Poems About Gun Control Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about gun control seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
oldmanG
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 3:41am
13th Nov 2024 3:41am
Cleveland Texas
Cleveland Texas
Don’t forget about the dog people
Half human half bitch
Barks when I get a delivery
Back yard grass is tall
Shadow behind the trees
Emerges as I squint my eyes
Human on dogs legs
Wearing camouflage and
Strapping Ar15
Area 51 Roswell
Genetic mutant before me
Not in his birthday suit
Dog hairs on fabric
Clip is in let the anger begin
Scenic split seconds
Thunder in the living room
So you told me to stop
Firing grim reapers ...
Don’t forget about the dog people
Half human half bitch
Barks when I get a delivery
Back yard grass is tall
Shadow behind the trees
Emerges as I squint my eyes
Human on dogs legs
Wearing camouflage and
Strapping Ar15
Area 51 Roswell
Genetic mutant before me
Not in his birthday suit
Dog hairs on fabric
Clip is in let the anger begin
Scenic split seconds
Thunder in the living room
So you told me to stop
Firing grim reapers ...
#anger
#GunControl
#murder #sadness
#murder #sadness
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oldmanG
Poem Published
12th Nov 2024 6:56am
12th Nov 2024 6:56am
Off of the Tint
See the reflection
Off of the tint
Bloody violence is the scene
Feeling Dakota in the big apple
One who walks among angels of music
Just laid down a new track
Watching the wheels spinning
As he gets into the limousine
Sittin beside him is his lady
No she didn’t break up the Beatles
She’s his companion
Through this twisted world
Skin on skin with baby Sean
Beautiful boy waiting upstairs
Pulls the handle steps out
He’s a gentleman so ...
Off of the tint
Bloody violence is the scene
Feeling Dakota in the big apple
One who walks among angels of music
Just laid down a new track
Watching the wheels spinning
As he gets into the limousine
Sittin beside him is his lady
No she didn’t break up the Beatles
She’s his companion
Through this twisted world
Skin on skin with baby Sean
Beautiful boy waiting upstairs
Pulls the handle steps out
He’s a gentleman so ...
#anger
#despair
#emptiness
#GunControl
#murder
46 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 11:40pm
2nd Nov 2024 11:40pm
Rocket Red Glare
Rocket Red glare
Baby just out the oven
She says grab a rifle
Small precious mirrors
Of our sins
Bathing in the school halls
Of our own blood
How did we approach
This moment for our kids
God is watching
All these hypocrites
She should be playing
With a sparkle pony
Instead momma
Says grab the shotgun
Fireworks spark a fire
In Indian lands
Carved into our narrative
Four stone heads
Standing above the land
If I can’t protect my...
Baby just out the oven
She says grab a rifle
Small precious mirrors
Of our sins
Bathing in the school halls
Of our own blood
How did we approach
This moment for our kids
God is watching
All these hypocrites
She should be playing
With a sparkle pony
Instead momma
Says grab the shotgun
Fireworks spark a fire
In Indian lands
Carved into our narrative
Four stone heads
Standing above the land
If I can’t protect my...
#children
#fear
#GunControl #hypocrisy
#GunControl #hypocrisy
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da_poetic-edifier
Damon
Damon
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 7:52am
26th Oct 2024 7:52am
Promiscuous Guns
Fragility takes the virginity of an unfired gun
Mental instability has eclipsed many of Suns
Rum-pu-pum-pum is the sound of the beating drumroll
An audible exclamation of the lives being stole
This cold world's becoming more frigid everyday
Artic temps continue to dip and never seem to sway
Press play and they'll convey the way to genocide
Games the same but they changed how it is supplied
Sides are being redlined by trails of tears and blood
Parted like the Red Sea during this modern era flood
HUD unable to aid the array...
Mental instability has eclipsed many of Suns
Rum-pu-pum-pum is the sound of the beating drumroll
An audible exclamation of the lives being stole
This cold world's becoming more frigid everyday
Artic temps continue to dip and never seem to sway
Press play and they'll convey the way to genocide
Games the same but they changed how it is supplied
Sides are being redlined by trails of tears and blood
Parted like the Red Sea during this modern era flood
HUD unable to aid the array...
#death
#GunControl
#MentalHealth
42 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 11:24am
11th Oct 2024 11:24am
Wrong Address
Wrong address
Pull up to pick up
Just missed the address
Put in in R and back it up
Before I can a shot rings out
Shatters young dreams
20 years old
Didn’t know making a mistake
Would be the end of me
Didn’t even get out of the car
Man on the porch says you’ve gone too far
Rings in my ears
And my nightmares
Rings the doorbell
Greets with a rifle
Through the glass
Bullet pierces innocence
Cheering in Texas
Step into the wrong car
Can’t...
Pull up to pick up
Just missed the address
Put in in R and back it up
Before I can a shot rings out
Shatters young dreams
20 years old
Didn’t know making a mistake
Would be the end of me
Didn’t even get out of the car
Man on the porch says you’ve gone too far
Rings in my ears
And my nightmares
Rings the doorbell
Greets with a rifle
Through the glass
Bullet pierces innocence
Cheering in Texas
Step into the wrong car
Can’t...
