Poems About Self Discovery Seeking Honest Critique
#SelfDiscovery
Poems about self discovery seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
MalcolmG
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 6:08pm
9th Dec 2024 6:08pm
My Abyss ...
I walk along the lonely edges,
where shadows don’t end,
they begin in my head,
where my whispers traverse the boundary of my mind,
tiptoeing along the brims of insanity while trudging along with curiosity.
Thoughts unraveling the history's of time,
In the void, my reflection dissolves each memory,
I search, but there’s no answers that will ever come from the depths,
Just the depth themselves that stares back at me.
Above, stars break the sky,
shattering the dark into fleeting moments
of something brighter ...
where shadows don’t end,
they begin in my head,
where my whispers traverse the boundary of my mind,
tiptoeing along the brims of insanity while trudging along with curiosity.
Thoughts unraveling the history's of time,
In the void, my reflection dissolves each memory,
I search, but there’s no answers that will ever come from the depths,
Just the depth themselves that stares back at me.
Above, stars break the sky,
shattering the dark into fleeting moments
of something brighter ...
#dark
#philosophical
#SelfDiscovery #SelfReflection
#SelfDiscovery #SelfReflection
56 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 1:07pm
6th Dec 2024 1:07pm
We all have a want and need
😔 Yet I am not alone with the silent whispers of the gentle winds, blowing through the air conditioning my thoughts, as well as my spiritual entity. For sure there is nothing between us, but the sounds of the crystal water falls off into the distance. But yet as I am deeply reminded, of the words once spoken by the elders. 🙏 THAT no one is sent to you by chance or accident, to be apart of your life. 🤔 For during this life we all have to learn how to navigate, through the process of the truth of nonsense. 🤨 That we all must face it in mind and thoughts, and...
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
61 reads
2 Comments
Isgyppie_
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 6:16am
5th Dec 2024 6:16am
Plummet
Life is only a matter of falling in
And falling out
And as I plummet
I am everything I have become
Growth is not measured in altitude
There are many lessons in the ravines
As well as the peaks
And now I will rest in the rivers
And take comfort in the shade
I’ll look up to the exposed cliff I once scaled
And mend the consequences
I can now say I have become
And I am falling out of strength
To become soft again
And I’m falling out of exploration
To become safe again
And I’m falling out of...
And falling out
And as I plummet
I am everything I have become
Growth is not measured in altitude
There are many lessons in the ravines
As well as the peaks
And now I will rest in the rivers
And take comfort in the shade
I’ll look up to the exposed cliff I once scaled
And mend the consequences
I can now say I have become
And I am falling out of strength
To become soft again
And I’m falling out of exploration
To become safe again
And I’m falling out of...
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
47 reads
3 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 1:06am
5th Dec 2024 1:06am
The power of the dream catcher
Did you ever have a dream that finds at times to put you in a state of mind, that you will forever remember that will affect you in ways. THAT you could never image that it can be done 🤔. For sure we all have dreams, that we can talk about them, out loud when we know that. THEY can be able to appear to come true in reality. For having silent whispers of dreams are important, not just for the real betterment of your life and the goodness 🙏 For your subconscious of your thoughts in the world. 🌎 For sure why do when we have dreams, is it that just means, that we truly....
#dreams
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
#StreamOfConsciousness
58 reads
2 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 11:54am
3rd Dec 2024 11:54am
Emanations of the Mind...
Often I get lost in my thought,
In those recesses of my intellect,
where ambivalence interlaces with the glimmering of discernment,
I traverse looking for the ineffable,
the elusive sagacity spoken softly in the stillness of quiet reflection.
Emerging from the profound depths of contemplation,
a sudden effulgence of clarity,
as comprehension unfurls like the delicate tendrils of an ethereal bloom,
grasping, attaining, a verity both fragile and steadfast.
I wander through the consecrated halls of philosophy and education,
where...
In those recesses of my intellect,
where ambivalence interlaces with the glimmering of discernment,
I traverse looking for the ineffable,
the elusive sagacity spoken softly in the stillness of quiet reflection.
Emerging from the profound depths of contemplation,
a sudden effulgence of clarity,
as comprehension unfurls like the delicate tendrils of an ethereal bloom,
grasping, attaining, a verity both fragile and steadfast.
I wander through the consecrated halls of philosophy and education,
where...
#learning
#SelfDiscovery
#wisdom
31 reads
0 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 7:42pm
29th Nov 2024 7:42pm
Ist Heut Ein Platz Aus Stahl
Broken snow globes
coldly misplaced around a dying fireplace
Cracks forming within realities resolve
for a second there it sounded like she said
Half mumbled truths
or was it stories of bygone days?
These well worn tracks
marked cross roads of well trodden suffering
Once one little taste
harmless partaking from Sugarman's bag of treats
Still beating heart dances
ripped out from chest cavity
Fitting somehow
throwing caution to the wind
...
coldly misplaced around a dying fireplace
Cracks forming within realities resolve
for a second there it sounded like she said
Half mumbled truths
or was it stories of bygone days?
