Poems About Feeling Trapped Seeking Honest Critique
#FeelingTrapped
Poems about feeling trapped seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
The prison
Torn away from my docililty
Reverberations of strangers conversations make their way into my ears .
My attention is stolen from inconsiderate people
I have become a prisoner
Stripped from my own thoughts and deloused of my creativity
Waiting a trial that will never come
Looking thru the bars reminds me of the lines on my pages that make me thrive to write
There's no break out from all this
I can not get away
The lock is welded shut
Fuck I think I'm here to stay .
Reverberations of strangers conversations make their way into my ears .
My attention is stolen from inconsiderate people
I have become a prisoner
Stripped from my own thoughts and deloused of my creativity
Waiting a trial that will never come
Looking thru the bars reminds me of the lines on my pages that make me thrive to write
There's no break out from all this
I can not get away
The lock is welded shut
Fuck I think I'm here to stay .
#depression
#despair
#emotional
#FeelingTrapped
#rejection
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GREATER PLAN IN MOTION
Here I am as I sit here within my own chains of thoughts, here amongst the elements that give me. MUCH of what that brings me my thoughts of tranquility. For sure we need to take a moment, to just analyze the deepness of our deepest thoughts. As it is necessary to understand that what we, sometimes have to learn to go through. It's just another time to refocus of our thoughts, that we have to learn how things really work. Within this new world of dictatorship and order. Just as much we can try to denie the truth of what we really see 👁️ For the world has gotten worser not...
#escape
#FeelingTrapped
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeStruggles
#StreamOfConsciousness
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6 Comments
Downward Spiral
A problem you are
Don't taint me with your issues
You bring others down
Don't taint me with your issues
You bring others down
#depression
#FeelingTrapped
#senryu
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My Vines
There’s this gemstone i want,
perched right on a cliff.
No matter how many times
my hand stretches to grasp it,
i fail, merely tracing it with my fingertips.
I glance around,
catching sight of vines latching onto me.
My mind sends neural signals,
a command to escape,
but my body remains ensnared,
writhing and squeezed
into an embrace to the glade.
These stems grew from the dreadful
qualm buried deep in
the dustiest corners of cobwebs,
where my inner saboteur resides, ...
perched right on a cliff.
No matter how many times
my hand stretches to grasp it,
i fail, merely tracing it with my fingertips.
I glance around,
catching sight of vines latching onto me.
My mind sends neural signals,
a command to escape,
but my body remains ensnared,
writhing and squeezed
into an embrace to the glade.
These stems grew from the dreadful
qualm buried deep in
the dustiest corners of cobwebs,
where my inner saboteur resides, ...
#dark
#despair
#emptiness
#fear
#FeelingTrapped
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BLACK THALASSIC
Lost in its black widow's dark eyes
That storm inches of black tears
Back and forth, where it just lies
Threatening anything that nears
From a distance, I can hear unknown cries
Tell me, what's there to sincerely fear?
I've gone so far into the demons' belly rug
I accept my dreadful, dead-end, fate
Going further, I emerge into its sweet fog
Encountering the dangers of its weight
"I may not waive this place, for I don't belong"
Dismaying my boat, no control, solely, pure hate...
Trapped in a vessel that...
That storm inches of black tears
Back and forth, where it just lies
Threatening anything that nears
From a distance, I can hear unknown cries
Tell me, what's there to sincerely fear?
I've gone so far into the demons' belly rug
I accept my dreadful, dead-end, fate
Going further, I emerge into its sweet fog
Encountering the dangers of its weight
"I may not waive this place, for I don't belong"
Dismaying my boat, no control, solely, pure hate...
Trapped in a vessel that...
#bittersweet
#despair
#fear
#FeelingTrapped
#loneliness
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against the wall
When your back is against the wall, there is only one thing
to do, and that is turn around and fight.”—John Major
the earth me live would swallow, if she could,
and contemplate that she had done me good;
but time is not yet right to kick the bucket,
my seed yet ripe enough for hands to pluck it.
she decimates my ego with her fire,
spoils my escape with razor-sharp barbed wire;
and when her quicksands drink me to the neck,
my head reels with her evil discotheque.
the voices of live shadows make their mock,
bending my...
to do, and that is turn around and fight.”—John Major
the earth me live would swallow, if she could,
and contemplate that she had done me good;
but time is not yet right to kick the bucket,
my seed yet ripe enough for hands to pluck it.
she decimates my ego with her fire,
spoils my escape with razor-sharp barbed wire;
and when her quicksands drink me to the neck,
my head reels with her evil discotheque.
the voices of live shadows make their mock,
bending my...