#GunControl
#violence
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oldmanG
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2024 4:58am
2nd Oct 2024 4:58am
Guns vs God (who you got)
Guns vs God who you got
Seems so simple keep killing machines
Out of society…walk right in
Come out armed to the teeth
Didn’t know I just lost my job
My identity
So he rings me up sends me on the way
Plot my revenge I’ll die in the end
But here’s where lives intersect
Demon on one shoulder
Other an AR
Scream to save unborn
Once they’re here they’re on their own
Sit in a pew and stew about fake righteousness
Little ones led to slaughter
Behind the guise of teaching principles
...
Seems so simple keep killing machines
Out of society…walk right in
Come out armed to the teeth
Didn’t know I just lost my job
My identity
So he rings me up sends me on the way
Plot my revenge I’ll die in the end
But here’s where lives intersect
Demon on one shoulder
Other an AR
Scream to save unborn
Once they’re here they’re on their own
Sit in a pew and stew about fake righteousness
Little ones led to slaughter
Behind the guise of teaching principles
...
#God
#GunControl
#murder #violence
#murder #violence
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0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
1st Oct 2024 1:13pm
1st Oct 2024 1:13pm
Put Down the Gat
Put down the gat
I’m sick of this shit
Wake up and wonder if my kids are ok
Not like they’re fighting for our country
Or policing their territory
Jesus fucking Christ they’re our future
Tryin to learn the basics of life
How many more thoughts and prayers
Should we suffer till we say
This shouldn’t be the new normal
Metal detectors and shelter in place
Dont solve anything when the perp
Has more fire than the police
Ar 15 or ak47 weapon of war
Gotta ban that shit
Did it for 10 yrs and mass shootings ...
I’m sick of this shit
Wake up and wonder if my kids are ok
Not like they’re fighting for our country
Or policing their territory
Jesus fucking Christ they’re our future
Tryin to learn the basics of life
How many more thoughts and prayers
Should we suffer till we say
This shouldn’t be the new normal
Metal detectors and shelter in place
Dont solve anything when the perp
Has more fire than the police
Ar 15 or ak47 weapon of war
Gotta ban that shit
Did it for 10 yrs and mass shootings ...
#children
#GunControl
#violence
84 reads
4 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 12:08pm
25th Sep 2024 12:08pm
1600 Bailey Street
1600 Bailey street
Smell the powder of the gun
3 yrs old dancing in the street
Not on a perp sheet
Braids of sunshine in her hair
Innocence meet violence
Sorry but it’s the wrong time
To be young without gunshots
Bailey street seems sweet
But without a bullet proof soul
Can’t cut between the cars
Or jump some hopscotch
Having to keep looking over my shoulder
And duck for cover
Bailey street is just like America
More guns than people
2nd Amendment is Bible to them...
Smell the powder of the gun
3 yrs old dancing in the street
Not on a perp sheet
Braids of sunshine in her hair
Innocence meet violence
Sorry but it’s the wrong time
To be young without gunshots
Bailey street seems sweet
But without a bullet proof soul
Can’t cut between the cars
Or jump some hopscotch
Having to keep looking over my shoulder
And duck for cover
Bailey street is just like America
More guns than people
2nd Amendment is Bible to them...
#culture
#GunControl
#violence
62 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
9th Jul 2024 3:11am
9th Jul 2024 3:11am
Proud Boys
The far right gobshite fears to be replaced
and that's a plan that's worth a damn to me.
Then gone would be another dude disgraced
by bogus claims...of white supremacy.
The far right gobshite places all the blame
on all the folks he clearly fears the most
without avowing he himself is lame...
which nullifies his bloody stupid boast.
The far right gobshite claims a list of wrongs
from the hardships he's had to undergo...
like too much rap, and cleaning his own bongs,
or admission cost at the sportsman's show......
and that's a plan that's worth a damn to me.
Then gone would be another dude disgraced
by bogus claims...of white supremacy.
The far right gobshite places all the blame
on all the folks he clearly fears the most
without avowing he himself is lame...
which nullifies his bloody stupid boast.
The far right gobshite claims a list of wrongs
from the hardships he's had to undergo...
like too much rap, and cleaning his own bongs,
or admission cost at the sportsman's show......
#GunControl
#MentalHealth
170 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Jun 2024 10:47am
28th Jun 2024 10:47am
Whose your god now
My god is black steel
Loaded
When I place it in your mouth you will agree
Loaded
When I place it in your mouth you will agree
#God
#GunControl
#violence
104 reads
8 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
21st Dec 2023 00:58am
21st Dec 2023 00:58am
Entertainment Ratings
#violence
#porn
#GunControl #culture
#GunControl #culture
218 reads
5 Comments
Nycewitit
Poem Published
12th Dec 2023 9:43pm
12th Dec 2023 9:43pm
Painting the Rses Black
For my sister who was murdered by a stray bullet 9/23/23
#heartbroken
#death
#GunControl
216 reads
3 Comments
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