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Deeper the cut
The deeper I cut
The better I feel
The longer they bleed
More relief for me
The bigger the cut
The larger the scar
The sharper the blade
Even more blood lost
The light is fading
The dark is coming
The sun is falling
My life is leaving
The deeper the cut
The more the blood
The end of my life
The better I feel
The longer they bleed
More relief for me
The bigger the cut
The larger the scar
The sharper the blade
Even more blood lost
The light is fading
The dark is coming
The sun is falling
My life is leaving
The deeper the cut
The more the blood
The end of my life
Published 19th Mar 2013
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20th Mar 2013 1:33am
I rather enjoy slitting my wrist but suicide seems ignorant. Love the poem though :D
20th Mar 2013 1:45am
Thanks! I write about suicide so the emotion comes out without actually doing it.
20th Mar 2013 1:55am
20th Mar 2013 1:59am
20th Mar 2013 4:00am
its crazy for me to see how many people struggle with depression and cutting... this site has really opened my eyes to show me that im really not alone in my feelings
oh and this is a nice poem :)
oh and this is a nice poem :)
20th Mar 2013 5:32am
20th Mar 2013 5:33am
20th Mar 2013 5:44am
i can feel the pain, pretty positive this the only thing ive read on here that made my eyes water.. probably because i was right where you were months ago but i havent cut in months. that just hit home to how ive felt about it for so long. positive vibes tho, try to smile im sure youre deserving. also if you ever want to talk about anything send me a message pleasee.
good writee
good writee
20th Mar 2013 5:53am
Thanks for the support. Seriously means a lot to me. Just thanks for the whole comment made my day.
24th Mar 2013 11:47pm
you are an amazing writer i love your poems this one has to be my favorite so far!
