orgasm haiku vi

The second line is excellent. Lyrical and compelling. The third one is appropriately vulgar, adding that dark, animalistic passion, which I love so much about your work, to the end of the piece.

I wrote that in an email to her just before she visited.. gotta love the animalistic in my work.. or at least give it some respect haha thanks jack

i like the rawness of the poem and how you say things as they are without the need of adding that something in order to make them seem prettier..
but somehow this rawness has it's own beauty

aw thanks for looking past the rawness.. or rather looking deeper into it and seeing the beauty.. yeah fuck pretty things :D

well as much as im far from ur writing and ignorant to  that side i would say short yet long and u gotta a poets balls hehe cheers mate  nice work

haha reminds me of a sculpture i made of hunter s. thompson.. on the base i painted the words "nice balls man" cause he had the gall to off himself.. takes some balls to pull the trigger.. though i did slowly 3 times and only killed my leg lol thanks and cheers!!

there's something fairytale-esque about that second line which I really like. I love reading these orgasm haikus you do...it's like all this feeling concentrated down into a sudden surge...just like cumming, but with words :)

beauty and the beast.. or the beast inside of beauty.. and yes i did ejaculate these words on to the page ;) you got it right on