Poems About Deep Underground Poetry Seeking Honest Critique
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
24th Aug 2024 4:41pm
24th Aug 2024 4:41pm
The Mafia Romance DUP Ladies
I wanted you to see what I am working with. At least in my mind as I write this story.
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#funny
57 reads
19 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
23rd Aug 2024 11:42pm
23rd Aug 2024 11:42pm
lemon
dancing in the wind I feel my spirit rise
kissing the blue sky
I'm aware we're all connected to the air and each other
swaying in the breeze I let the music carry me away
in love with the day I converse with her privately
swinging in perfect design to the boho beat
lingering in her lemon drop essence
a balm for your soul
slow and easy to connect with the others
gently so I make a ripple careful not to make a wave
I write on the water
peace to all that is alive
and I know my message is carried
to the pool of...
kissing the blue sky
I'm aware we're all connected to the air and each other
swaying in the breeze I let the music carry me away
in love with the day I converse with her privately
swinging in perfect design to the boho beat
lingering in her lemon drop essence
a balm for your soul
slow and easy to connect with the others
gently so I make a ripple careful not to make a wave
I write on the water
peace to all that is alive
and I know my message is carried
to the pool of...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#love
78 reads
2 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
23rd Aug 2024 5:12pm
23rd Aug 2024 5:12pm
First Date
"I'm going on a date tonight."
"Caw! With who?!"
"It's on a need-to-know basis and you don't need to know!"
"Is it serious, Jen?"
"It's just a date, Madeline."
“Awight, awight , don't get yer knickers in a twist! Show me the outfit then.”
"I was thinking of a white shirt and this blue skirt."
“Jenny, how old 'ar ya?”
"What does that have to do with anything?" ...
"Caw! With who?!"
"It's on a need-to-know basis and you don't need to know!"
"Is it serious, Jen?"
"It's just a date, Madeline."
“Awight, awight , don't get yer knickers in a twist! Show me the outfit then.”
"I was thinking of a white shirt and this blue skirt."
“Jenny, how old 'ar ya?”
"What does that have to do with anything?" ...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#funny
77 reads
14 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
23rd Aug 2024 11:45am
23rd Aug 2024 11:45am
Angel's Free II
I love my life, it is important to me
Mama never believed a word that came out of my mouth
He cares for himself, for his wants, for his needs
It hurt
The worst pain I ever felt in my life
I lied to live; they would never believe me anyway
Mama sent me away so my body will be at peace for a while
They seen the healed scars on my skin
They asked if I wanted to go back
I have a choice
“No”
He will kill me this time
“No”
I want to be free
Angels are free
That's when a white feather fell
Mama never believed a word that came out of my mouth
He cares for himself, for his wants, for his needs
It hurt
The worst pain I ever felt in my life
I lied to live; they would never believe me anyway
Mama sent me away so my body will be at peace for a while
They seen the healed scars on my skin
They asked if I wanted to go back
I have a choice
“No”
He will kill me this time
“No”
I want to be free
Angels are free
That's when a white feather fell
#dark
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#fear #sadness
#fear #sadness
97 reads
22 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
23rd Aug 2024 2:01am
23rd Aug 2024 2:01am
Angel's Free
I didn't want to go
But my home is not a home
I snuck out at night
I'm tired of the fight
I was supposed to be the Princess
The twinkle in his eye
The sacred jewel he always wanted
Now I have to run or I'll die
She couldn't help me
She tried once before
The same eyes we shared
Was darkened once more
It was time for me to leave
I can make my own way
It was time for me to be
Anywhere would be better than to stay
I should be scared
Going into the unknown
I was...
But my home is not a home
I snuck out at night
I'm tired of the fight
I was supposed to be the Princess
The twinkle in his eye
The sacred jewel he always wanted
Now I have to run or I'll die
She couldn't help me
She tried once before
The same eyes we shared
Was darkened once more
It was time for me to leave
I can make my own way
It was time for me to be
Anywhere would be better than to stay
I should be scared
Going into the unknown
I was...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#sadness
#dark
105 reads
20 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
22nd Aug 2024 3:43pm
22nd Aug 2024 3:43pm
Interview with Self
How do you know if you're a poet?
Does one ever really know?
Well, it seems that you're very prolific in your writing. Do you consider yourself a poet?
I consider myself a Weaver of words.
I like how things sound.
I like how they roll around in my mouth.
I like the texture of it.
Excuse me the texture of it? You make it sound like it's a lover.
I guess it is a lover.
With a lover, do you not find passion
With a lover, do you not excite easily
Do they not make you cry the cry of 1000 heartaches
Do they not...
Does one ever really know?
Well, it seems that you're very prolific in your writing. Do you consider yourself a poet?
I consider myself a Weaver of words.
I like how things sound.
I like how they roll around in my mouth.
I like the texture of it.
Excuse me the texture of it? You make it sound like it's a lover.
I guess it is a lover.
With a lover, do you not find passion
With a lover, do you not excite easily
Do they not make you cry the cry of 1000 heartaches
Do they not...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#funny
84 reads
28 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Aug 2024 11:47am
20th Aug 2024 11:47am
When I'm Writing, Stay Away From Me
"You fucked her!"
"No I didn't!" (Oh shit!!)
"Yes you did you bastard, how could you?"
"You fucked her even if you didn't!!"
She looks over my shoulder as I write
I say: Are you mad about something?
