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.:Mirror Image:.
Smooth, yet not too close…is that your angle?
You’re not an angel, no, not at all
You’ve always and in all ways made that call
The wrong one. Perhaps offering a joke with a little note
Something cute so you don’t miss a stroke
Playing at being a Hallmark card
One with a forged inscription of heaven
Nothing but deception
Counterfeit. You’re as crooked as you cum
Forever bent…needing to get some
We know that’s exactly why you hover
Yours or someone else’s lover
Your search for the one, two or more who’s willing to suffer
Your offer…of weakness
Your slickness; that’s all we’ve been seeing
You’re just a negligent human being
So atrociously phony and fallible
Chasing the gullible. Prone to making monstrous mistakes
Never doing what it takes. Least not for the greater good
Just inserting your wood for as long as you could
For as long as you can; you, calling yourself a man
No wings brushing up against those shoulders
You’ve got a flame that certainly smolders
Such a jerk; you and your asinine need to hurt
Just putting in the work
Need we go further?
Seems to have gotten worse as you’ve gotten older
For sure you’ve told her and her and…the next her again
Each time, claiming while aiming to be their friend
Without doubt, each one given over to listen
They with their common sense seemingly missing
Not realizing you’re such a philandering terror
Knew that for sure; though I’m only your mirror
Yet beside yourself no one else holds you dearer
As you wander again...not being clearer
..
photo: Loraine Reynolds
You’re not an angel, no, not at all
You’ve always and in all ways made that call
The wrong one. Perhaps offering a joke with a little note
Something cute so you don’t miss a stroke
Playing at being a Hallmark card
One with a forged inscription of heaven
Nothing but deception
Counterfeit. You’re as crooked as you cum
Forever bent…needing to get some
We know that’s exactly why you hover
Yours or someone else’s lover
Your search for the one, two or more who’s willing to suffer
Your offer…of weakness
Your slickness; that’s all we’ve been seeing
You’re just a negligent human being
So atrociously phony and fallible
Chasing the gullible. Prone to making monstrous mistakes
Never doing what it takes. Least not for the greater good
Just inserting your wood for as long as you could
For as long as you can; you, calling yourself a man
No wings brushing up against those shoulders
You’ve got a flame that certainly smolders
Such a jerk; you and your asinine need to hurt
Just putting in the work
Need we go further?
Seems to have gotten worse as you’ve gotten older
For sure you’ve told her and her and…the next her again
Each time, claiming while aiming to be their friend
Without doubt, each one given over to listen
They with their common sense seemingly missing
Not realizing you’re such a philandering terror
Knew that for sure; though I’m only your mirror
Yet beside yourself no one else holds you dearer
As you wander again...not being clearer
..
photo: Loraine Reynolds
Published 26th Mar 2013
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your wordplay! *squeezes you*
amazing how this feels like absolute accusation up til the end when it turns into complete realization.
have a felt something similar? yes
but without the mirror :P
amazing how this feels like absolute accusation up til the end when it turns into complete realization.
have a felt something similar? yes
but without the mirror :P
27th Mar 2013 12:53pm
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ha, ah yes.
realization of what's obvious v. the being oblivious to one's own lust and/or addictions
all eyes must remain open to see
circumvent denial and
want change
thanks for reading one-three
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ha, ah yes.
realization of what's obvious v. the being oblivious to one's own lust and/or addictions
all eyes must remain open to see
circumvent denial and
want change
thanks for reading one-three
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Anonymous
27th Mar 2013 12:26pm
I know the type you speak of, and I love this write :-)
27th Mar 2013 1:01pm
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yes. to know 'em is to know enough to remove yourself from their view unless continuing is of benefit
in other words, b-carefull of what we look at
hahaha
glad you loved the write miki
= )
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yes. to know 'em is to know enough to remove yourself from their view unless continuing is of benefit
in other words, b-carefull of what we look at
hahaha
glad you loved the write miki
= )
