Stream Of Consciousness Seeking Honest Critique Poems

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summultima
uma

Poem Published
Yesterday 4:56pm

�. and then still up to the summit of Kangchenjunga, now so pure and ethereal we can scarcely believe it is part of the solid earth on which we stand; and so high it seems part of the very sky itself." ~ The Epic of Mount Everest, 1926, �by Sir Francis Younghusband

�. the conflicting
duality goes on & on.. �
what remains ultimate
is the �love� �
in Kanchenjunga heights
but, in a deeply digging
earthen sedimentation

1.
�feels like
a puristic
tragicomedy
or even better
a ...

#conflict #nature
#spiritual #StreamOfConsciousness

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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33

Poem Published
Yesterday 1:46pm

In this life we all will be face with the deepness of the negativity, that somehow will create an environment that is unsafe and unfair, to the quality of your life. But yet we must have a real understand, were does that negativity comes from that seems to change our lives. For example could it come from those around us, or could it come from those things that we just don't like to come into our lives, just destructing our own way of thinking about life. For let's take it farther than that in high sight of trying, desperately to avoid the drama and nonsense that it will make your attitude,...

#emotional #ignorance #metaphor #philosophical #StreamOfConsciousness

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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie

Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 8:59pm

There are no jokes being made.� A loud, boisterous voice said, coming from the left side of the room.

A tall man wearing a white shirt and black slacks was standing in the doorway to the office that they were all destined to be.

�Come inside, all of you. Margot dear, please make the coffee.� Mr. Haughton

�Right away.� Margot said.

Kat rose and followed the others inside the office.

�Mr. Haughton, do you not feel that she is too young to be part of this group?� Charlie immediately voiced his opinion.

Mr. Haughton sat down at his...

#StreamOfConsciousness

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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33

Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 00:38am

Come and become relaxed in vibes that will affect the very, foundation of your true spiritual existence. For let's take a silent walk through, the forest of the trees of life. For don't be afraid of learning what is necessary to learn, about thyself as we go deeper than deep into the deepness of your own mind and heart. Yet as you go through the process of just eliminate what we don't want and need, you replaced it with positivity as that is what you want and need to feel, the deepness of the affect that this place has upon you. For just stop and look and listen, not to your heart but listen...

#emotional #faith #spiritual #StreamOfConsciousness #uplifting

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summultima
uma

Poem Published
4th Feb 2025 4:31pm

viz: shivaicshakti

#love #nature
#spiritual #StreamOfConsciousness

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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33

Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 2:38pm

From my thoughts are things that I still don't understand, but yet I find myself lost in my own chain of thoughts. TRYING to shut my mind, down and off from thinking about so much. THAT it seems to haunt my brain. 🧠 TILL I can feel the deepness of the tension, exploding in my brain waves creeping, into my silent whispers of the unseen. THAT only I see which has now become, my darkness of night dreams. Yet I am unafraid to go deeper than deep, into the process of my own curiosity. THAT I want to dig deeper into the reason why am I having these, type of thoughts only at night when the...

#confusion #dark #denial #philosophical #StreamOfConsciousness

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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33

Poem Published
3rd Feb 2025 00:52am

Let's be honest with thyself as strong as woman to woman, for we expect a level of respect and have a sense of intelligence, with common sense to articulate with understanding. What I'm saying is I need you to be able to see me, as I am as a woman very strong and intelligent as a person. For sure it's true that I've been down as I've been up since, I had no other choice. For sure I have my faith and beliefs, to help guide me through all that I have, to go through in life. But mostly I have my faith in my GOD ALMIGHTY, to protect me from harm from others and myself and protect me from the...

#dialogue #hope #respect #StreamOfConsciousness #uplifting

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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33

Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 3:51pm

I am here for you no matter what you are going through in your life, for I give to my most strongest soldiers no more than they can stand. FOR sure no matter how dark it gets, I am there to shine the heavenly Halo's, above your head just reaching into your heart and spiritual, subconsciousness of your own mind. For sure life wasn't meant to be easy, for there will be hard times and good times in the cross roads of what is life. THAT we all will have to journey and travel and walk, through this vortex of life. 🙏 Yet have no fear because I will always be there, for you to guide you and...

#faith #spiritual #StreamOfConsciousness #strength #TruthOfLife

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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33

Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 11:18pm

Here I am, as I am me as a writer of unspoken words ✍️ For let's take a few seconds to analyze, what I'm saying about a situation that affects, us all as writers of words ✍️ That being said is why do we judge someone else, by the entity that they use to showcase who they are in real life 🤨 But yet that is far from the truth, of who they really are in real life 🤨 For sometimes we hide behind a mask as a disguise, as we use an entity not to hide, behind a mask as a disguise. 😔 BUT to learn lessons on this subject of life. For sure as writers we...

#LifeAsAWriter #philosophical #SelfDiscovery #SelfReflection #StreamOfConsciousness

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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33

Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 1:58am

🙊🙈🙉 There is always gonna be good versus evil forces, no matter how much you don't care, to stop and look and listen, for even through centuries back in time of biblical beliefs. WE stood as one nation under one GOD OF COMMAND. But yet instead here we are still fighting against the evil forces, for political games that they say that the greatest, thing the devils in human skin has done was to have some of you to believe, that he doesn't really don't exist. 🤔 YET here we are now in 2025, still going through things that are really unnecessary, and for what...

#HumanRights #LifeAsAWriter #LifeStruggles #PowerOfWords #StreamOfConsciousness

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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33

Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 10:24pm

Why we can't find someone who means what they say, and not do anything to prove to you how are they gonna, be able to know what you need and really want, in your life and world. 🌍 For it's seems that nowadays it's getting harder, to tell the differences between what is good and bad, or if it's real or fake which makes it that harder to know, on who we should trust between the lines of what is the truth or lies. For tell me why we can't find, the real genuine deepness of what it meant to have a real commitment, with real consistency and real communications skills. TO articulate what...

#disappointment #emptiness #heartbroken #rejection #StreamOfConsciousness

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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33

Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 3:13pm

As I stop and look and listen not only to my own mind and heart, I listen carefully to what others have to say on what they think and say about some situations, for sure it's true we all have our own opinions on what we see and hear, and read between the lines ✍️ For it's a pleasure to be able to have grown FOLKS conversations, as we can agree or disagree, but yet come together with a positive level of understanding, and walk away with knowledge and wisdom and enlightenment. With insight and the spiritual subconsciousness of our lives and dreams. Still intact with our endless,...

#dialogue #gratitude #philosophical #StreamOfConsciousness #uplifting

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