BDSM Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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BDSM seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
The Ultimate Surrender
The Ultimate Surrender
Giving up
that last hurrah,
unlashing
every leash,
the toppled tethers
waste away
while leaving
only peace.
Then his thumb
dragged slowly towards
that tumbled
weather stone,
her breathing touched....
in silent trust,
and held her
as his own.
Giving up
that last hurrah,
unlashing
every leash,
the toppled tethers
waste away
while leaving
only peace.
Then his thumb
dragged slowly towards
that tumbled
weather stone,
her breathing touched....
in silent trust,
and held her
as his own.
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Purpose and Being
Purpose and Being
Each spacetime
step approaches
ever closer to
that shifted
paradigm;
our relative
experience
so then gives
a purpose
to our time.
Each spacetime
step approaches
ever closer to
that shifted
paradigm;
our relative
experience
so then gives
a purpose
to our time.
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Layer after Layer
Layer after Layer
Each
membrane
weeps
its soulish sense
and
bends
the bough
aloft,
beginning
first
with harshness
dense
thus
ends
in presence
soft.
Each
membrane
weeps
its soulish sense
and
bends
the bough
aloft,
beginning
first
with harshness
dense
thus
ends
in presence
soft.
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Sexual high

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#erotic
#lust
#passion
#sexy
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Your post
Why I love you,
I saw your post
It stoped me short
Your words touched my heart
Your beauty was unknown
I read your words
It was all just a blur
We talked for hours
Then for days
I heard your voice
It became my choice
I wanted to see
What I could only hear
Miles and miles to see you free
A big bird to bring me to you
Your voice was unmatched
As your beauty untouched
Our eyes met
I loved you at first sight
I saw your post
It stoped me short
Your words touched my heart
Your beauty was unknown
I read your words
It was all just a blur
We talked for hours
Then for days
I heard your voice
It became my choice
I wanted to see
What I could only hear
Miles and miles to see you free
A big bird to bring me to you
Your voice was unmatched
As your beauty untouched
Our eyes met
I loved you at first sight
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Dominant wife

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#erotic
#lust
#sensual
#sexy
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Kinky buffet

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#dirty
#lust
#sex
#temptation
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Lusting Quietly for You
Suffering in silence
We'd do well together
It will never happen
I'll injure myself instead
That always takes the edge off
It lasts for a day
Then I start all over again
We'd do well together
It will never happen
I'll injure myself instead
That always takes the edge off
It lasts for a day
Then I start all over again
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#erotic
#lust
#seductive
#silence
336 reads
24 Comments
A filthy time

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#devil
#dirty
#orgasm
#sex
358 reads
4 Comments
My Submissive Student

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#dirty
#erotic
#lust
#passion
263 reads
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Set Free

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#lover
308 reads
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Across your knees

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#erotic
#lust
#passion
#temptation
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