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where love leads
i do not know where
this road leads me
i only know
that i am going
i take my cues
from the director
i'm in the boat
but i'm not rowing
you move so nice
your looks seduce me
i want you so
but i can't let go
love's no small thing
so don't deceive me
i want to trust
it won't come easy
this road leads me
i only know
that i am going
i take my cues
from the director
i'm in the boat
but i'm not rowing
you move so nice
your looks seduce me
i want you so
but i can't let go
love's no small thing
so don't deceive me
i want to trust
it won't come easy
Published 5th Apr 2013
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Anonymous
5th Apr 2013 11:48pm
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6th Apr 2013 00:19am
Anonymous
6th Apr 2013 2:19am
Lovely title, & wonderful hope-filled opening stanza. Love the pic & the entire poem. I can so relate to the sentiments in that last insightful stanza. Great job, Faith! :)
Carlene
Carlene
9th Apr 2013 8:24pm
Thank you so much, Carlene. I always appreciate your feedback. It means a lot to me. xo
Faith
Faith
6th Apr 2013 1:27pm
Trust is such a difficult thing to give, for me it is anyway.
Another great emotional piece my friend :)
Another great emotional piece my friend :)
6th Apr 2013 10:26pm
6th Apr 2013 6:58pm
Trust grows with time,
love develops through nourishment.
Who knows where love leads, hopefully back to love!
This is written lovely, Faith! :)
love develops through nourishment.
Who knows where love leads, hopefully back to love!
This is written lovely, Faith! :)
6th Apr 2013 10:27pm
I apprecaite your wonderful remarks so much. Thank you, my friend! xo
Faith
Faith
