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It's not like any other
I go to bed thinking about it
I wake up wanting it
Why do you make me wait
Sometimes it gets too hot
But I want it in my mouth
My lips part as it gets close
Tongue resting on hardness
Filling my mouth with warmth
I swallow it deep in my throat
Creamy yet slightly bitter
The love I have for your taste
Is not like any other
Sweet hot coffee your great
I wake up wanting it
Why do you make me wait
Sometimes it gets too hot
But I want it in my mouth
My lips part as it gets close
Tongue resting on hardness
Filling my mouth with warmth
I swallow it deep in my throat
Creamy yet slightly bitter
The love I have for your taste
Is not like any other
Sweet hot coffee your great
Published 30th Mar 2013
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- Edited 30th Mar 2013 7:36am
30th Mar 2013 7:35am
I have the same passionate love of coffee..I can relate.
I like the way you keep it about other possibilities til the end..made my dirty mind think other things LOL
Well penned :-)
Welcome to DUP
I like the way you keep it about other possibilities til the end..made my dirty mind think other things LOL
Well penned :-)
Welcome to DUP
30th Mar 2013 2:36pm
Fellow coffee lover, thank you for your comment.
It's amazing how a dirty mind can take anything and make it filth....I'm the same way.Glad you liked it...:-)
It's amazing how a dirty mind can take anything and make it filth....I'm the same way.Glad you liked it...:-)
30th Mar 2013 7:32pm
Tommielynn, you might like to read my own poem, "Coffee", published 21st December.
Until I read to the end of this poem didn't cotton on it was coffee - sounded so much like a verse of sexual longing. You wordplay well!
Until I read to the end of this poem didn't cotton on it was coffee - sounded so much like a verse of sexual longing. You wordplay well!
30th Mar 2013 10:41pm
Thank you Solomon_Song
I read your poem, its very good!There's something about coffee that makes everything better. :)
I read your poem, its very good!There's something about coffee that makes everything better. :)