#courage
#death
#earth
#FeelingTrapped
#strength
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Fear of Shadows
You can drive a car if you do it right
but you can't go far if it puts you out of sight
you can't look at girls
you can't drink anything
you got to get your kicks in the shadow of fear
You stay out late when they think your young
when they find out, there gonna want you hung
so you try to understand that you might get near
cause your lost alone in the shadow of fear
So you found a chick that you think is fine
but you fell too fast so you lost your mind
society looks, but they turn their ears
you got to get your kicks in...
but you can't go far if it puts you out of sight
you can't look at girls
you can't drink anything
you got to get your kicks in the shadow of fear
You stay out late when they think your young
when they find out, there gonna want you hung
so you try to understand that you might get near
cause your lost alone in the shadow of fear
So you found a chick that you think is fine
but you fell too fast so you lost your mind
society looks, but they turn their ears
you got to get your kicks in...
#FeelingTrapped
#lyrics
#rebellion
#rhyming
#teens
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Head Case
I stole her money
I don't care, she stole my life
She says she loves me
I don't care, she stole my life
She says she loves me
#FeelingTrapped
#love
#obsession
#relationships
#senryu
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16 Comments
When I'm Writing, Stay Away From Me
"You fucked her!"
"No I didn't!" (Oh shit!!)
"Yes you did you bastard, how could you?"
"You fucked her even if you didn't!!"
She looks over my shoulder as I write
I say: Are you mad about something?
I see the look on her face get really mean
She looks at me again and goes upstairs
This was going to be a funny thing, this conversation I was going to write
But now I lost the thread on what I was going to say
The timing was perfect though
Every time she walks by, she sneaks a look at...
"No I didn't!" (Oh shit!!)
"Yes you did you bastard, how could you?"
"You fucked her even if you didn't!!"
She looks over my shoulder as I write
I say: Are you mad about something?
I see the look on her face get really mean
She looks at me again and goes upstairs
This was going to be a funny thing, this conversation I was going to write
But now I lost the thread on what I was going to say
The timing was perfect though
Every time she walks by, she sneaks a look at...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#escape
#FeelingTrapped
#girlfriend
#LifeAsAWriter
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STILL ON THE PLANTATION
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ that will affect you in ways that you could never truly understand, how much of what I say is the truth that subconsciously reaches into the deepness of your own mind thoughts. 🧐 For example it's something that goes far beyond this world in which one is living within now. 😞 YET it is a fact of what our lives are now and yet we still were not free, for we as slaves was set free by the same individuals, that held us in chains as our master the overseers of our lives. 🤨 Let's not forget about the hanging...
#abuse
#FeelingTrapped
#ignorance
#LifeStruggles
#suffering
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Maybe she should have asked for cereal instead
Kind of sick of my wife
This marriage is getting the best of me
All she does is complain, nag, whine and bark orders
I could divorce her
I could up & leave
I'm just lazy I guess
I zone out most of the time
I'll escape by writing poems or stories
Other times I'll exercise or go for a walk or bike ride
I always keep myself busy
I'm a perfectionist
Our home is always clean, organized and neat
She knows how well I take care of everything and knows she don't need to lift a finger
The one thing she does is cook
Very good at...
This marriage is getting the best of me
All she does is complain, nag, whine and bark orders
I could divorce her
I could up & leave
I'm just lazy I guess
I zone out most of the time
I'll escape by writing poems or stories
Other times I'll exercise or go for a walk or bike ride
I always keep myself busy
I'm a perfectionist
Our home is always clean, organized and neat
She knows how well I take care of everything and knows she don't need to lift a finger
The one thing she does is cook
Very good at...
#FeelingTrapped
#fiction
#food
#wife
#satirical
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2 Comments
Times Square circa 1976
#death
#emptiness
#FeelingTrapped
#hurt
#sex
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DU Poetry : Poems About Feeling Trapped Seeking Honest Critique