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"All My Smiles"
For the first time
in my life
I think I
have noticed wrinkles by
my eyes,
but I
do not mind
because I know they were caused by
all my
smiles.
in my life
I think I
have noticed wrinkles by
my eyes,
but I
do not mind
because I know they were caused by
all my
smiles.
Published 25th Mar 2013
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26th Mar 2013 3:12am
Beautiful way to look at life's ageless wonder.
I smile because of this ink! :)
I smile because of this ink! :)
26th Mar 2013 7:01pm
20th Jun 2013 11:31pm
I dig it. A good sentiment.
It reads like your brain, I'm sure, which is why it reads at least somewhat awkwardly to me :p.
It reads like your brain, I'm sure, which is why it reads at least somewhat awkwardly to me :p.
21st Jun 2013 4:30pm
thanks your love is so unkind.
the lines are that way for rhyme- even though a lot of it is slant rhyme.
the lines are that way for rhyme- even though a lot of it is slant rhyme.
