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Bitten by the hand that fed you
Some folks are writing about their internal stress
Others pen amore
lost
needed
unrequited and so on
And there will always be the detail rich
vista descriptions
Urban
Suburban
Countryside
Nothing wrong with this
Standard time tested bard fodder
But I think encountering something new
Something that only sleeps in the box
Something that is not enveloped by it
I think that could be invigorating
A piece about how the hungry family
next door
was grateful for the shared dinner of
potato and meat stew
Now that would be unique
And if there must be a verse about how
the dog ran off to make it happen
Well I guess that would be near enough to personal pain and the sacrifice
of love
to frame it all up
as poetry
Others pen amore
lost
needed
unrequited and so on
And there will always be the detail rich
vista descriptions
Urban
Suburban
Countryside
Nothing wrong with this
Standard time tested bard fodder
But I think encountering something new
Something that only sleeps in the box
Something that is not enveloped by it
I think that could be invigorating
A piece about how the hungry family
next door
was grateful for the shared dinner of
potato and meat stew
Now that would be unique
And if there must be a verse about how
the dog ran off to make it happen
Well I guess that would be near enough to personal pain and the sacrifice
of love
to frame it all up
as poetry
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