
...
#FallingInLove
#hope
#relationships
#romantic
#ThrillSeeking
344 reads
22 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
14th Jul 2024 7:20pm
14th Jul 2024 7:20pm
Darin' Aaron
Little Aaron is circling the Barbed Wire Museum parking lot on his Big Wheel, hoping to find some younger kids to run over. His parents are informing a bored couple that it's their fourth annual visit. Barb, Aaron's four-year-old sister, picks her nose, wipes it on her shorts, and hums a rap song.
Aaron graduates to a full-sized bike at seven. Out of sight of his parents, he favors bumping his way down flights of stairs, pedaling at warp speed, and flying over small obstacles like puddles and poodles. In a grocery store parking lot near home one day, he lifts his black Schwinn...
Aaron graduates to a full-sized bike at seven. Out of sight of his parents, he favors bumping his way down flights of stairs, pedaling at warp speed, and flying over small obstacles like puddles and poodles. In a grocery store parking lot near home one day, he lifts his black Schwinn...
#freedom
#LifeStruggles
#ThrillSeeking
212 reads
9 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
4th Jul 2024 11:00am
4th Jul 2024 11:00am
Have a blast!!
If you're gonna get high or pound down booze
Think before you act, sparking up that fuse
You don't want to end up like this guy here
Enjoy the 4th everyone!
Think before you act, sparking up that fuse
You don't want to end up like this guy here
Enjoy the 4th everyone!
#holiday
#motivational
#temptation #ThrillSeeking
#temptation #ThrillSeeking
161 reads
13 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
1st Jul 2024 3:36pm
1st Jul 2024 3:36pm
Naylor
To a post.
At the light.
For all to see.
For all to like.
Rip the clothes.
Look in the eyes.
No way to run.
No way to hide.
Cease the moment.
Take your prize.
Enforce fulfillment.
As she cries.
Nail her good.
With hands bind.
Leave her lost.
Only you can find.
At the light.
For all to see.
For all to like.
Rip the clothes.
Look in the eyes.
No way to run.
No way to hide.
Cease the moment.
Take your prize.
Enforce fulfillment.
As she cries.
Nail her good.
With hands bind.
Leave her lost.
Only you can find.
#ThrillSeeking
245 reads
13 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
15th Jun 2024 1:32pm
15th Jun 2024 1:32pm
Sloppy Joe
I gave Joe
A piece of my mind.
Brains a plenty.
Took him from behind.
A cumslut trickster.
Hope my boyfriend doesn't find,
Sloppy Joe,
Taking his time.
I'm a full meal.
He came back for seconds.
I'm a lunch break; He needs his fill.
He's impatient.
Sloppy on the exit.
A slippery invasion.
My guilty pleasure.
A daily occasion.
A piece of my mind.
Brains a plenty.
Took him from behind.
A cumslut trickster.
Hope my boyfriend doesn't find,
Sloppy Joe,
Taking his time.
I'm a full meal.
He came back for seconds.
I'm a lunch break; He needs his fill.
He's impatient.
Sloppy on the exit.
A slippery invasion.
My guilty pleasure.
A daily occasion.
#ThrillSeeking
265 reads
14 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Jun 2024 11:19am
10th Jun 2024 11:19am
Let's go riding
Do you remember your first time?
An out of this world experience
Terror, Joy and fantasy all wrapped into one...Fascinating!
These beasts tower over amusement parks
the curves and loops of these Steel & Wooden coasters
brilliantly daring, dominating your curiosity
Anticipation as the train begins to lift
slowly creeping up the track
people, buildings & trees are shrinking
almost at the top
your heart is pumping really fast.
you can view the entire park
HERE WE GO....DOWN!!!
The air whistles past your...
An out of this world experience
Terror, Joy and fantasy all wrapped into one...Fascinating!
These beasts tower over amusement parks
the curves and loops of these Steel & Wooden coasters
brilliantly daring, dominating your curiosity
Anticipation as the train begins to lift
slowly creeping up the track
people, buildings & trees are shrinking
almost at the top
your heart is pumping really fast.
you can view the entire park
HERE WE GO....DOWN!!!
The air whistles past your...
#happiness
#memories
#nostalgia
#ThrillSeeking
#uplifting
189 reads
11 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
9th Jun 2024 6:42pm
9th Jun 2024 6:42pm
Angry Sun
I scorch for fun
The prodigal son.
Destroying all in my midst.
Every law I break,
My family; ashamed.
I don't take it,
Serious.
Im in search of lust.
For the latest trend.
All the slaves in cuffs,
Are jealous,
I am free of their revenge.
I roam about,
For, I am, allowed.
God creates the sin.
He casts me out,
Screams and shouts.
Through him,
I ascend.
Still I scorch for fun,
Like an angry sun.
I envelop all within.
Like ants on the run,
The...
The prodigal son.
Destroying all in my midst.
Every law I break,
My family; ashamed.
I don't take it,
Serious.
Im in search of lust.
For the latest trend.
All the slaves in cuffs,
Are jealous,
I am free of their revenge.
I roam about,
For, I am, allowed.
God creates the sin.
He casts me out,
Screams and shouts.
Through him,
I ascend.
Still I scorch for fun,
Like an angry sun.
I envelop all within.
Like ants on the run,
The...
#faith
#sun
#ThrillSeeking
200 reads
11 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
6th Jun 2024 8:46pm
6th Jun 2024 8:46pm
In love with a sex toy (Hentai Fantasy ACTIVATED)
#dirty
#erotic
#sex #ThrillSeeking
#sex #ThrillSeeking
433 reads
22 Comments
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