Poems About Autism Seeking Honest Critique
#Autism
oldmanG
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 7:45am
19th Nov 2024 7:45am
Momma’s Love is Enough
A momas love sometimes is enough
Little precious boy he’s my joy
He learns Chinese from grand pa
Around two years old world turns around
He stops talking no vocabulary
Starts grabbing and screaming
Where’s my little Angel
Tell him no and he bangs his head on the wall
Fits of rage and violence
There goes another door damaged
And holes punched out throughout the house
Put him in water and he’s like a dolphin
He’s so good meet special Olympics
Cuts the water with no hesitation ...
Little precious boy he’s my joy
He learns Chinese from grand pa
Around two years old world turns around
He stops talking no vocabulary
Starts grabbing and screaming
Where’s my little Angel
Tell him no and he bangs his head on the wall
Fits of rage and violence
There goes another door damaged
And holes punched out throughout the house
Put him in water and he’s like a dolphin
He’s so good meet special Olympics
Cuts the water with no hesitation ...
#Autism
#family
#love #mother
#love #mother
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oldmanG
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 4:05am
29th Oct 2024 4:05am
Red and Green
Red and Green
Red and Green within me
Sleep on a purple dream
Green relaxes me and me
Red is demon within me
Float on a puff of green
When I’m Red better watch out
Try to sleep Purple with you
Colors on Spectrum
Who is our audience that pays for it
Im Red and Green within me
You die for my former self
Im Autism within us
Everyone is on the Spectrum
Red and Green within me
Sleep on a purple dream
Green relaxes me and me
Red is demon within me
Float on a puff of green
When I’m Red better watch out
Try to sleep Purple with you
Colors on Spectrum
Who is our audience that pays for it
Im Red and Green within me
You die for my former self
Im Autism within us
Everyone is on the Spectrum
#alcohol
#Autism
#culture #marijuana
#culture #marijuana
82 reads
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wallyroo92
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 5:36pm
22nd Oct 2024 5:36pm
Save Me
I dreamt that you were six years old again
Yet somehow, I knew it was a dream
Subconsciously I was aware of our current time and place
But it didn’t matter
I was going to enjoy this little journey
You took my hand
Led me to the living room with all the toys
I sat with you
I hugged you
Your little face lit
Your bright smile
You spoke to me
I was happy in all the details of your face
Your innocence
I miss you being that little
I miss you all being that small
I held back my tears
Time has...
Yet somehow, I knew it was a dream
Subconsciously I was aware of our current time and place
But it didn’t matter
I was going to enjoy this little journey
You took my hand
Led me to the living room with all the toys
I sat with you
I hugged you
Your little face lit
Your bright smile
You spoke to me
I was happy in all the details of your face
Your innocence
I miss you being that little
I miss you all being that small
I held back my tears
Time has...
#Autism
#children
#memories
180 reads
14 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
29th Sep 2024 11:59pm
29th Sep 2024 11:59pm
A Day with No Words(Aidan)
A day with no words (Aidan)
Bright piece of sunshine
Lights up my life
Lonely family in the playground
Seems a little bit off
Grunts and stares
Comments and snickers
Go all around
Hand gestures and body language
Communicates what he wants
If he wants to speak
Hand him a tablet
I want French fries comes out
As people whisper and glare
Welcome to the world my family lives
From sunup to sundown
Not a word is spoken
But we’re talking
He looks like...
Bright piece of sunshine
Lights up my life
Lonely family in the playground
Seems a little bit off
Grunts and stares
Comments and snickers
Go all around
Hand gestures and body language
Communicates what he wants
If he wants to speak
Hand him a tablet
I want French fries comes out
As people whisper and glare
Welcome to the world my family lives
From sunup to sundown
Not a word is spoken
But we’re talking
He looks like...
