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Obedience
Obedience is what I seek
Of this you do not speak
Your actions deserve correction
Red your ass’s complexion
Stinging whips fast across your ass
A lesson taught in class
Do as I say when I say it
Nipples will not be bit
To me you shall always listen
Wet pussy will glisten
Your hands now tied to the bed post
Pussy awaits your host
Of this you do not speak
Your actions deserve correction
Red your ass’s complexion
Stinging whips fast across your ass
A lesson taught in class
Do as I say when I say it
Nipples will not be bit
To me you shall always listen
Wet pussy will glisten
Your hands now tied to the bed post
Pussy awaits your host
Published 28th Mar 2013
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28th Mar 2013 4:58pm
23rd Apr 2013 10:51pm
24th Apr 2013 11:00am
Yes it can, but it's better from the dom side of things. My opinion of course. Glad you liked and thanks for the comment.
25th Apr 2013 3:51pm
I think it's great from either end!
Being told what to do is a different
kind of excitement BUT still just as thrilling
as being the one telling ...
Fantastic write..I am turned on just
from reading!!
Being told what to do is a different
kind of excitement BUT still just as thrilling
as being the one telling ...
Fantastic write..I am turned on just
from reading!!
25th Apr 2013 3:56pm
Now that is the response I like to hear from my writing. It is exciting either way, and usually enjoyed by both to have control every now and then.
