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Tortured
The skin was condemned and was flayed,
The veins that were vivid still pulsed,
All who did hear were dismayed,
And all who did see were repulsed,
The pain does attempt to represent,
The holder’s unpleasant descent,
Into pages of tales of honour now lost,
The deed, the judgement, the cost.
The veins that were vivid still pulsed,
All who did hear were dismayed,
And all who did see were repulsed,
The pain does attempt to represent,
The holder’s unpleasant descent,
Into pages of tales of honour now lost,
The deed, the judgement, the cost.
Published 22nd Mar 2013
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5th Aug 2014 11:44pm
All caps, commas & a shortened format??? Follow a rule, any rule. I dare you! Very broken as is, was hard to finish. Sometimes personal sentiment doesn't quite reach the surface. Keep grindin
