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i want you
i want to see you,
i want you to hug me tightly,
i want you to embrace me,
touch me with those long hands
of yours.
i want to be in your bed tonight,
wishing that i heard you,
saying " i love you"
I wish you could know how it feels to be me,
a smell of a hot coffee,
aroma,
refreshing,
the smell of making love each other,
a smell of yours that was completely
in my mind,
can't take away of you,
but now it was over.
you leave me.
i want you to hug me tightly,
i want you to embrace me,
touch me with those long hands
of yours.
i want to be in your bed tonight,
wishing that i heard you,
saying " i love you"
I wish you could know how it feels to be me,
a smell of a hot coffee,
aroma,
refreshing,
the smell of making love each other,
a smell of yours that was completely
in my mind,
can't take away of you,
but now it was over.
you leave me.
Published 27th Sep 2010
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27th Sep 2010 2:47pm
It is very frustrating trying to hold unto love wish in itself is slippery.
Anyhow, the poet was able transfer what he felt to the reader... 'wishing that i heard you,
saying " i love you" '
Anyhow, the poet was able transfer what he felt to the reader... 'wishing that i heard you,
saying " i love you" '
27th Sep 2010 4:05pm
28th Sep 2010 1:47am
I read the one preceding this one..........a youthful sensualness; a wondering in your words. A sense of evolving, angst and desire...............
.......I'm still trying to decide how I feel about the abruptness in the final transition.
Good one : )
.......I'm still trying to decide how I feel about the abruptness in the final transition.
Good one : )
28th Sep 2010 9:18am
28th Sep 2010 4:51am
28th Sep 2010 9:19am
29th Sep 2010 2:31am
i'm 18 (not that older than you though)
I asked just because you are noticed for the young age from the «innocent» way you're expressing the feelings.
2nd Jan 2014 4:25am
this poem longs
for long
today’s world is not so strong
guys turning gays today
as gals want to have their own way
so to love one
under him do lay
else from a lovers bed stay away
you long for a long one
but silently play
with small words of longing this day
but 2013 has gone away
do long for more lust
in 2014 if you want a different way
as love between lesbians
is now leading a longing today
have a good day
for long
today’s world is not so strong
guys turning gays today
as gals want to have their own way
so to love one
under him do lay
else from a lovers bed stay away
you long for a long one
but silently play
with small words of longing this day
but 2013 has gone away
do long for more lust
in 2014 if you want a different way
as love between lesbians
is now leading a longing today
have a good day
