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the blinds hang preariously
my mind urns for routine
sleep has come early though tonight it comes surly
off and on
what a memory, if not within i want comfort for who is my friend
the cracks between the blinds shine dull street light past eyes mine
need time like ivy needs vine
i want to cut it short some days but today im fine
ill find a crash landing tomorrow will recover spine
im
a little but of a puddle waiting for structure
was a routine away from friend denial, wanted to break away so today i find em, flux in a mind dont mind the trouble
were wrapped in cacoon walls hurts breaking close but grows together
my mind urns for routine
sleep has come early though tonight it comes surly
off and on
what a memory, if not within i want comfort for who is my friend
the cracks between the blinds shine dull street light past eyes mine
need time like ivy needs vine
i want to cut it short some days but today im fine
ill find a crash landing tomorrow will recover spine
im
a little but of a puddle waiting for structure
was a routine away from friend denial, wanted to break away so today i find em, flux in a mind dont mind the trouble
were wrapped in cacoon walls hurts breaking close but grows together
Published 12th Sep 2010
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10th Aug 2011 10:08am
i think i like this for the thought and placement that went into each misplacement of letter or rearrangement of words...it's odd, yes, but the title enhances the beauty of it. i'm glad i tripped over this little gem, thanks. [:
