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A WORD WITH TABAN LO LIYONG
You began a sound poem…
- with purity, nothing had grown -
And ended it so…
- Impurity is free like your soul -
Between these lines you made bare
How cruel and worthless purity can be
And attributed worthiness to impurity
Your stand point is unshakably clear
And as a poet, I can swear
It is one of the best poems
I have ever got near.
But to crucify purity
And elevate impurity
Wouldn’t it be a sacrilege?
Like Eve eating the sacred fruit of knowledge?
- with purity, nothing had grown -
And ended it so…
- Impurity is free like your soul -
Between these lines you made bare
How cruel and worthless purity can be
And attributed worthiness to impurity
Your stand point is unshakably clear
And as a poet, I can swear
It is one of the best poems
I have ever got near.
But to crucify purity
And elevate impurity
Wouldn’t it be a sacrilege?
Like Eve eating the sacred fruit of knowledge?
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