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Hearts Together
A boy; a girl
they meet; they love
their love is one.
One day; the boy
he cheats; she knows
his love; but gone
her love; still true
his heart is one
her heart is two.
Her knie; her throat
her knife; now red
her throat; now cleaved
with no goodbyes.
He knows; her death
his love; renewd
and now; he cries
His gun; his mouth
silver bullet; painted red
dirty mouth; soaked in blood
And their hearts; now they lay.
Still together; still in love.
they meet; they love
their love is one.
One day; the boy
he cheats; she knows
his love; but gone
her love; still true
his heart is one
her heart is two.
Her knie; her throat
her knife; now red
her throat; now cleaved
with no goodbyes.
He knows; her death
his love; renewd
and now; he cries
His gun; his mouth
silver bullet; painted red
dirty mouth; soaked in blood
And their hearts; now they lay.
Still together; still in love.
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Re: Hearts Together
22nd Mar 2013 3:23pm
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Anonymous
23rd Mar 2013 2:07am
Oh wow! This so sad but beautiful I've story. Well done! :)
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23rd Mar 2013 3:04am
Re: Hearts Together
31st Mar 2013 9:07am
His gun; his mouth
silver bullet; painted red
dirty mouth; soaked in blood
Unique style, well written.
silver bullet; painted red
dirty mouth; soaked in blood
Unique style, well written.
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Re: Hearts Together
31st Mar 2013 9:54am
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3rd Apr 2013 7:15pm
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9th Apr 2013 10:07am
Re: Hearts Together
15th Apr 2013 5:10pm
This is a very neat way to write it. I like the feeling in it and its teresting to feel. good job
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re: Re: Hearts Together
lol yea, my teenage brain made a breakup out to be more than it was. thats what it is, really. much thanks
Re: Hearts Together
15th Apr 2013 5:14pm
This is pretty cool and I've never really seen this style (though I haven't read much) but I still like the poem. It's something that happens a lot and if not, most people think of this.
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Re: Hearts Together
15th Apr 2013 5:16pm