Free Verse Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#FreeVerse
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 11:26am
24th Dec 2024 11:26am
The Gift That I Had Just Got For You
After seeing that I don't
like being far from home
at Christmas, she lifted
up the sweater she was
wearing and flashed her
naked body before saying
"I hope you like the gift
that I had just got for you."
like being far from home
at Christmas, she lifted
up the sweater she was
wearing and flashed her
naked body before saying
"I hope you like the gift
that I had just got for you."
#Christmas
#dialogue
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
113 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 2:04pm
21st Dec 2024 2:04pm
Got A Postcard From Catherine
Richard got a
postcard from
Catherine in
San Francisco.
It has a photo
of her naked
on a local beach.
postcard from
Catherine in
San Francisco.
It has a photo
of her naked
on a local beach.
#beach
#city
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
119 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 11:07am
19th Dec 2024 11:07am
Like A Scene From An Eli Roth Movie
We found poor
Natalie stripped,
hanging and
dripping blood
into a candle
that's beneath her.
Natalie stripped,
hanging and
dripping blood
into a candle
that's beneath her.
#dark
#death
#dialogue
#fiction
#FreeVerse
89 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 11:40am
17th Dec 2024 11:40am
Well, Mark? Don't You Want To Join In?
As soon as Mark saw
Linda snapping photos
of Annie standing in a
field of sunflowers nude,
Annie looked at Mark
with a seductive smile.
Linda snapping photos
of Annie standing in a
field of sunflowers nude,
Annie looked at Mark
with a seductive smile.
#fiction
#flowers
#FreeVerse
#friendship
#sex
118 reads
2 Comments
Sean459
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 4:59am
16th Dec 2024 4:59am
A mixtape for parkour
#dirty
#FreeVerse
#jealousy
#lust
#nature
142 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 11:28am
15th Dec 2024 11:28am
I Really Do Want Some More
After that wave of sexual
passion has finally passed,
Arnold was about to get
off of Sharon's naked body
only to have her grab hold
of his bare back and say
"No. Please don't go. I
really do want some more."
passion has finally passed,
Arnold was about to get
off of Sharon's naked body
only to have her grab hold
of his bare back and say
"No. Please don't go. I
really do want some more."
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#friendship
#lover
#sex
169 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 11:54am
12th Dec 2024 11:54am
What She Saw Before Getting Raped
April suddenly heard a
crash, turned off the
water and stepped out
of the shower to see
Derek get slammed
against a wall like some
rag doll by a muscle
bound brute in the nude.
She screamed loudly
as he moved himself
closer towards his
latest helpless victim.
crash, turned off the
water and stepped out
of the shower to see
Derek get slammed
against a wall like some
rag doll by a muscle
bound brute in the nude.
She screamed loudly
as he moved himself
closer towards his
latest helpless victim.
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#home
#scary
#sex
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moon_bather
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 3:11am
12th Dec 2024 3:11am
Espejo
Distracted by
Distraught interactions
with others who don’t understand
nor do they care
nor do I care if
who gives a shit?
Rambling on again and again
to somehow heal
through an idiot’s catharsis
Believing in something
to believe in something
to feel a reason
to keep on believing
that life is worth living
but in the end
all the same bullshit
just painted a different color
Join their party?
Why would I?
Well
of course I...
Distraught interactions
with others who don’t understand
nor do they care
nor do I care if
who gives a shit?
Rambling on again and again
to somehow heal
through an idiot’s catharsis
Believing in something
to believe in something
to feel a reason
to keep on believing
that life is worth living
but in the end
all the same bullshit
just painted a different color
Join their party?
Why would I?
Well
of course I...
#confessional
#FreeVerse
#StreamOfConsciousness
#suffering
#TruthOfLife
74 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 1:24pm
10th Dec 2024 1:24pm
Olaf And A Possible Relative
Hey, Anna! Come
here and quick!
I found my lost
grandfather!
here and quick!
I found my lost
grandfather!
#dialogue
#family
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#funny
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 00:51am
5th Dec 2024 00:51am
Odd Thoughts
I sit here and watch the drop of liquid coke
Roll into a puddle of sugary bliss.
Zoned into nothing.
Space is a non-touchable thing.
Yet all-encompassing
When the submucosal walls
Dry out from lack of adequate liquid substrate.
The mind is forced to retaliate.
Sending a resound call.
To attack
Subconsciously driven.
A need to fulfill the addiction.
The cool feeling
Thrashes against the heat
Only to be awarded
By a thief
Who has stolen?
My vibration
Roll into a puddle of sugary bliss.
Zoned into nothing.
Space is a non-touchable thing.
Yet all-encompassing
When the submucosal walls
Dry out from lack of adequate liquid substrate.
The mind is forced to retaliate.
Sending a resound call.
To attack
Subconsciously driven.
A need to fulfill the addiction.
The cool feeling
Thrashes against the heat
Only to be awarded
By a thief
Who has stolen?
My vibration
#FreeVerse
#science
#symbolism
213 reads
19 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 11:28am
3rd Dec 2024 11:28am
Leading To A Spring Break Nightmare
Deborah and her friends
Tracie and Lexa figured
that since they were far
from home, none of their
parents would stop them
from posing nude on a
beach for some guy who
claimed to be with the
Girls Gone Wild production.
Their dead bodies were
found on a Cancun beach.
Tracie and Lexa figured
that since they were far
from home, none of their
parents would stop them
from posing nude on a
beach for some guy who
claimed to be with the
Girls Gone Wild production.
Their dead bodies were
found on a Cancun beach.
#beach
#death
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
66 reads
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moon_bather
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 7:13am
1st Dec 2024 7:13am
Refrained
(Moon_bather/Fia Naturie collab)
I got this to say
You don’t know me anyway
I got this to say
What the fuck you trying to say
How many fingers you got
Not enough to make you stop
How many minds can bleed
Until you stop your fucking seed
Hello 911, She’s going to need help please
What is your emergency
The world, and what she believes
Excuse me?
I want to leave and go away
Are you being detained in any way
She has locked me in chain, making me stay
I’ll send...
I got this to say
You don’t know me anyway
I got this to say
What the fuck you trying to say
How many fingers you got
Not enough to make you stop
How many minds can bleed
Until you stop your fucking seed
Hello 911, She’s going to need help please
What is your emergency
The world, and what she believes
Excuse me?
I want to leave and go away
Are you being detained in any way
She has locked me in chain, making me stay
I’ll send...
#collaboration
#FreeVerse
#rhyming #StreamOfConsciousness
#rhyming #StreamOfConsciousness
96 reads
5 Comments
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