#acceptance
#Autism
#family #love
#family #love
110 reads
4 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
21st Sep 2024 7:25pm
21st Sep 2024 7:25pm
Fragmented
embrace our puzzle
unique pieces fit as one
breaking the label
unique pieces fit as one
breaking the label
#Autism
#ignorance
#inequality #senryu
#inequality #senryu
90 reads
11 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
4th Sep 2024 7:05am
4th Sep 2024 7:05am
Caustic Authenticity
Can’t pretend to be autistic
I just am
This abnormality is caustic
Don’t you fret
It’s not contagious
Why tolerate
When you can isolate
It’s way better
Inclusion is just a
R I
T N
S G
of letters
I just am
This abnormality is caustic
Don’t you fret
It’s not contagious
Why tolerate
When you can isolate
It’s way better
Inclusion is just a
R I
T N
S G
of letters
#Autism
#disability
#identity #MentalHealth
#identity #MentalHealth
128 reads
7 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
16th Jun 2024 6:08pm
16th Jun 2024 6:08pm
In Exile
I know things got off on the wrong foot right from the start
At the time when I was young I just fell apart
Even after all the years of me trying to do what was right
Lately it just feels like your silence is out of spite
With every visit I loved our conversations and laughs
The quality time was more precious and unforgettable
And as you got older you became stronger and bolder
So I wrote you verses to make our relationship memorable
But something strange happened within the last few years
You’re so distant and quiet and won’t talk to...
At the time when I was young I just fell apart
Even after all the years of me trying to do what was right
Lately it just feels like your silence is out of spite
With every visit I loved our conversations and laughs
The quality time was more precious and unforgettable
And as you got older you became stronger and bolder
So I wrote you verses to make our relationship memorable
But something strange happened within the last few years
You’re so distant and quiet and won’t talk to...
#Autism
#father
#separation #son
#separation #son
224 reads
4 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
4th Jun 2024 2:45pm
4th Jun 2024 2:45pm
Worn Out
#Autism
#depression
#honesty
#MentalHealth
#TruthOfLife
97 reads
2 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
31st May 2024 8:35pm
31st May 2024 8:35pm
Void Of Solitude
no solace
from these
thoughts
where obvious traps
have been
sprung
where oblivion
seems only
a fingertip away
feelings
drain
to nothing
less
aware
of rxistence
walking
over
shallow graves
striking
how dark
becomes darker
when
you fight
alone
from these
thoughts
where obvious traps
have been
sprung
where oblivion
seems only
a fingertip away
feelings
drain
to nothing
less
aware
of rxistence
walking
over
shallow graves
striking
how dark
becomes darker
when
you fight
alone
#Autism
#depression
#loneliness #SelfWorth
#loneliness #SelfWorth
154 reads
6 Comments
Nixprty
Poem Published
10th May 2024 11:43pm
10th May 2024 11:43pm
Masking
I will be all you need.
Let me be useful
I have a purpose
I am perfect
I am calm
I am helpful
I am good
I am nice
I am quiet
I am still
I am happy
I am smart
I am creative
I’m normal.
I can be normal, I promise I’m trying please I can be good I can be normal
IAMNORMALIAMNORMALIAMNORMALIAMNORMALIMNORMALPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEICANDOITPLEASEPLEASEIMGOODICANBEGOODPLEASE.
Who am I?
Let me be useful
I have a purpose
I am perfect
I am calm
I am helpful
I am good
I am nice
I am quiet
I am still
I am happy
I am smart
I am creative
I’m normal.
I can be normal, I promise I’m trying please I can be good I can be normal
IAMNORMALIAMNORMALIAMNORMALIAMNORMALIMNORMALPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEICANDOITPLEASEPLEASEIMGOODICANBEGOODPLEASE.
Who am I?
#Autism
132 reads
2 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2023 7:20pm
2nd Dec 2023 7:20pm
Last Night on Revolution Road
Last night she came home with tears in her eyes
The years she spent coaching him came to an end
The little boy she aided through many challenges
Is growing up and in the future hopes to be a friend
She does the work with kindness in her heart
Giving them the tools so they can succeed in life
These children learn and develop new social skills
So that later on they can have productive lives
For all the days of frustrations there were also triumphs
It was a step forward toward an objective and common goal
Behavioral therapy requires...
The years she spent coaching him came to an end
The little boy she aided through many challenges
Is growing up and in the future hopes to be a friend
She does the work with kindness in her heart
Giving them the tools so they can succeed in life
These children learn and develop new social skills
So that later on they can have productive lives
For all the days of frustrations there were also triumphs
It was a step forward toward an objective and common goal
Behavioral therapy requires...
#love
#children
#Autism
172 reads
2 Comments
cheesa
Poem Published
26th Sep 2023 8:53am
26th Sep 2023 8:53am
Autistic me
Lifes been an echo
Inside a bubble
Full of trouble
And it bursts
Misunderstood
From the cradle to the grave
First steps to the Hurst
And it hurts
Inside a bubble
Full of trouble
And it bursts
Misunderstood
From the cradle to the grave
First steps to the Hurst
And it hurts
#depression
#Autism
#weakness
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