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Shattered Illusions
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As the grievous tears stream down my shame filled face
Feels like my shattered heart is being ripped from my chest
No one or nothing can heal this bleeding wound
The unspeakable, deplorable failures make me want to disappear
I hate myself for my selfish, ignorant decisions that eat my soul
Melancholy and miserable at the regrettable mistakes that can't be taken back
Despondent and depressed crying, I am a weeping willow
I have disappointed and hurt every single person I love....why?
I chose the mind obliterating drugs, got caught in its wicked web
Dangerous emptiness weighs me down with poisoned, venomous guilt.
Published 5th Apr 2013
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Anonymous
5th Apr 2013 00:50am
Oh wow this is an awesome write....luv this...each line has so much pain....a painful fascination
5th Apr 2013 1:59am
5th Apr 2013 3:01pm
No one else can heal your wounds except yourself, but don't blame yourself...blame the circumstances, you're just an innocent victim! Always think positive to cast away the darkness
that shrouds your guilt. But in the end, your feeling still bleeds.
Did I say that? Just got carried away with your nicely written poem and what an interesting structure!
that shrouds your guilt. But in the end, your feeling still bleeds.
Did I say that? Just got carried away with your nicely written poem and what an interesting structure!
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Jan 2019 2:45am
6th Apr 2013 9:39pm
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