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In your arms i died

I lost myself tonight
in your arms
i died
for some reason everything felt right
the rhythm of your breathing
and the smell of your cologne
yet i saw no reflection of me in your eyes
so as i lay down
by your side
i keep trying
to tell myself it still feels right
even tho i know it all but a lie
because when i open my eyes
ill be left with nothing
but... last night



*lame really needs work but yep*
Written by Jasmine05 (Firebird)
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