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Powerful Emotions
Constantly wishing you were here to hold my hand,
Peacefully, as we walk along the beach in the sand.
You are always on my lonely, troubled mind,
I know that you are special and unique, one of a kind.
Waiting for the glorious time that you are back in my life,
Counting the endless days away 'til the day I become your wife.
Romantic, exotic memories of our past won't fade,
The foundations of our genuine love are solidly laid.
This love is a gift that should never be taken for granted,
Believe that I'll not allow seeds of doubt to be planted.
Death before dishonor was how I was raised to be,
Know in your heart that you will be the only man for me.
Wanting nothing more than to prove that my love is patient,
Dreaming of my angel from above, who was heaven sent.
As we whisper sweet nothings of our total devotion,
The sky brightens since I know you are my magic potion.
We will traverse this winding maze called fate,
This mystical journey has led me to my soulmate.
Shattered and broken illusions have brushed our road,
With you, I have faith in our future yet to be told.
Published 3rd Apr 2013
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3rd Apr 2013 7:31pm
Damn. I'm sorry, but that is all I can say for this. Amazing. Maybe next time, no italics? Just for those who have bad eyes.. but great poem!
3rd Apr 2013 8:01pm
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3rd Apr 2013 10:28pm
I think this is my first time reading a poem in italic,
Pretty in my opinion, and this poem is so heartfelt
Awwweeee.....enjoyed alot
Pretty in my opinion, and this poem is so heartfelt
Awwweeee.....enjoyed alot
3rd Apr 2013 11:20pm
Thank you so much, I am so glad I found some people with positive and useful comments. Because I'm always my own worst critic!
This poem made me cry. It expresses exackly what I am feeling right now in my life. BEAUTIFUL. I love it!
4th Apr 2013 6:58pm
Thank you so much!! Why do you feel that way? My fiance' is in prison right now, and most of my poems are wrote for him. It gave me chills when I read it made you cry :)
8th Apr 2013 6:40am
This so such pure raw honest emotion. Loved it as it took me back to moments of total trust with my knight. Ty syn
8th Apr 2013 7:20am
