BDSM Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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BDSM seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Pete_25
Poem Published
1st Oct 2024 8:09am
1st Oct 2024 8:09am
Madam Blackhearts
Don't know what I'm doing here
Bondage whip excess
Dutch courage, one more beer
Help, I'm in distress!
She gives out evil if you're good
"LICK THIS LEATHER DRESS"
A dark heart spills black blood
Her pierced tongue knows what's best
"YOU'RE MY SLAVE, YOU ARE WEAK
MY MIND IS SO OBSESSED
UNZIP MY CROTCH, TAKE A PEEK
DO WHAT I SAY UNLESS!"
"GET YOUR FACE UNDERNEATH MY BUM
LIFT THIS LEATHER DRESS
HOLD ON TIGHT, I'M ABOUT TO COME ...
Bondage whip excess
Dutch courage, one more beer
Help, I'm in distress!
She gives out evil if you're good
"LICK THIS LEATHER DRESS"
A dark heart spills black blood
Her pierced tongue knows what's best
"YOU'RE MY SLAVE, YOU ARE WEAK
MY MIND IS SO OBSESSED
UNZIP MY CROTCH, TAKE A PEEK
DO WHAT I SAY UNLESS!"
"GET YOUR FACE UNDERNEATH MY BUM
LIFT THIS LEATHER DRESS
HOLD ON TIGHT, I'M ABOUT TO COME ...
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic #lust
#erotic #lust
280 reads
7 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
30th Sep 2024 6:38pm
30th Sep 2024 6:38pm
Come To Me
Come to me with no pretension
With no entitlement
With no demands
And you will be rewarded.
With no entitlement
With no demands
And you will be rewarded.
#BDSM
#seductive
#sensual
459 reads
19 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
29th Sep 2024 11:56pm
29th Sep 2024 11:56pm
Weekend full of fun
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic
#lust
#orgasm
286 reads
0 Comments
Kinkwizard_95
Poem Published
29th Sep 2024 00:16am
29th Sep 2024 00:16am
Freak
Don’t look at me
Don’t speak
Now kneel for me
You freak
I’m gonna get the whips out
The bullet and the boy
Need to show this girl the rules
Make her my own toy
You better just sit there
Be quiet, toot sweet.
Gonna tie your hands up
Make you my own freak
Don’t speak
Now kneel for me
You freak
I’m gonna get the whips out
The bullet and the boy
Need to show this girl the rules
Make her my own toy
You better just sit there
Be quiet, toot sweet.
Gonna tie your hands up
Make you my own freak
#BDSM
#erotic
#sex
298 reads
4 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
27th Sep 2024 12:36pm
27th Sep 2024 12:36pm
Don't!
#anger
#BDSM
#passion #seductive
#passion #seductive
261 reads
16 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
27th Sep 2024 1:06am
27th Sep 2024 1:06am
Jordon (Spinoff From BonFire Publishing) part 1
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic #lust
#erotic #lust
211 reads
6 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
26th Sep 2024 1:42am
26th Sep 2024 1:42am
Over and Over
Over and Over
Interrelating
each
level
of the research
raises
an edifice
of material
data.
Just
edging
reality
into occupied
gardens,
transcends
nothing
original.
Then,
laid bare
and
seething,
nothing
finally
left
her,
breathing
and releasing,
over
and over.
Interrelating
each
level
of the research
raises
an edifice
of material
data.
Just
edging
reality
into occupied
gardens,
transcends
nothing
original.
Then,
laid bare
and
seething,
nothing
finally
left
her,
breathing
and releasing,
over
and over.
#BDSM
#orgasm
#sex
222 reads
0 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 7:26pm
25th Sep 2024 7:26pm
I Deserve Your Silence
Speak on my lips.
So, I can taste your words.
Ingest it until I’m full.
Are you mad?
Or is it me who has gone mad?
Waiting for you to say a word.
Any word
Take without touch.
Make me vibrate.
From your tone
When you are done
Make me regret.
...
So, I can taste your words.
Ingest it until I’m full.
Are you mad?
Or is it me who has gone mad?
Waiting for you to say a word.
Any word
Take without touch.
Make me vibrate.
From your tone
When you are done
Make me regret.
...
#BDSM
#erotic
#lust
232 reads
10 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
19th Sep 2024 00:10am
19th Sep 2024 00:10am
The loving hurt
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic
#lust
#sex
358 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
17th Sep 2024 9:03pm
17th Sep 2024 9:03pm
Go Ahead, Master. Do It To Me Now.
While
the rest
of the gang
kept on having
fun at the pool, Josh
went down to the basement
and saw Karen naked and
strapped to some wooden thing. After
he looked around and saw no one else,
Josh stripped and began humping with Karen.
the rest
of the gang
kept on having
fun at the pool, Josh
went down to the basement
and saw Karen naked and
strapped to some wooden thing. After
he looked around and saw no one else,
Josh stripped and began humping with Karen.
#BDSM
#fiction
#home
#sex
#summer
282 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 10:48pm
14th Sep 2024 10:48pm
Angel or Demon
#BDSM
#dirty
#passion
#sex
#temptation
326 reads
4 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 10:40am
14th Sep 2024 10:40am
House Of Pain
#BDSM
#erotic
#lust
#sex
#temptation
336 reads
10 Comments
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