I see the look on her face get really mean
She looks at me again and goes upstairs
This was going to be a funny thing, this conversation I was going to write
But now I lost the thread on what I was going to say
The timing was perfect though
Every time she walks by, she sneaks a look at...
"No I didn't!" (Oh shit!!)
"Yes you did you bastard, how could you?"
"You fucked her even if you didn't!!"
She looks over my shoulder as I write
I say: Are you mad about something?
I see the look on her face get really mean
She looks at me again and goes upstairs
This was going to be a funny thing, this conversation I was going to write
But now I lost the thread on what I was going to say
The timing was perfect though
Every time she walks by, she sneaks a look at...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#escape
#FeelingTrapped
#girlfriend
#LifeAsAWriter
111 reads
11 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 1:44pm
18th Aug 2024 1:44pm
They Called It Murder (Cozy Mystery)
This story starts quite odd, since I did not get involved until they called it murder.
My name is Kate Wells. I am the top investigative reporter of the Inwood Feline Gazette. You may not have heard of us since we are not nationally known, but the news must be reported, even if it’s mundane.
The incident became known at six-fifteen in the evening on October 23. I must print that since that is what they agreed to have on record. Off the record, it was a slightly different story that I would prefer you to know.
The chief of the gazette, Elwood Rimm, sent me to...
My name is Kate Wells. I am the top investigative reporter of the Inwood Feline Gazette. You may not have heard of us since we are not nationally known, but the news must be reported, even if it’s mundane.
The incident became known at six-fifteen in the evening on October 23. I must print that since that is what they agreed to have on record. Off the record, it was a slightly different story that I would prefer you to know.
The chief of the gazette, Elwood Rimm, sent me to...
#cats
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#funny #mystery
#funny #mystery
61 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Aug 2024 8:18pm
17th Aug 2024 8:18pm
Before the Show
The Crimson Ghost assisting Marilyn Monroe
Getting herself dolled up, right before the show
Horror-Punk icons The Misfits will take the stage
Props and actors are ready, the crowd will soon rage
Where punk, horror, sexploitation & sci-fi unite as one
Creating a unique blend of music & imagery that is second to none
Getting herself dolled up, right before the show
Horror-Punk icons The Misfits will take the stage
Props and actors are ready, the crowd will soon rage
Where punk, horror, sexploitation & sci-fi unite as one
Creating a unique blend of music & imagery that is second to none
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#music
#PopCulture #rhyming
#PopCulture #rhyming
86 reads
6 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
16th Aug 2024 5:32pm
16th Aug 2024 5:32pm
Answer to A+D=P
Hi everyone,
I posted that little word puzzle to have fun with all of you and to lighten the mood.
There is no wrong answer here. I wanted to stretch everyone's imagination to see where it could lead.
Mind you I threw in there a Red Herring with the two sisters. It could be mouth and pussy or not.
Some of you are into very dark themes so I wanted to see where you would take it.
Answers and variations
Anal + Dick = Pleasure
Anal +Dick = Pain
Attraction+ Desire= Passion
Abstract + Decompose =Purity
Allure +...
I posted that little word puzzle to have fun with all of you and to lighten the mood.
There is no wrong answer here. I wanted to stretch everyone's imagination to see where it could lead.
Mind you I threw in there a Red Herring with the two sisters. It could be mouth and pussy or not.
Some of you are into very dark themes so I wanted to see where you would take it.
Answers and variations
Anal + Dick = Pleasure
Anal +Dick = Pain
Attraction+ Desire= Passion
Abstract + Decompose =Purity
Allure +...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
41 reads
8 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
16th Aug 2024 1:49pm
16th Aug 2024 1:49pm
A+D = P
There once was a lonely A
who thought no one could see
Since she had two sisters that
attracted attention equally
One day, a D came along
and spotted the A. Wondered should
he give it a twirl
or be on his way
Then, as quick as a thought could be
P whispered, "A is for you. Give it a try and see."
So D went to A, and P was pleased as can be
No one ever thought
A+D = P
who thought no one could see
Since she had two sisters that
attracted attention equally
One day, a D came along
and spotted the A. Wondered should
he give it a twirl
or be on his way
Then, as quick as a thought could be
P whispered, "A is for you. Give it a try and see."
So D went to A, and P was pleased as can be
No one ever thought
A+D = P
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#funny
51 reads
17 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
15th Aug 2024 4:14pm
15th Aug 2024 4:14pm
Murder at the Club of Hearts
The murderer is in this very room. Four suspects are in front of me, and one has done it. You may be thinking, Janet, you are in the room as well.
I’ve already deduced that I am clear. For my part in this case, other than to solve it. I was on the other side.
of the room, having a glass of wine and ogling the drummer in the jazz band.
There is a dead body lying in the center of the floor, with a white sheet covering it. There is a boyfriend who is bereaved in the death of the woman. There is the best friend who seems to be pissed off that she is being...
I’ve already deduced that I am clear. For my part in this case, other than to solve it. I was on the other side.
of the room, having a glass of wine and ogling the drummer in the jazz band.
There is a dead body lying in the center of the floor, with a white sheet covering it. There is a boyfriend who is bereaved in the death of the woman. There is the best friend who seems to be pissed off that she is being...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#mystery
55 reads
10 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Deep Underground Poetry Seeking Honest Critique
#DeepUndergroundPoetry is curated by cold_fusion.
