Verbal resurrection

I love that 'she does.' cause it implies a whole existence in a two short firm little words. The three lines, the three she's, the wordlessness but soundfulness, reminds me of John Berryman's Dream Songs, and the trinity that fills up those strange introspections.
Also, lots of thank you's for sharing the link; had a quick skim through and sounds fascinating. Bookmarking it to read later.

Purals with apostrophies? Tut. :)

The piece would have been much more provocative as a poem without the link for what it references.

I like it regardless, and because I like the poem, I'll not use your link.

Mr A: Ha! I see what you mean.. I was quite tempted not to use the link actually but i did eventually. I don't usually give out links but i kind of felt that i had to use it for this one. The link is for those who are interested in learning what i actually meant by writing this little piece..  
Thank you regardless of the fact that you won't be using the link. Actually, i thank you even more for that.

Merda: Thank you for suggesting John Berryman. I think im going to like him. Also, thank you for your wonderful interpretation and recollection of Berryman. A little insight for you, the three she are references to 3 different people apart from the she of the second line.  
I hope you enjoy the book chapters.! Please let me know of how you thought of them.

Read a few of the chapters the other night - found them really interesting, especially a bit about how we formulate ideas for what we want to say in advance, and it all just stands there in our minds waiting in a mute jumble holding its breath. Thanks again for sharing. :)

Im glad that you liked it. The book itself is called 'time lived without it's flow'.  What fascinated me was the chapter on grief. If you come across it. Read it and you won't regret it.

Hmm I've read it a few times yet still don't quite understand it.

it's not always about understanding a poem. Thank you.

Oh this one is certainly one of your best. The very first line is so eternal that it sets the very much of your tone. A great tribute to someone who is undoubtedly the greatest:-)

Thank you Anando!

Ophie, I return from a long siesta and you knock my socks off... sometimes simplistic wit is the grandest belle of all. I have warm fuzzies now :)

My lovely Aish welcome back from your long and needed break. Well Im glad you have warm fuzzies so your stay in DU, this time, might be a permanent one.

I don't think I can refuse you :)

that's the plan :)

opheliac:

Short, but you get right to the point.  Excellent images and metaphors.


marcella1

Thank you Marcella. It's always a pleasure and honour to receive feedback from you.

i have never read this before
but i see now u post no more