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Need Is To Be Alone
I always told myself I dont need someone to help me believe.
Then I felt lonely
Like i really needed someone to hold on to
But I got no one!
Now what can i do?
I always told myself, youre fine on your own
Then I realized there was no body home
I would always walk straight with a smile on my face
In a terrible place
but i couldnt see
The anger coming..
Then i would ask myself
Why is it like this?
I know it can be better then this like i always try
I end up asking myself
Why can it just let me be...
Then I felt lonely
Like i really needed someone to hold on to
But I got no one!
Now what can i do?
I always told myself, youre fine on your own
Then I realized there was no body home
I would always walk straight with a smile on my face
In a terrible place
but i couldnt see
The anger coming..
Then i would ask myself
Why is it like this?
I know it can be better then this like i always try
I end up asking myself
Why can it just let me be...
Published 4th Mar 2013
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4th Mar 2013 3:12pm
A beautiful write !.., i loved the lines
"I would always walk straight with a smile on my face
In a terrible place
but i couldnt see
The anger coming"
I feel ive been there many times .
Thankyou for sharing
"I would always walk straight with a smile on my face
In a terrible place
but i couldnt see
The anger coming"
I feel ive been there many times .
Thankyou for sharing
4th Mar 2013 10:17pm
1st Feb 2014 1:40am
I find you astounding. Not just because of the overt beauty of your poetry but also the way your obvious desire for the truth. This is shown by you deciding to accept candor concerning your poetry.
6th Feb 2014 9:26am
Thanks. :)
Ya! I tend to be very honest in some of my poetry. I try.
Ya! I tend to be very honest in some of my poetry. I try.
