BDSM Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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BDSM seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Angel or Demon
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#BDSM
#dirty
#passion
#sex
#temptation
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4 Comments
House Of Pain
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#BDSM
#erotic
#lust
#sex
#temptation
336 reads
10 Comments
Through the bars
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#BDSM
#erotic
#lust #sex
#lust #sex
267 reads
2 Comments
Chosen
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#BDSM
#passion
#sex
285 reads
2 Comments
smut butt
into unknown terrain we go
usurping your authority
what a sinful little nymph
arousing your sensibilities
smooth and dangerous
you leave no place for error or doubt
Sadistic tyrant you aren't a waster of time
find another sub a little more docile
you like a challenge and you're always direct
missteps misread thoughts
carouse running with the night
chase starshine and do a big line of her denial
she utters please, with her eyes shiny with tears
you awaken her sex
a little rough for her
you examine her fright...
usurping your authority
what a sinful little nymph
arousing your sensibilities
smooth and dangerous
you leave no place for error or doubt
Sadistic tyrant you aren't a waster of time
find another sub a little more docile
you like a challenge and you're always direct
missteps misread thoughts
carouse running with the night
chase starshine and do a big line of her denial
she utters please, with her eyes shiny with tears
you awaken her sex
a little rough for her
you examine her fright...
#BDSM
#erotic
#temptation
255 reads
2 Comments
sacred
hidden in my thoughts
my bare soul blushing
you've seen me forlorn and nude
you took me to your chambers of crimson
there waiting was you entourage
to show off a vulnerable girl
a demoness without her horns
you unveiled my honesty
the men intrigued circle about me
a strange arousal overcame them
ocean spiced incense perfumed the room
a demoness open for you
submitting my sex to you
standing their bare I felt very fragile
they came closer to see me
my swollen sex was made for lust
but I...
my bare soul blushing
you've seen me forlorn and nude
you took me to your chambers of crimson
there waiting was you entourage
to show off a vulnerable girl
a demoness without her horns
you unveiled my honesty
the men intrigued circle about me
a strange arousal overcame them
ocean spiced incense perfumed the room
a demoness open for you
submitting my sex to you
standing their bare I felt very fragile
they came closer to see me
my swollen sex was made for lust
but I...
#BDSM
#seductive
#sexy
299 reads
5 Comments
My kinky cage
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#BDSM
#lust
#sexy
225 reads
2 Comments
Back and Forth
Back and Forth
The shadow
moves
as fast
as any fire.
Does the flame
chase the shade
or does the darkness
chase the day?
Is it neither one
or both,
the same....
it's either way.
The shadow
moves
as fast
as any fire.
Does the flame
chase the shade
or does the darkness
chase the day?
Is it neither one
or both,
the same....
it's either way.
#BDSM
#lover
#lust #passion
#lust #passion
243 reads
4 Comments
I've Completely Erased
I've Completely Erased
I've completely
erased
that part
of myself
that
seeks out
or keeps
just a trace.
I've
had it,
I said,
the stories
all gone--
we erase!
I've completely
erased
that part
of myself
that
seeks out
or keeps
just a trace.
I've
had it,
I said,
the stories
all gone--
we erase!
#BDSM
#seductive
#temptation
263 reads
0 Comments
Sated Sadist
breath one, two, three exhale
mesmerized by your accent
so exotic, a sexual language
some men are aware of
how to please a woman
stare into her eyes and excite the mind
penetrating her soul
turns on all the lights, every nerve will feel you
takes time but it's worth it
it's the difference between fulfillment
and sex without lust
first, get in the zone
with your body language
further, incite her to please
pleasure exists in the soul connection
deeper you go the more passionate I will become
if you...
mesmerized by your accent
so exotic, a sexual language
some men are aware of
how to please a woman
stare into her eyes and excite the mind
penetrating her soul
turns on all the lights, every nerve will feel you
takes time but it's worth it
it's the difference between fulfillment
and sex without lust
first, get in the zone
with your body language
further, incite her to please
pleasure exists in the soul connection
deeper you go the more passionate I will become
if you...
#BDSM
#seductive
#sensual #sex
#sensual #sex
297 reads
0 Comments
Rose
Your beauty is like The Rose
Do you know that every rose has 40 pedals
Within every petal, there is a slight variation
A nuance that shows its imperfection
But the imperfection is perfection in the eye of the beholder
The outer petals bloom and peel back
Showing softer, more timid petals
Kissed by Venus herself
Never to have been touched
Tempting you to touch
A petal unfurls
Revealing
The inner chamber
The rose will decide if
and only if you approach with delicate care
I'm still on the outer petal,...
Do you know that every rose has 40 pedals
Within every petal, there is a slight variation
A nuance that shows its imperfection
But the imperfection is perfection in the eye of the beholder
The outer petals bloom and peel back
Showing softer, more timid petals
Kissed by Venus herself
Never to have been touched
Tempting you to touch
A petal unfurls
Revealing
The inner chamber
The rose will decide if
and only if you approach with delicate care
I'm still on the outer petal,...
#BDSM
#bisexual
#erotic
#lust
#passion
153 reads
9 Comments
Can't wait to go again
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#BDSM
#lust
#sex
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0 Comments
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