These well worn tracks
marked cross roads of well trodden suffering
Once one little taste
harmless partaking from Sugarman's bag of treats
Still beating heart dances
ripped out from chest cavity
Fitting somehow
throwing caution to the wind
...
#SelfDiscovery
46 reads
0 Comments
SeaCat
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 5:44pm
29th Nov 2024 5:44pm
Sole Imprints
On the deserted, unspoiled beach, I saw delicate
depressions in the sand, pacing alongside mine.
Wondering at those empty imprints of toe and sole,
I dared to match their easy step.
I asked the sky, the clouds, sea, and rocks for meaning
and understanding, of the tracks in which I fitted my feet.
In the cloud of unknowing, rolling from The Sea, I learned,
not by degrees, but through warm gnosis,
to espouse the anima by my side, delicate as
iron beneath her veil, twisting bone-lace through...
depressions in the sand, pacing alongside mine.
Wondering at those empty imprints of toe and sole,
I dared to match their easy step.
I asked the sky, the clouds, sea, and rocks for meaning
and understanding, of the tracks in which I fitted my feet.
In the cloud of unknowing, rolling from The Sea, I learned,
not by degrees, but through warm gnosis,
to espouse the anima by my side, delicate as
iron beneath her veil, twisting bone-lace through...
#love
#SelfDiscovery
#spiritual
93 reads
10 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 4:46pm
26th Nov 2024 4:46pm
Strength Beyond Strength
I pray that…
You discover your vigor and courage coming from within
That resilience and heart carry you in their eternal wings
That they give you the driving force in those darkest times
And light will shine and steer you pulling at the heartstrings
.
I pray that…
You find solace in knowing you are worthy of love and respect
That no matter how hard the punches have been you can still stand
Even when the pain has been much to bear something is there
And that the fighting spirit will be near giving you a guiding hand
.
I...
You discover your vigor and courage coming from within
That resilience and heart carry you in their eternal wings
That they give you the driving force in those darkest times
And light will shine and steer you pulling at the heartstrings
.
I pray that…
You find solace in knowing you are worthy of love and respect
That no matter how hard the punches have been you can still stand
Even when the pain has been much to bear something is there
And that the fighting spirit will be near giving you a guiding hand
.
I...
#courage
#SelfDiscovery
#strength
112 reads
8 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 11:36pm
25th Nov 2024 11:36pm
"IF THY ONE EYE BE OPEN"... (11-25-2024, Palm Springs, California)
as
i see eyes
eyes see me
as
eyes see i
i see i see
i see
i see
in
these eyes
through which
i see
i see eyes
as
eyes see me
as
this true eye
as
this true i
as
this
one eye open
that
i now am
i now
know
i
am
i am
i see eyes
eyes see me
as
eyes see i
i see i see
i see
i see
in
these eyes
through which
i see
i see eyes
as
eyes see me
as
this true eye
as
this true i
as
this
one eye open
that
i now am
i now
know
i
am
i am
#identity
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#spiritual
#wisdom
54 reads
0 Comments
DrunkenWolf
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 00:54am
24th Nov 2024 00:54am
Once Before
Laying naked by black river sides,
Visions of insanity coming by
Cascading off the walls
Dirty witch on down the halls,
Spinning in silent might
She sees in eyeless sight
Electricity that can’t be seen,
Liquid light burning
Hidden in the night,
Prop me up,
Lo do I say
I am the mountain,
My greatest story’s up for sale,
I am the Mountain,
Rushing down
Along the dark side of the hills,
Find the sleeping suns
I am empty now plus one,
Oh breathless morn
I know you were with me once before,
...
Visions of insanity coming by
Cascading off the walls
Dirty witch on down the halls,
Spinning in silent might
She sees in eyeless sight
Electricity that can’t be seen,
Liquid light burning
Hidden in the night,
Prop me up,
Lo do I say
I am the mountain,
My greatest story’s up for sale,
I am the Mountain,
Rushing down
Along the dark side of the hills,
Find the sleeping suns
I am empty now plus one,
Oh breathless morn
I know you were with me once before,
...
#gothic
#SelfDiscovery
#witches
88 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 7:56pm
23rd Nov 2024 7:56pm
Flutter and Glide
Yesterday shaped me and made me who I am
Today sharpens and refines my vision
Tomorrow is a familiar and unknown dream
While I flutter and glide inside a twister of decisions
Today sharpens and refines my vision
Tomorrow is a familiar and unknown dream
While I flutter and glide inside a twister of decisions
#SelfDiscovery
89 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 12:30pm
23rd Nov 2024 12:30pm
What would you change
For sure what would you do if you, can change your life from then to now. 🤔 For sure what would you do if given, a second chance to do it all over again. 😔 For sure what would you do differently, about the trails and tribulations, that has changed the atmosphere of your life. For these words of wisdom and enlightenment is necessary, to understand that what you had to go through is a terrible thing. TO no doubt that change your way of thinking, about your feelings and emotions of what is right and wrong. 🤨 For sure we will make mistakes along the way, that is apart of...
#FeelingLost
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
#StreamOfConsciousness
99 reads
4 Comments
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